I am really sorry, but I am not the best writer around this area, and perhaps I may be the worst writer here on ! But it is ok, because I know I am already, so there is no point of you telling me that. If you do not like my story, then please do not read it.

Thank you SacredGoggles, for you two reviews, but I rather not use your character. (Thanks for the offer!) Also, I do not think I need to use other languages! I can use English, right? I know, about the chat speech, it is not really good to use, and I would try my best to stop using them. I also know my story is really bad, as you say, because this is my first try at Naruto, and about the Hokage clapping part, but sorry! I really need to use it for later on, and she can be on a break from her work, can she?

Got-lotr : thankz for the review, Connie!

Ilovesasuke : thankz!!! ;; I feel the same way!

KuroiItamii : really sorry for not taking it off, but I would like to try again. However, please tell me what a mary-sue is. I cannot make it better, or the way you want me to, if I do not know what a mary-sue is!!!!! I am actually trying hard, and taking everything you say really seriously, though it may not seam like it when I wrote a response to you earlier. Thanks for the 2nd review that you wrote me, and I know that you would start with the language pretty soon, so I better write this for you first; my computer crashed continues of times whenever I try to use spell check. It has a virus in it. I DO NOT know any Japanese, I hope you have noticed, and the names Kimo, Ioanne are actually Hawaiian. I got them straight out of the book I checked out from the library. Kokoro is my friend's name, and she is Japanese. Yes, I might have spelt it wrong, because I never really read it written, she goes by the name Koko. Stancy is Connie's 'yami'. You might not know because it is sort of from Yu-Gi-Oh! That some people have other people living in your body. (Something like inner Sakura) and I just changed at around a bit. The four dogs that showed up are real dog's names, my cousins own them, and one of them is Connie's dog. So I don't see the use to change the names. Also, thank you for your time to write all these reviews. I would try my best.

kage-no-koi : thank you for your review. Yes, I know that this story is really bad and all, so I would change it pretty soon. My characters are NOT perfect. I just have not written that they are near death or something, but it would be coming.

Guardian of Faith : thank you, but please do not yell at nibbler100. If you want to yell at anyone, I guess it should be me. If you have been reading, I have not yet come up with a title I think would work for this story yet, so I cannot change it just yet, but I would change it soon enough.

Nibbler100 : Thank you for standing up for me!

Ok. I finished writing the notes for the reviewers. I am sorry, Jinky! I WILL use your character, but I would use it in my other story I would be working on!!

Ok. I decided that I should pause this story, so I can spare the people from my writing skills, and I would work on a new one, with similar characters, and plot. (I do not think I should delete this one because this is a good time for me to look over this stuff.) Thank you for all your comments!!

Joan