READ!!!!!!: ok people....this poem was entered for a poetry convention and my other poem ' just to say hi' just got in a book!!! I am soooooo happy!!!! thx for reading!!! it means alot to me!!!. this was original but i didn't have mic. word so fictionpress wouldn't upload it for me...so now this about yumi and shishio....
Plz....just read
Blind
I see no stars at night
I see no light in day
I wish to hold you tight
because your always in my way
It just keeps on raing in my hell
It seemed like you loved me
but you didn't catch me as I fell
now you just won't let me be
I can hear your thoughts
I can feel your pain
I can see the dark you brought
But can you see me go insane?
Did you see my eyes as I cried?
Because I looked at you when I died.
Plz tell me what you think!