Ok....well, it seems I left out my disclaimer in the last chapter so consider this one counting for both: I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho or any other Anime or cool show...yet. =)
Oh, and I just want to thank/ lavish praise on my reviewer SenshiSama. I know the last chapter was vague and a bit strange, but I was just figuring out the whole loading process thing. As it is I now have to go through notepad.
Another thing, just so everyone knows:
This story is revolving around my OC's, but it's how they deal with and interact with the original Yu Yu gang. Because of this, I have to give an explaination of where they come from so that's what the first two chapters are. Each indevidual Charecter will have thier own intro, but this is thier "birth" as it were.
One more thing: I spell names how they sound. This makes it easier on me and the reader. Problem? Too bad.
Thanks.
Key:
Italics = personal thoughts
Bold = person speaking telepathically or used for emphasis
------Blah------ = author's note for claricfication or to let you know something important.
Questions welcome, as well as critisisim. Flames will be tolerated, but not apreciated.
Chapter 2 : Changed....
Reaching for that power once again she stabbed it into the power source that was about to be released in one destructive flash, pulling it into herself. THE AGONY! Pain like she had never imagined, like nothing I have ever…, but I have to! Pushing away the pain she pulled on the power desperately, but she knew that only one person would not be able to channel it all. So let there be more! She heard herself scream with the pain as she tore apart, body, mind, soul, shattering into hundreds of selves and appearing as pinpricks of light. Most shot through the ceiling and soil above, scattering across the world taking large portions of the explosive power with them. Two remained behind to absorb the last little bits.
As the light she had created faded, the group that had barged in moments, that seemed like an eternity, ago slowly gathered themselves up from where they had been flung against the walls. The machines all around the room were fried. The Plexiglas tube was melted and solidified into a puddle on the ground around the small platform that had held it. Also, there were now two beings where before there had only been one. Each almost completely identical, but somewhat different from the being that had been there before.
Before, there had been a young woman about twenty-one who had blond hair, blue eyes, and who was wearing a red silk two piece night ware set (spaghetti string top with pants). Ok, that hadn't changed, but where she had been slightly over weight, they were perfectly proportioned. Where she had been a dirty blond with short straight hair, now they were golden blond with white blond highlights. One's hair was wavy and short, the others curly and long. Before she had pale blue-green eyes, now one had sapphire the other emerald green. The night-ware once barely fit and in all the wrong places, now they wore it like it had been tailored to them.
Slowly the leader of the group edged forward and placed his forefingers on each of their necks, testing for a pulse. Thu-thump……Thu-thump…. a weak beat met his senses in each. He glanced back to his companions, "Ok. So…anyone have any idea what the hell just happened?" They all look around at each other, all totally confused and still in a bit of a daze. "Guess not", he murmured under his breath. "The question right now, I believe, Yuskay, is not what has happened, but what shall we do now?", a fairly attractive, tall, red head guy spoke up addressing their leader.
Said leader thought as he fixed his gelled back hair. "Well, Boton, Yukina, you stay and help these two," he gestured to the two figures on the platform. The two blue haired women nodded. "Call Koenma and have him send someone to take a look at this machinery. Maybe they can figure out what happened. Hiei, Kurama, Kuabara, and me will go after the good Doctor. We'll contact you in an hour at the latest." "Right, if your not back by then I'll call the others and send them in after you! I don't care if they say they can't come one more time, I'll make them!," the Darker blue haired girl known as Boton replied fiercely. "Riiiight, anyway come on guys.", Yuskay gestured for them to follow as he dashed down the escape tunnel after their prey.
Yukina, the lighter haired girl, left to go contact Koenma while Boton examined the girls. They seem healthy enough, she thought, for being in the center of a spirit force explosion equivalent to a small H-bomb. She laid them out in a more comfortable position than the graceless piles they had fallen in after the explosion. That's when she noticed the only real difference between the two: a ring. On the woman who had wavy short hair there was an engagement ring. The other woman's hands were bare. "Hmmm.", she murmured. Her thoughtful musings were interrupted, however, as Yukina returned. With her was no other than Lord Koenma himself. His form now permanently that of a young man due to extreme circumstances that had occurred at the last dark tournament.
------Not the one in the series. Instead, the one after that------
Following their Lord, came multiple ogre and demon technicians. As they began to sort through all the machinery and (mostly) junk that was left of the evil Doctor Gikan's lab, he strode over to the waiting Boton and her charges. "So Boton, Yukina tells me that there are two mortal women responsible for saving your lives. Are those them?", he inquired. As he glanced down at them, they stirred. Groggily the wavy haired one opened her eyes revealing them to be a sparkling Sapphire blue. She groaned and closed her eyes as she reached up to rub her temples. The curly haired woman also groaned, but reached up to rub then cover her eyes without opening them.
"Wha…?" the blue eyed, blond beauty managed to mumble. "Shhhh, just relax. Everything will be ok." Boton reassured. Suddenly both women tensed and shot up into a sitting position, nearly knocking Boton down. They both opened their eyes and turned to stare at each other. Now the other's eye color was revealed to be a rich emerald green. For a few moments they just seemed to stare at each other before bursting out laughing. Both had beautiful yet distinct tones that made all those around them feel suddenly a bit better.
While to everyone else only moments had passed, much longer had passed to the two new beings. They had held an entire conversation, which went something like this:
------By the way, Blue and Green refer to thier eye colors to distinguish one from the other.------
Blue- Ow…feels like my head exploded, then did a rewind and sucked back in, only no longer fitting right.
Green- Yeah, I feel like a cartoon who swallows a bomb. You know, wherethey get all big before shrinking back and with smoke out their ears…
------This is where they both bolt up and stare at each other.------
Blue- Uh, who are you?
Green- Hmmm, I think I was called…Jessie? Something like that, can't remember that well. Hmmm that should bother me, but it somehow doesn't.
Blue- Yah, something else that should bother you: my name is Jessie. Hey, you….
Green- What?
Blue- I… I think you are me. I-I mean, I get this funny feeling…
Green- Hey! What did I, err, we last think of?
Blue- There was too much energy, I-we couldn't handle it as one person so..
Both- Let there be more!!!
Green- We must have split into two to handle the energy flow!
Blue- You sure it's only two? I have this strange feeling that there are many parts of me missing.
Green- Yah, I have this weird tug towards you and at the same time this tug elsewhere…
Blue- Ditto, like there's this web and we're only part of it. Um, how are we talking? I don't see your lips moving and I don't feel my own.
Both- Telepathy! Cool!!!!!!
------This is where they laugh.------
Green- I think I should have a different name than you.
Blue- Why?
Green- For one thing, there can only be one Jessie Darl, Mike can only have one wife, and I seem to have only vague memories of our past while you remember it all. Besides You are the one still wearing the ring.
Blue- But what about you? What will you call yourself then?
Green- What about our/your middle name? We've always liked it anyways, and I won't really be lying when I say it's my name.
Blue/Jessie- Ok. So, Renea (Ren-ay) how about we start talking out loud? These guys are starting to look worried.
Green/Renea- Sure, hey that guy staring at us is pretty cute….
Blue/Jessie- Down girl!
The women laugh again and turn towards said cute guy. "Hey there handsome.", Renea greets him. Jessie elbows her in the side, but she only grins. "Sorry we freaked you. My name is Jessie and this flirt is Renea.", she stated. "Who do we have the pleasure of meeting?", Renea asks coyly, earning another elbow in the ribs. "My dear ladies, I am Lord Koenma of the spirit realm.", he states with a short bow. "This is Boton and this is Yukina.", he introduces, gesturing at them in turn.
------For the sake of not getting everyone confused, Jessie will still be referred to as Blue and Renea as Green when speaking to each other (telepathically), for now. Also, name of person "talking" will be in bold.------
Green- Oooh, a Lord, I like the sound of that, but spirit world?
Blue- Well those creepy critters all around us have to come from somewhere. That's probably where that doctor and freaky three eyed guy came from. Hold on, I'll ask…
"Ah, spirit world?" Jessie hesitantly questioned.
Green- Short and to the point I see
Blue- Shut up.
"Yes, well, we'll come to that later. Right now I need you to tell us what you remember last.", he hedged.
Green- What, you wanna lie to this hottie? What would we tell him?
Blue- Man, you moved on fast. How vague are your memories of Mike?
Green- Very vague actually, I know little beyond the fact that he is your husband. So can I get on with my life? It's better this way anyway you know. You didn't answer my question: what do we tell him?
Blue- Whatever. How about I tell him I last remember fighting for my life in my home against monster men and you tell him you don't really remember anything specific.
Green- Well that is true, vague, but true.
"Well, I was at home getting ready for bed. Then some freaks broke into my house and attacked me. I fought for my life, kicked some ass, but got taken down by a dart thing anyway.", Jessie replied bluntly to Koenma's question. He turned to Renea. "I have no clue. No specific memories, just my name and hers.", she nodded towards Jessie.
Koenma pursed his lips and looked thoughtful. "And how do you," he looked at Jessie, "know hers?", he nodded at Renea. Before either could reply, Boton interrupted, "Well, for now, how about we get you somewhere a little safer. I am sure you two would like to get into something…a little more appropriate." I wouldn't mind you both wearing that a little longer, or maybe less… Koenma thought privately. Aloud he said, "Very well. Take them back to the spirit world and see them comfortably settled for the remainder of the night. I will stay to oversee the investigation here. In the morning, you two lovely ladies can join me for breakfast and I can tell you the results." "Yes Lord Koenma.", Boton bowed and turned to the now twin women, "Please follow me."
First Jessie, then Renea managed to get to their feet. Renea "accidentally" wobbling a bit, causing Koenma to grab her elbow to support her. "Thanks.", she murmured. Jessie rolled her eyes, shish, I don't know how she suddenly became a shameless flirt. I didn't know I had it anywhere in me. Must be somewhere from my subconscious. Sighing, she turned and followed Boton, forcing Renea to follow. Shish, Renea thought, didn't think I was such a stick in the mud. Must have something to do with my subconscious.
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