On Fanfiction:
Angel of Passion- Thanx a lot for your comment. This was the very first fic I wrote so I'm glad it's ok. It's taking a long time to get chappies up though, and after this chappie I'm going to take a break until I think of wat to write. I 'm all out of ideas of wat I should add. If you have suggestions e-mail me plz!!!
Pharaohs Angel- yes he finally has a friend. As I said above I will be taking a break from this fic, so if you have ideas plz e-mail me and I'll add them.
I need a little help, cause I really want to finish this for dedicated reviewers like you guys!!
On Mediaminer: I'd like to thank 'the pest' for my first ever flame! (If you don't want to hear my ranting then scroll down now and read the story)
ranting When I first read it I was shocked and hurt, that someone actually thought my story sucked that much. I mean it's not like I haven't gotten low ratings but they were just from my friends joking around. I think I first felt shocked and hurt because everyone else who reviewed seemed to really like it, then this person comes on and says everything is crap. I can and will accept flames, I just wish that instead of saying everything was bad they could comment on something or at least tell me what I did wrong so I could change and improve it. I mean they rated my spelling and grammar low, a six , I checked it twice what more can a person do. The thing that's funny is that they said my creativity was a 9 yet the enjoyment factor was a 1. LOL end ranting
I think I took that rather well (LOL) Also a big thank you goes out to Arekya- I don't really know what the pairings should be if any (I'm new at this) but you could e-mail me some suggestions if you like Kristy200226aol.com Originally the 'boss' was going to be Yami but I think I changed my mind you'll have to wait and see. Of course you can be in it ,(but it might have to be a small part, give me time to think) I'm still trying to figure out how to put Yami and Bakura in it as well Thanx to my other reviewers on facfiction.net as well
Disclaimer: I do not own anything that does not belong to me (basically everything that has to do with Yu-Gi-Oh)
Now Back to the story(just a short chappie until I think of what to write next)
Chapter 9- Leaving the Hospital
The next day Yugi was woken up early. The nurse checked his vitals, all the while she talked about the new life he was going to have living with his Uncle, and cousins. Yugi was wondering what she was talking about, he didn't have any living relatives. When he told her this she just smiled and told him that the four teenagers that had brought him to the hospital had told everyone that he wouldn't know them, but they were sent to bring him home with them, so he wouldn't have to live on the streets. When she told him this Yugi looked really confused, then it dawned on him that they weren't allowed to take anyone out of the hospital unless they were family. His kidnappers must be trying to pass him off as their distant cousin. He decided that if he was going to escape them he would have to tell the doctors that he had no idea who these people were, and hope that she believed him.
As he was thinking he was already wheeled out the front of the hospital. He had already said goodbye to Ryou, and had a duel monster card to remember him by. Tea and Mai had gone to get the car, while Joey and Tristan stayed with Yugi and chatted with the doctor. As the car pulled up the doctor gave Yugi a hug and told him to behave himself, with his uncle. He decided that now was the time to act. "But...." He started, but was cut off by Joey lifting him out of the wheel chair, and Tristan giving him a dirty look behind the doctors back. "...I liked it here". He finished weakly. He couldn't do it. Why couldn't he tell the nice doctor that he was being kidnapped right in front of her. "Aww, aren't you the sweetest boy", she said. "Sorry, but we got to go" stated Joey. "Alright, take care" said the doctor as they got all settled and drove off. She hoped that Yugi would have fun at his cousins house and that he would stop having this fantasy that he was being kidnapped. She liked Yugi, she wasn't sure why. It could be his big violet puppy dog eyes, or his soft spoken personality. Whatever it was she hoped he would be ok. And she walked back into the hospital to help other patients.
As you can probably tell I don't know what to write I'm kind of making this up as I go from here on out If you have any suggestion then please review or you can e-mail me at Kristy200226aol.com Thanx
Angel of Passion- Thanx a lot for your comment. This was the very first fic I wrote so I'm glad it's ok. It's taking a long time to get chappies up though, and after this chappie I'm going to take a break until I think of wat to write. I 'm all out of ideas of wat I should add. If you have suggestions e-mail me plz!!!
Pharaohs Angel- yes he finally has a friend. As I said above I will be taking a break from this fic, so if you have ideas plz e-mail me and I'll add them.
I need a little help, cause I really want to finish this for dedicated reviewers like you guys!!
On Mediaminer: I'd like to thank 'the pest' for my first ever flame! (If you don't want to hear my ranting then scroll down now and read the story)
ranting When I first read it I was shocked and hurt, that someone actually thought my story sucked that much. I mean it's not like I haven't gotten low ratings but they were just from my friends joking around. I think I first felt shocked and hurt because everyone else who reviewed seemed to really like it, then this person comes on and says everything is crap. I can and will accept flames, I just wish that instead of saying everything was bad they could comment on something or at least tell me what I did wrong so I could change and improve it. I mean they rated my spelling and grammar low, a six , I checked it twice what more can a person do. The thing that's funny is that they said my creativity was a 9 yet the enjoyment factor was a 1. LOL end ranting
I think I took that rather well (LOL) Also a big thank you goes out to Arekya- I don't really know what the pairings should be if any (I'm new at this) but you could e-mail me some suggestions if you like Kristy200226aol.com Originally the 'boss' was going to be Yami but I think I changed my mind you'll have to wait and see. Of course you can be in it ,(but it might have to be a small part, give me time to think) I'm still trying to figure out how to put Yami and Bakura in it as well Thanx to my other reviewers on facfiction.net as well
Disclaimer: I do not own anything that does not belong to me (basically everything that has to do with Yu-Gi-Oh)
Now Back to the story(just a short chappie until I think of what to write next)
Chapter 9- Leaving the Hospital
The next day Yugi was woken up early. The nurse checked his vitals, all the while she talked about the new life he was going to have living with his Uncle, and cousins. Yugi was wondering what she was talking about, he didn't have any living relatives. When he told her this she just smiled and told him that the four teenagers that had brought him to the hospital had told everyone that he wouldn't know them, but they were sent to bring him home with them, so he wouldn't have to live on the streets. When she told him this Yugi looked really confused, then it dawned on him that they weren't allowed to take anyone out of the hospital unless they were family. His kidnappers must be trying to pass him off as their distant cousin. He decided that if he was going to escape them he would have to tell the doctors that he had no idea who these people were, and hope that she believed him.
As he was thinking he was already wheeled out the front of the hospital. He had already said goodbye to Ryou, and had a duel monster card to remember him by. Tea and Mai had gone to get the car, while Joey and Tristan stayed with Yugi and chatted with the doctor. As the car pulled up the doctor gave Yugi a hug and told him to behave himself, with his uncle. He decided that now was the time to act. "But...." He started, but was cut off by Joey lifting him out of the wheel chair, and Tristan giving him a dirty look behind the doctors back. "...I liked it here". He finished weakly. He couldn't do it. Why couldn't he tell the nice doctor that he was being kidnapped right in front of her. "Aww, aren't you the sweetest boy", she said. "Sorry, but we got to go" stated Joey. "Alright, take care" said the doctor as they got all settled and drove off. She hoped that Yugi would have fun at his cousins house and that he would stop having this fantasy that he was being kidnapped. She liked Yugi, she wasn't sure why. It could be his big violet puppy dog eyes, or his soft spoken personality. Whatever it was she hoped he would be ok. And she walked back into the hospital to help other patients.
As you can probably tell I don't know what to write I'm kind of making this up as I go from here on out If you have any suggestion then please review or you can e-mail me at Kristy200226aol.com Thanx