THESE CHARACTRERS AREN'T MINE. (though I wish they were...)
Hiya!!! I already had this story published, but it was removed... because of the @#$*~#@/!!! NC-17 problem. Yeah, well, this story already has a lemon chapter, though it's chapter 11... or maybe 10? I don't remember. Anyway, who cares, as long as it's in the story, heh? ^___^ I finaly gave myself a *HUGE* mental kick and decided to edit "the bug" and put it back on the site for your pleasure.
Now, this story is SHOUJO AI and later, yuri. If you don't know what it means: it's f/f relationships. And now, if you're not comfortable with that, well... then... well just go away. =D
The Bug
I was sitting in my room. Actually, it was a hotel room, but it was the same now because I scared the shit out of the managers and they wouldn't show up to either ask me to pay or kick me out.
I didn't knew what was wrong with me: I just felt like crying, something that rarely happened. So I've let the tears run free. If you would've seen Senbei's face at that moment, you would've died of laughter, like I would've . normally. I just told him to fuck off and dissapear until I call him.
I was trying to figure out why I was crying, what could possibly hurt me so much so suddenly, when I felt very strong pain grab me. All my body was only pain. I felt like all my muscles were burning, like if something was eating me from inside... I couldn't take it and I collapsed to the ground. I felt spams take over my body like if striked by thunder, the ache not fading in the least. My fists clenched and I uslessly tried to protect myself from an invisible attacker by curling in a ball.
About 5 minutes later, it was over. When I was finnaly relaxed and I managed to stand up, it happened again. The tears and the pain. It kept happening over and over again. After about an hour or two of me suffering like Hell, everything just stopped. But by that time, I had long before gave up trying to stand for I knew that each time I fell right to the ground again.
I heard knocks on the door. Trying to hide the pain that I knew could be heard in my voice, I roared "Go AWAY!!". And I knew the last word I screamed sounded like a raging lion/beast, but the knocks just kept on. I stayed silent, trying to ignore it, but after several minutes of regular knocking, I was getting beyond annoyed. Growling, I finally sat up, not without effort, and yelled "OK!!! This better be important! Come in!". And the she entered.
I remember asking myself several quetions as: How on earth did she found me? What the Hell was she doing here? .and what was this sad expression? But before I could say anything, she began:
"It is important." She looked to the ground, trying to avoid my gaze.
I could see she had been crying, her eyes were red and her usual gentle smile was gone. Something was terribly wrong. "What is it?" I gulped.
"It's my sister... she... caught a bug. One of the virus types.... It's... It's a mortal one for goddesses." A tear ran down her cheek and she quickly whipped it away, sniffing.
"." What was I supposed to say?
Taking a deep breath, she forced herslef to continiue "She... she would've been dead if it wasn't for her demon part. S-s-since you're her best friend, I-I thought you should know about it. " She choked her last words.
I know I should've never felt like this, but I was concerned and as I got up to comfort her, I felt tears grow in my eyes. 'Not again.' I just had the time to yelp before hitting the ground just at the goddess' feet. The pain was much stronger this time and it was more than my already weakened body could take and I collapsed. That ended our short conversation.
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When I woke up, I didn't opened my eyes, my head was hurting too much. I quickly realised I wouldn't be able to slip back into my dear sleep because I heard familiar voices in the background, and what was said was very interesting.
"What is she doing here!?!?!" a familiar man voice said.
"I brought her with me." The goddess answered calmly.
"I saw that!!! But why? For once, she wasn't causing troubles!"
"She's not causing troubles now."
"She will as soon as she wakes up."
Apparently he'd just learned I was in his house. so did I. So Belldandy brought me here? That's when I remembered our last conversation. I sprang up from my bed, ignoring my pounding head, and ran to what I knew was Urd's room. I needed to see her. When I got there, the youngest goddess was already sitting by her sister, looking like she was crying all the tears she had in her small body. It was the kind of scene that would've broke anybody's heart. Even a demon like me. I couldn't enter the room. I was frozen by the overly sad atmosphere and I couldn't stop staring at the small form that, for once, wasn't threating. I think she felt eyes on her because she started to hide her tears, or should I say she tried.
"It's OK, you can come in, Bell." She sniffed, whiping her tears.
"I'm not her." I whispered with that low and distant voice I hate so much.
At these words, she jumped and turned to face me, fear cleary written in her eyes. "W-w-what are you doing here!?" she stuttered.
I think she noticed I wasn't in my normal mood either, because her expression softened though she still seamed warry.
"Belldandy brought me here." I lowered my eyes, it was odd to discuss with her. "I. can you leave a bit? I wanna talk with Urd." I glanced at her.
"She is not responding." She clenched her theet. "...And w-w-we don't have anything to heal her.... we don't know h-how" Tears were growing in her eyes again. With that, she ran out, probaly ashamed to cry before me.
When I finally builed up enough courage to go over and look at her, I nearly fainted. She was so awfully pale. If it wasn't for her regular breathing, anyone would've thought she was already dead. I sat next to her bed, on the chair Skuld left. I couldn't get my eyes of her, and I felt tears fall down my cheeks.
"Why you, of all people, why you?" I wispered, closing my eyes. The least thing I expeceted was for her to answer, but she did. ",,,"
I can't say why, but I wasn't surprised at all that she answered, even though her baby sister said she wouldn't. Somehow, deep down, I knew she could my presence, I knew she could hear me if I needed to talk; I knew that, when I took her hand, she felt it. I don't know how long I stayed like this, maybe minutes, maybe hours. Anyway, my tears were dry. I just couldn't seem to let go of that hand, as if it would mean loosing her. I opened my eyes to observe her one more time, to make sure she was still there, I think.
I don't know why, tears started sliding down her cheeks. Oddly, at the same time as mine. And I felt the same pain, again. And her eyes flashed widely open as screamed a bloody cry. like if something was killing her from the inside. I fell on the ground and I realised something. What I felt wasn't my pain, it was hers. I heard foot steps in the hall, they were coming this way. I already guessed the three others were alarmed by our screams. Keiichi entered first. I only saw him vaguely because on the tears flowing down my eyes. They couldn't seem to understand what was wrong.
Through everything, I clearly heard Keiichi say call me in a panicked voice "Mara?!? Mara!!! What's wrong?!?!" He grabed me in his arms, trying to calm my screams and violent spasms. Then, he turned to his beloved "Belldandy, take care of Urd!" Before turning back to me "Mara! Mara!"
I could feel I was terribly weak. I entered a state between conscious and unconscious. I could only hear whispers 'She's white!' 'Is she dead?' 'No, but her pulse is low and to breathe seems difficult.' 'what in the world happened?' ....
And then, nothing.
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I would really like to know if you liked the editing. Review, please?? *puppy eyes* Pretty please?
Hiya!!! I already had this story published, but it was removed... because of the @#$*~#@/!!! NC-17 problem. Yeah, well, this story already has a lemon chapter, though it's chapter 11... or maybe 10? I don't remember. Anyway, who cares, as long as it's in the story, heh? ^___^ I finaly gave myself a *HUGE* mental kick and decided to edit "the bug" and put it back on the site for your pleasure.
Now, this story is SHOUJO AI and later, yuri. If you don't know what it means: it's f/f relationships. And now, if you're not comfortable with that, well... then... well just go away. =D
The Bug
I was sitting in my room. Actually, it was a hotel room, but it was the same now because I scared the shit out of the managers and they wouldn't show up to either ask me to pay or kick me out.
I didn't knew what was wrong with me: I just felt like crying, something that rarely happened. So I've let the tears run free. If you would've seen Senbei's face at that moment, you would've died of laughter, like I would've . normally. I just told him to fuck off and dissapear until I call him.
I was trying to figure out why I was crying, what could possibly hurt me so much so suddenly, when I felt very strong pain grab me. All my body was only pain. I felt like all my muscles were burning, like if something was eating me from inside... I couldn't take it and I collapsed to the ground. I felt spams take over my body like if striked by thunder, the ache not fading in the least. My fists clenched and I uslessly tried to protect myself from an invisible attacker by curling in a ball.
About 5 minutes later, it was over. When I was finnaly relaxed and I managed to stand up, it happened again. The tears and the pain. It kept happening over and over again. After about an hour or two of me suffering like Hell, everything just stopped. But by that time, I had long before gave up trying to stand for I knew that each time I fell right to the ground again.
I heard knocks on the door. Trying to hide the pain that I knew could be heard in my voice, I roared "Go AWAY!!". And I knew the last word I screamed sounded like a raging lion/beast, but the knocks just kept on. I stayed silent, trying to ignore it, but after several minutes of regular knocking, I was getting beyond annoyed. Growling, I finally sat up, not without effort, and yelled "OK!!! This better be important! Come in!". And the she entered.
I remember asking myself several quetions as: How on earth did she found me? What the Hell was she doing here? .and what was this sad expression? But before I could say anything, she began:
"It is important." She looked to the ground, trying to avoid my gaze.
I could see she had been crying, her eyes were red and her usual gentle smile was gone. Something was terribly wrong. "What is it?" I gulped.
"It's my sister... she... caught a bug. One of the virus types.... It's... It's a mortal one for goddesses." A tear ran down her cheek and she quickly whipped it away, sniffing.
"." What was I supposed to say?
Taking a deep breath, she forced herslef to continiue "She... she would've been dead if it wasn't for her demon part. S-s-since you're her best friend, I-I thought you should know about it. " She choked her last words.
I know I should've never felt like this, but I was concerned and as I got up to comfort her, I felt tears grow in my eyes. 'Not again.' I just had the time to yelp before hitting the ground just at the goddess' feet. The pain was much stronger this time and it was more than my already weakened body could take and I collapsed. That ended our short conversation.
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When I woke up, I didn't opened my eyes, my head was hurting too much. I quickly realised I wouldn't be able to slip back into my dear sleep because I heard familiar voices in the background, and what was said was very interesting.
"What is she doing here!?!?!" a familiar man voice said.
"I brought her with me." The goddess answered calmly.
"I saw that!!! But why? For once, she wasn't causing troubles!"
"She's not causing troubles now."
"She will as soon as she wakes up."
Apparently he'd just learned I was in his house. so did I. So Belldandy brought me here? That's when I remembered our last conversation. I sprang up from my bed, ignoring my pounding head, and ran to what I knew was Urd's room. I needed to see her. When I got there, the youngest goddess was already sitting by her sister, looking like she was crying all the tears she had in her small body. It was the kind of scene that would've broke anybody's heart. Even a demon like me. I couldn't enter the room. I was frozen by the overly sad atmosphere and I couldn't stop staring at the small form that, for once, wasn't threating. I think she felt eyes on her because she started to hide her tears, or should I say she tried.
"It's OK, you can come in, Bell." She sniffed, whiping her tears.
"I'm not her." I whispered with that low and distant voice I hate so much.
At these words, she jumped and turned to face me, fear cleary written in her eyes. "W-w-what are you doing here!?" she stuttered.
I think she noticed I wasn't in my normal mood either, because her expression softened though she still seamed warry.
"Belldandy brought me here." I lowered my eyes, it was odd to discuss with her. "I. can you leave a bit? I wanna talk with Urd." I glanced at her.
"She is not responding." She clenched her theet. "...And w-w-we don't have anything to heal her.... we don't know h-how" Tears were growing in her eyes again. With that, she ran out, probaly ashamed to cry before me.
When I finally builed up enough courage to go over and look at her, I nearly fainted. She was so awfully pale. If it wasn't for her regular breathing, anyone would've thought she was already dead. I sat next to her bed, on the chair Skuld left. I couldn't get my eyes of her, and I felt tears fall down my cheeks.
"Why you, of all people, why you?" I wispered, closing my eyes. The least thing I expeceted was for her to answer, but she did. ",,,"
I can't say why, but I wasn't surprised at all that she answered, even though her baby sister said she wouldn't. Somehow, deep down, I knew she could my presence, I knew she could hear me if I needed to talk; I knew that, when I took her hand, she felt it. I don't know how long I stayed like this, maybe minutes, maybe hours. Anyway, my tears were dry. I just couldn't seem to let go of that hand, as if it would mean loosing her. I opened my eyes to observe her one more time, to make sure she was still there, I think.
I don't know why, tears started sliding down her cheeks. Oddly, at the same time as mine. And I felt the same pain, again. And her eyes flashed widely open as screamed a bloody cry. like if something was killing her from the inside. I fell on the ground and I realised something. What I felt wasn't my pain, it was hers. I heard foot steps in the hall, they were coming this way. I already guessed the three others were alarmed by our screams. Keiichi entered first. I only saw him vaguely because on the tears flowing down my eyes. They couldn't seem to understand what was wrong.
Through everything, I clearly heard Keiichi say call me in a panicked voice "Mara?!? Mara!!! What's wrong?!?!" He grabed me in his arms, trying to calm my screams and violent spasms. Then, he turned to his beloved "Belldandy, take care of Urd!" Before turning back to me "Mara! Mara!"
I could feel I was terribly weak. I entered a state between conscious and unconscious. I could only hear whispers 'She's white!' 'Is she dead?' 'No, but her pulse is low and to breathe seems difficult.' 'what in the world happened?' ....
And then, nothing.
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I would really like to know if you liked the editing. Review, please?? *puppy eyes* Pretty please?