A/N- Thanks to all my reviewers. Even if there weren't that many. Your acknowledgement of my poem is complimented by my poetry skills.(if you don't understand that, Don't ask coz I know I don't.)

I got a lot of praise from my librarians at the school I go to. That was earlier in the day, before I wrote this poem. I wrote this in 15 minutes and I think it is good. So do all the librarians and so do two of the English teachers at my school. I was told the by two of them that I should continue to write. Well On with the poem.

Sirius

My heart Pines,

My Mind caught in the vines.

So confused,

No more amused.

Where have you gone?

While you're not here I mourn.

But A hope there still must be,

For your face I long to see.

You disappeared after that fight,

Just like that, gone in the night.

Are you dead and me in denial?

Or will you return in a little while?

A/N-So that is pretty Good Hey. Padfoot Lives (had to say that) For 15minutes it is done pretty good. So now Go down to the bottom of the page on the right hand side of the screen (your left) and click the button which says submit review and.... Presto You get a box in which you can comment about my poem. I would like everyone to review Constructive Criticism welcome, Preferably no flames but they are welcome to.