A/N: Hey everyone last time I posted a story that didn't turn out so well so here is that story again but revised
Summary: Basically this is the Pirates of the Caribbean movie with some added characters and twist.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of it besides Melanie, Matt, and Rachel
Just to clear everything up now here are the ages for the first part Melanie: 12 Elizabeth: 12 Will: 12 Matt: 12 Norrington 20 Gillete: 17 Will and Matt are twins along with Elizabeth and Melanie
Chapter 1:
Standing near the bow of the boat sailing from England to Port Royal were two little girls by the names of Melanie and Elizabeth Swann.
Young Elizabeth : [standing at the bow of a ship and singing] ...We pillage, we plunder, we rifle and loot. Drink up me 'earties yo ho! We kidnap and ravage and don't give a hoot. Drink up me 'earties yo ho! Yo ho, yo ho a pirate's life for me. We extort, we pilfer, we filch and sack. Drink up – [ Gibbs puts his hand on her shoulder which surprises her]
Gibbs : Quiet, missy! Cursed pirates sail these waters. You don't want to bring them down on us, now, do ya?
Norrington: Mr. Gibbs , that will do!
Gibbs : She was singing about pirates. Bad luck to be singing about pirates with us mired in this unnatural fog. Mark my words.
Norrington: Consider them marked. On your way.
Gibbs : Aye, Lieutenant. It's bad luck to have a woman on board, too... even a miniature one.
Young Elizabeth : I think it'd be rather exciting to meet a pirate.
Norrington: Think again, Miss Swann . Vile and dissolute creatures, the lot of them. I intend to see to it that any man who sails under a pirate flag or wears a pirate brand gets what he deserves – a short drop and a sudden stop. [ Elizabeth glances at Gibbs who mimes a hanging]
Governor Swann : Lieutenant Norrington , I appreciate your fervor, but I'm, uh, I'm concerned about the effect this subject will have upon my daughter.
Norrington: My apologies, Governor Swann .
Young Elizabeth : Actually, I find it all fascinating.
Governor Swann : Yes. That's what concerns me.
Young Elizabeth : [sees a parasol and then a piece of wreckage with a boy on it in the water] Look! A boy! And another boy There are boys in the water!
Norrington: Men overboard! Man the ropes. Fetch a Hook! Haul them aboard. [they get them on board] He's still breathing.
Gillete: This one is breathing two but not as well
Gibbs : [spots burning ship] Mary , Mother of God!
Governor Swann : What happened here?
Norrington: It's most likely the powder magazine. Merchant vessels run heavily armed.
Gibbs : A lot of good it did them. Everyone's thinking it. I'm just saying it. Pirates.
Governor Swann : There's no proof of that. It was probably an accident.
Norrington: Rouse the Captain immediately! Heave to and take in sail. Launch the boats.
Sailor: Heave to!
Governor Swann : Elizabeth , were is your sister {Calls out} Melanie Melanie
Young Melanie: {walks over to her father} Yes father
Governor Swann: I want you and Elizabeth to accompany the boys. They will be in your charge. Take care of them.
Young Melanie: ok father {they walk over to the boys}
Young Elizabeth : [Will awakes, grabbing her wrist] It's ok. My name's Elizabeth Swann and this is my sister Melanie. .
Young Will: W-W-Will Turner And that's my brother M-M-Matt. .
Young Elizabeth : Were watching over you, Will . [ Will faints, she notices medallion and Melanie notices the same medallion on Matt's neck they both examine them]
Young Melanie: You're p-pirates. [They hide them when Norrington approaches]
Norrington: Has he said anything?
Young Elizabeth : His name is William Turner . That's all I found out.
Young Melanie: And the other one is named Matt. They are brothers.
Norrington: [to sailors] Take them below.
Young Elizabeth: Would it be possible for I to go with them
Norrington: I suppose {walks away)
[Elizabeth goes below with the boys while Melanie studies one of the medallions closer and upon looking up she sees a ship with the black flag flying at its mast; she closes her eyes]
[End dream]
(A/N now to clarify the ages again: Melanie: 20 Elizabeth: 20 Will: 20 Matt: 20 Norrington 28 Gillete: 25)
[ Melanie awakes and decides to take out the medallion from a hiding place in her bureau drawer; she puts it on; there's a knock on the door]
Governor Swann : Melanie? Are you alright? Are you decent?
Melanie : [hides medallion in the bodice of her nightgown, throws on a robe] Yes, yes!
Governor Swann : Still abed at this hour? [opens the curtains and the window] It's a beautiful day. I have a gift for you. [reveals dress]
Melanie : Oh, it's beautiful!
Governor Swann : Isn't it?
Melanie: May I inquire as to the occasion?
Governor Swann : Does a father need an occasion to dote upon his daughter? [to the maids] Go on. Actually, I, um...I had hoped you might wear it for the ceremony today.
Melanie: The ceremony?
Governor Swann : Captain Norrington 's promotion ceremony.
Melanie : I knew it!
Governor Swann : Commodore Norrington, as he's about to become! [the maids lace Melanie up into a corset] A fine gentleman, don't you think? He fancies you, you know. Melanie? How's it coming?
Melanie: It's difficult to say.
Governor Swann : I'm told it's the latest fashion in London
Melanie : Well, women in London must've learned not to breathe.
Governor Swann. Well I have to go see too Elizabeth now come down stairs when you are ready -------------------------------------------------With Elizabeth--------------------------------------------------
[ Elizabeth awakes and decides to take out the medallion from a hiding place in her bureau drawer; she puts it on; there's a knock on the door]
Governor Swann : Elizabeth? Are you alright? Are you decent?
Elizabeth : [hides medallion in the bodice of her nightgown, throws on a robe] Yes, yes!
Governor Swann : Still abed at this hour ?just like your sister [opens the curtains and the window] It's a lovely day. I have a gift for you. [reveals dress]
Elizabeth : Oh, father is absolutely gorgeous Governor Swann : Isn't it?
Elizabeth: May I inquire as to the occasion?
Governor Swann : Funny Melanie asked me the same thing but seriously does a father need an occasion to dote upon his daughters? [to the maids] Go on. Actually, I, um...I had hoped you might wear it for the ceremony today just like your sister.
Elizabeth The ceremony?
Governor Swann : Captain Norrington 's and Lieutenant Gillete's promotion ceremony
Elizabeth : I knew it!
Governor Swann : Commodore Norrington, and Captin Gillete as they are about to become! [the maids lace Melanie up into a corset] Fine gentleman, don't you think?
Servant: Milord, you have a visitor.
[ Will studies a sconce and upon touching it, a piece comes off in his hand; he buries it in the vase that's holding canes and umbrellas]
Governor Swann : [walks downstairs after the servant] Ah, Mr. Turner , good to see you again.
Will: Good day, sir. I have your order. [opens case and takes out the sword]
Governor Swann : [takes the sword and unsheathes it] Well.
Will : The blade is folded steel. That's gold filigree laid into the handle. If I may. [balances the sword] Perfectly balanced. The tang is nearly the full width of the blade. [flips the sword and presents it gracefully to the Governor]
Governor Swann : [takes the sword] Impressive. Very impressive. Ah, now, Commodore Norrington is going to be very pleased with this. Do pass my compliments on to your Master. Hmm?
Will : I shall. A craftsman is always pleased to hear his work is appreciated.
Governor Swann : [enter Elizabeth and Melanie ] Oh, Elizabeth, Melanie , you look absolutely stunning.
Elizabeth : Will! It's so good to see you. I had a dream about you last night.
Will : About me?
Governor Swann : Yes, well, is that entirely proper for you to...?
Elizabeth : About the day we met, do you remember?
Will : How could I forget, Miss Swann ?
Elizabeth : Will, how many times must I ask you to call me Elizabeth ?
Will: At least once more, Miss Swann , as always.
Governor Swann : There. See? At least the boy has a sense of propriety. Now, we really must be going. [gives Elizabeth a parasol] There you are.
Elizabeth : Good day, Mr. Turner .
Melanie: Bye Will
Governor Swann : Come along.
Will: Good day Melanie and... [Elizabeth, Melanie and the Governor exit, Will trailing after them, they leave in a carriage] ... Elizabeth .
Disclaimer: I don't own any of it besides Melanie, Matt, and Rachel
Just to clear everything up now here are the ages for the first part Melanie: 12 Elizabeth: 12 Will: 12 Matt: 12 Norrington 20 Gillete: 17 Will and Matt are twins along with Elizabeth and Melanie
Chapter 1:
Standing near the bow of the boat sailing from England to Port Royal were two little girls by the names of Melanie and Elizabeth Swann.
Young Elizabeth : [standing at the bow of a ship and singing] ...We pillage, we plunder, we rifle and loot. Drink up me 'earties yo ho! We kidnap and ravage and don't give a hoot. Drink up me 'earties yo ho! Yo ho, yo ho a pirate's life for me. We extort, we pilfer, we filch and sack. Drink up – [ Gibbs puts his hand on her shoulder which surprises her]
Gibbs : Quiet, missy! Cursed pirates sail these waters. You don't want to bring them down on us, now, do ya?
Norrington: Mr. Gibbs , that will do!
Gibbs : She was singing about pirates. Bad luck to be singing about pirates with us mired in this unnatural fog. Mark my words.
Norrington: Consider them marked. On your way.
Gibbs : Aye, Lieutenant. It's bad luck to have a woman on board, too... even a miniature one.
Young Elizabeth : I think it'd be rather exciting to meet a pirate.
Norrington: Think again, Miss Swann . Vile and dissolute creatures, the lot of them. I intend to see to it that any man who sails under a pirate flag or wears a pirate brand gets what he deserves – a short drop and a sudden stop. [ Elizabeth glances at Gibbs who mimes a hanging]
Governor Swann : Lieutenant Norrington , I appreciate your fervor, but I'm, uh, I'm concerned about the effect this subject will have upon my daughter.
Norrington: My apologies, Governor Swann .
Young Elizabeth : Actually, I find it all fascinating.
Governor Swann : Yes. That's what concerns me.
Young Elizabeth : [sees a parasol and then a piece of wreckage with a boy on it in the water] Look! A boy! And another boy There are boys in the water!
Norrington: Men overboard! Man the ropes. Fetch a Hook! Haul them aboard. [they get them on board] He's still breathing.
Gillete: This one is breathing two but not as well
Gibbs : [spots burning ship] Mary , Mother of God!
Governor Swann : What happened here?
Norrington: It's most likely the powder magazine. Merchant vessels run heavily armed.
Gibbs : A lot of good it did them. Everyone's thinking it. I'm just saying it. Pirates.
Governor Swann : There's no proof of that. It was probably an accident.
Norrington: Rouse the Captain immediately! Heave to and take in sail. Launch the boats.
Sailor: Heave to!
Governor Swann : Elizabeth , were is your sister {Calls out} Melanie Melanie
Young Melanie: {walks over to her father} Yes father
Governor Swann: I want you and Elizabeth to accompany the boys. They will be in your charge. Take care of them.
Young Melanie: ok father {they walk over to the boys}
Young Elizabeth : [Will awakes, grabbing her wrist] It's ok. My name's Elizabeth Swann and this is my sister Melanie. .
Young Will: W-W-Will Turner And that's my brother M-M-Matt. .
Young Elizabeth : Were watching over you, Will . [ Will faints, she notices medallion and Melanie notices the same medallion on Matt's neck they both examine them]
Young Melanie: You're p-pirates. [They hide them when Norrington approaches]
Norrington: Has he said anything?
Young Elizabeth : His name is William Turner . That's all I found out.
Young Melanie: And the other one is named Matt. They are brothers.
Norrington: [to sailors] Take them below.
Young Elizabeth: Would it be possible for I to go with them
Norrington: I suppose {walks away)
[Elizabeth goes below with the boys while Melanie studies one of the medallions closer and upon looking up she sees a ship with the black flag flying at its mast; she closes her eyes]
[End dream]
(A/N now to clarify the ages again: Melanie: 20 Elizabeth: 20 Will: 20 Matt: 20 Norrington 28 Gillete: 25)
[ Melanie awakes and decides to take out the medallion from a hiding place in her bureau drawer; she puts it on; there's a knock on the door]
Governor Swann : Melanie? Are you alright? Are you decent?
Melanie : [hides medallion in the bodice of her nightgown, throws on a robe] Yes, yes!
Governor Swann : Still abed at this hour? [opens the curtains and the window] It's a beautiful day. I have a gift for you. [reveals dress]
Melanie : Oh, it's beautiful!
Governor Swann : Isn't it?
Melanie: May I inquire as to the occasion?
Governor Swann : Does a father need an occasion to dote upon his daughter? [to the maids] Go on. Actually, I, um...I had hoped you might wear it for the ceremony today.
Melanie: The ceremony?
Governor Swann : Captain Norrington 's promotion ceremony.
Melanie : I knew it!
Governor Swann : Commodore Norrington, as he's about to become! [the maids lace Melanie up into a corset] A fine gentleman, don't you think? He fancies you, you know. Melanie? How's it coming?
Melanie: It's difficult to say.
Governor Swann : I'm told it's the latest fashion in London
Melanie : Well, women in London must've learned not to breathe.
Governor Swann. Well I have to go see too Elizabeth now come down stairs when you are ready -------------------------------------------------With Elizabeth--------------------------------------------------
[ Elizabeth awakes and decides to take out the medallion from a hiding place in her bureau drawer; she puts it on; there's a knock on the door]
Governor Swann : Elizabeth? Are you alright? Are you decent?
Elizabeth : [hides medallion in the bodice of her nightgown, throws on a robe] Yes, yes!
Governor Swann : Still abed at this hour ?just like your sister [opens the curtains and the window] It's a lovely day. I have a gift for you. [reveals dress]
Elizabeth : Oh, father is absolutely gorgeous Governor Swann : Isn't it?
Elizabeth: May I inquire as to the occasion?
Governor Swann : Funny Melanie asked me the same thing but seriously does a father need an occasion to dote upon his daughters? [to the maids] Go on. Actually, I, um...I had hoped you might wear it for the ceremony today just like your sister.
Elizabeth The ceremony?
Governor Swann : Captain Norrington 's and Lieutenant Gillete's promotion ceremony
Elizabeth : I knew it!
Governor Swann : Commodore Norrington, and Captin Gillete as they are about to become! [the maids lace Melanie up into a corset] Fine gentleman, don't you think?
Servant: Milord, you have a visitor.
[ Will studies a sconce and upon touching it, a piece comes off in his hand; he buries it in the vase that's holding canes and umbrellas]
Governor Swann : [walks downstairs after the servant] Ah, Mr. Turner , good to see you again.
Will: Good day, sir. I have your order. [opens case and takes out the sword]
Governor Swann : [takes the sword and unsheathes it] Well.
Will : The blade is folded steel. That's gold filigree laid into the handle. If I may. [balances the sword] Perfectly balanced. The tang is nearly the full width of the blade. [flips the sword and presents it gracefully to the Governor]
Governor Swann : [takes the sword] Impressive. Very impressive. Ah, now, Commodore Norrington is going to be very pleased with this. Do pass my compliments on to your Master. Hmm?
Will : I shall. A craftsman is always pleased to hear his work is appreciated.
Governor Swann : [enter Elizabeth and Melanie ] Oh, Elizabeth, Melanie , you look absolutely stunning.
Elizabeth : Will! It's so good to see you. I had a dream about you last night.
Will : About me?
Governor Swann : Yes, well, is that entirely proper for you to...?
Elizabeth : About the day we met, do you remember?
Will : How could I forget, Miss Swann ?
Elizabeth : Will, how many times must I ask you to call me Elizabeth ?
Will: At least once more, Miss Swann , as always.
Governor Swann : There. See? At least the boy has a sense of propriety. Now, we really must be going. [gives Elizabeth a parasol] There you are.
Elizabeth : Good day, Mr. Turner .
Melanie: Bye Will
Governor Swann : Come along.
Will: Good day Melanie and... [Elizabeth, Melanie and the Governor exit, Will trailing after them, they leave in a carriage] ... Elizabeth .