Natural selection
Interpret as you will. Old-ish poem, with a style I don't use often... meh. Kinda horrid, but oh well. Review if you want, flame if you want, offer cricticism if you want... I'm more a reader than a writer, so all will be welcome. Personnally, this seems an InuKag to me, but I don't care if it's InuKag or InuKik. I just thing this is more likely or the two (no offense). IY and Kikyo didn't trust eachother enough first time around, and now there's a whole load of guilt, anger, and hate in the way. Kagome is almost like what Kikyo would be if she had trusted IY more. Just saying...
Or divine intervention
Doesn't matter, his heart had still died
Betrayal in his past
A broken heart to last
His emotions, away were cast
Demon unveiled
No one to break the seal
Locked on his human heart
Yet came a girl, girl who dared to feel
That his heart could be healed
So she assigned herself a part
In destiny's art
She set out to (and succeeded)
In healing a hanyous aching heart
So close your eyes
See love's demise? It's not happening this time.
And I can see angels in the sky
This time they don't cry
Tears of sorrow (pity) anymore.
A Feudal Fairytale, with a happy ending this time
And a girl who changed time.
Interpret as you will. Old-ish poem, with a style I don't use often... meh. Kinda horrid, but oh well. Review if you want, flame if you want, offer cricticism if you want... I'm more a reader than a writer, so all will be welcome. Personnally, this seems an InuKag to me, but I don't care if it's InuKag or InuKik. I just thing this is more likely or the two (no offense). IY and Kikyo didn't trust eachother enough first time around, and now there's a whole load of guilt, anger, and hate in the way. Kagome is almost like what Kikyo would be if she had trusted IY more. Just saying...