My first story! -
Karst: Oh great, another fic where I get no respect...
Actually you do.
Isaac: (Reads summary) This is in the future?
Yup -, we've wasted enough room here, before the disclaimer I must make a few warnings.
1.-Please do NOT send flames, only constructive criticism.
2.-This is my first fic so ideas or suggestions are welcome.
Now the disclaimer.
Disclaimer: TrinitySilk does not own Golden Sun.
NOTE: This is a summary of the whole game, so if you haven't played the game before this will contain spoilers.
Chapter 1: Prologue.
Ages
ago, or so the stories
tell, the power of Alchemy
ruled over
the world of
Weyard.
Alchemy
wrought the base
elements of humanity
intro thriving
civilizations,
like lead into gold.
But
in time, man's dreams
gave birth to untold strife.
Dreams of
endless riches,
of eternal life, of dominion
over all that
lived... Dreams
of conquest and of war.
These
dreams would have
torn the world apart if not
for a few brave
and wise
men, who sealed away the
power of Alchemy deep in
Mt.
Aleph's Sol Sanctum.
The
town of Vale guarded
the secret for many years,
until Isaac and
Jenna,
whose parents died in a
storm 3 years before,
disturbed
the sanctum.
Saturos
and Menardi, of the
Mars Clan, followed them
into the sanctum.
With them
traveled Jenna's brother,
Felix, thought lost
in
the same tragic storm.
Saturos
and Menardi stole
the Elemental Stars, the
keys to breaking the
seal
on the power of Alchemy,
and kidnapped Jenna
and the
scholar Kraden.
If
the four jewels were
used to fire the elemental
lighthouses,
the seal on
Alchemy would be broken.
Isaac
and Garet set out
to stop Saturos, rescue
their friends, and
return
the Elemental Stars to
their home in Sol Sanctum.
They
banded together with
a young Wind Adept named
Ivan and pursued
Saturos
and Menardi to Imil, a
winter-locked town near
Mercury
Lighthouse.
There,
they met the guardian
of the lighthouse, a Water
Adept named
Mia. With
her, they pursued Saturos
to the aerie high
atop
Mercury Lighthouse.
Isaac
was to late to
stop Saturos from lighting
the beacon and
escaping.
Again Isaac chased him,
crossing Angara to the
shores
of the Karagol Sea.
Taking
passage on a troubled
ship, Isaac crossed
the Karagol to Tolbi.
He
spoke with Tolbi's leader,
a strange man named Babi.
Babi
entered Isaac in
Collosso as a test of his
powers. Isaac's
Psynergy
won Collosso and earned him
Babi's trust, Babi
revealed
a great secret to Isaac...
Thanks
to a mystic draught
from the lost land of
Lemuria, Babi had
lived
for 150 years! He offered
to help Isaac, who then
headed
deep into Gondowan.
In
the town of Lalivero,
Isaac learned that
Saturos and Menardi
had
kidnapped a young girl
named Sheba, whom they
needed
within the lighthouse.
Isaac
fought and defeated
them atop the lighthouse,
but he was too
late--the
beacon had been lit.
A
great cataclysm followed.
Sheba fell into sea.
Felix jumped in
to save
her, but both were lost in
the rolling waves.
Jenna
left the lighthouse to find
them, but to no avail...
Isaac
went to Lalivero,
were Babi asked him to find
Lemuria and the
remaining
lighthouses. He gave Isaac
a Lemurian ship to make
the
journey for the lost land.
Ages
ago, or so the stories
tell, the power of Alchemy
ruled over
the world of
Weyard.
Alchemy
wrought the base
elements of humanity
intro thriving
civilizations,
like lead into gold.
But
in time, man's dreams
gave birth to untold strife.
Dreams of
endless riches,
of eternal life, of dominion
over all that
lived... Dreams
of conquest and of war.
These
dreams would have
torn the world apart if not
for a few brave
and wise
men, who sealed away the
power of Alchemy deep in
Mt.
Aleph's Sol Sanctum.
Prologue from Book One
The
town of Vale guarded
the secret for many years,
until Isaac and
Jenna,
whose parents died in a
storm 3 years before,
disturbed
the sanctum.
Saturos
and Menardi, of the
Mars Clan, followed them
into the sanctum.
With them
traveled Jenna's brother,
Felix, thought lost
in
the same tragic storm.
Saturos
and Menardi stole
the Elemental Stars, the
keys to breaking the
seal
on the power of Alchemy,
and kidnapped Jenna
and the
scholar Kraden.
If
the four jewels were
used to fire the elemental
lighthouses,
the seal on
Alchemy would be broken.
Isaac
and Garet set out
to stop Saturos, rescue
their friends, and
return
the Elemental Stars to
their home in Sol Sanctum.
They
banded together with
a young Wind Adept named
Ivan and pursued
Saturos
and Menardi to Imil, a
winter-locked town near
Mercury
Lighthouse.
There,
they met the guardian
of the lighthouse, a Water
Adept named
Mia. With
her, they pursued Saturos
to the aerie high
atop
Mercury Lighthouse.
Isaac
was to late to
stop Saturos from lighting
the beacon and
escaping.
Again Isaac chased him,
crossing Angara to the
shores
of the Karagol Sea.
Taking
passage on a troubled
ship, Isaac crossed
the Karagol to Tolbi.
He
spoke with Tolbi's leader,
a strange man named Babi.
Babi
entered Isaac in
Collosso as a test of his
powers. Isaac's
Psynergy
won Collosso and earned him
Babi's trust, Babi
revealed
a great secret to Isaac...
Thanks
to a mystic draught
from the lost land of
Lemuria, Babi had
lived
for 150 years! He offered
to help Isaac, who then
headed
deep into Gondowan.
In
the town of Lalivero,
Isaac learned that
Saturos and Menardi
had
kidnapped a young girl
named Sheba, whom they
needed
within the lighthouse.
Isaac
fought and defeated
them atop the lighthouse,
but he was too
late--the
beacon had been lit.
A
great cataclysm followed.
Sheba fell into sea.
Felix jumped in
to save
her, but both were lost in
the rolling waves.
Jenna
left the lighthouse to find
them, but to no avail...
Isaac
went to Lalivero,
were Babi asked him to find
Lemuria and the
remaining
lighthouses. He gave Isaac
a Lemurian ship to make
the
journey for the lost land.
Meanwhile Felix, Jenna, Sheba , Kraden and Alex floated on the peninsula of Idejima, they soon clashed into the continent of Indra, due to a sudden tidal wave, they soon regrouped but Alex mysteriously disappeared.
Within their arrival at Madras they encountered a water adept, Piers, in jail, in an attempt to release him, they headed to Osenia, crossing Yampi desert to Alhafra, where they encountered Briggs, a pirate, they imprisoned him, proving Piers' innocence.
However when they returned to Madras, they discovered that the Kibombo had raided the town and stolen Piers' orb, they followed them to Gondowan, and joining forces with Piers they recovered his orb.
They returned to Madras and found Karst, Menardi's sister, there seeking revenge for her sister's death. They later boarded Piers' ship, finding in their travels many mysteries of alchemy, including three pieces of a trident.
They returned to Alhafra and helped fix their ship, but Briggs escaped taking the ship whit him. They chased him to Champa and after clearing some misunderstandings his grandmother Obaba forged the trident.
In Champa they encountered Alex, who had joined Karst and Agatio.
They headed towards Lemuria and met King Hydros, he helped them cross to the Great Western Sea. In Hesperia they found the Shaman Village and passing trough their test they obtained the Hover Jade.
Then, in Jupiter Lighthouse, they encountered Isaac and the others confronting Karst and Agatio, they confronted them and defeated them, but they escaped taking the Mars star with them.
In Contigo, Ivan's sister, Master Hama, explained to them the reason for lighting the lighthouses. Isaac finaly understood and he joined them in their quest.
The chased Karst and Agatio to Prox, where they learned that they had Saturos and the others to light the lighthouses in order to save Prox.
They headed towards Mars lighthouse and were forced to fight against Karst and Agatio, they gave them the Mars star, knowing they could do nothing for them, Felix and the others headed to the top of the lighthouse.
There, the Wise one, protector of the elemental stars, attempted to stop them, using their parents in the form of a dragon, they won, but their parents payed the price.
Filled with sorrow they lit the lighthouse and as they did a miracle occurred, and their parents revived.
They returned to Vale, only to find it destroyed, however, it's inhabitants were still alive, they helped reconstruct Vale and, knowing that the world knew very little of alchemy, they set out to the world.
Three years later, the power of alchemy released new elements and with them, a new threat, Isaac and his friends defeated it, meeting many new friends and meeting an old friend that joined them on their quest.
After a long and tiring battle, the nine warriors sealed the evil being in the elemental sanctum.
They remained as the guardians of the elemental stars and lived normal lives.
However...........
The evil in the sanctum was still there, gaining strength.
This story begins with a new generation of adepts, little do they know that their actions will soon determine the world's destiny....
Ok, I'm done.
Garet: Wow that was long
As you may have noticed, at first I used the original Golden Sun prologue, but later on I made the summary for Golden Sun 2.
Jenna: OO That was a summary?
Next chapter will feature the real beginning, I'll start accepting new characters, you can submit villagers, guards, etc. I also need at least five bullies, children please. I'll update as soon as I have enough submissions. -
Note: Your character must have a name, age, type of psynergy, physical description and personality,(Unless you want me to give them one) and you can also give them jobs/hobbies.