there are spelling errors I know and I like them right where they are

I would like to thank; mesa, meso, and kashi for flaming (those are welcome) and a very special thanks to my favorite reviewer and friend NEFERKIMI and also a special thanks to BLACKBALLOON

Yay this is my sorta first story. Well I had one out called why cant you hear me but discontinued it when I found that it both made no sense and that there were way to many errors. anyway enjoy and please review (and if sara is reading this DON'T LAUGH)

Disclaimer; I do not own yugioh

The everlasting tears of the immortal

/I thought I heard the rustle of angel's wings/

wrapped in dark late at night....Like the sound of snow falling on pine in the deep forest/

Bakura turned to see if he could find the source...impossible. He picked up the machete again.

At first it was like a puff of white smoke. But then it silently took form. A shimmering slender gray figure with wings, wide bright white feathery wings. The tomb raider stared wide-eyed in wonder. "chico..." The apparition nodded, he wore a sad smile.

Shimmering silver tears dripped from his eyes to land in small silver puddles on the floor. Not an inch from the edge of the white robe that hovered slightly above the ground, hiding his feet entirely and ending in a gray mist as did the ends of his hair fingers and the tips of his wings.

As bakura rose to his feet ryou looked upon him with gentle compassion. "chico you...died, you shouldn't be hear......why now" Ryou spoke in a distant whisper. "Bakura tamashii no hoka watashi no....yasumu anata watashi suru tsumori. Wakare o tsugeru.

Bakura stood there drained of all feeling hoping against the inevitable. Ryou placed a thin shimmering hand on bakura's shoulder and. Bakura felt a cool angelic breath on his forehead. the wind blew cold and melancholy in the dark.

Ryou suddenly disintegrated into a white smoky mist and blew away into the oceans, and the Earth's core disappearing as soon as he had appeared.

Leaving Bakura all alone with his knives and darkness.... but most of all ... alone.

This is kinda sappy I know

Dear readers this is a one shot (I think) any who

Chico – means little boy in spanish I diddnt know this until after I had already written this fic I thought it was pretty cute
Tamashii no hoka watashi no ...yasumu anata watashi suru tsumori. Wakare o tsugeru- this means,( other of my soul... I will miss you... farewell)

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