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( ! SWEET! . *
+ ". DREAMS." (
. "'-.,.-'" + .I'm glad that you liked it. It means a lot to me. You know I don't own anything so I'm not bothering to say so in the future.
Thanks a lot dlster for you character. Since it was the first one I'm putting Jana in my story!
Not your stereotype
Lily plunger deeper into the pool, she tried to scream for help but water just filled up in her mouth. She kicked her feet but it was no use and fell into unconscious.
"Lily!!!"
Sirius, Remus, Annie and Jana (pronounced jay-na) came rushing. Sirius and Remus jumped into the pond and swam deeper into it. After 2 minuets the came back for breath.
"Did you find her! "Annie screamed. Sirius shook his head. "Who knows how deep this pond is, she could be anywhere! "he replied. Jana and Annie tensed up. "We can't give up! I'm going to get help! "Jana replied and rushed away. Remus and Sirius took a deep breath and went back into the water.
-----Where Lily is-----
Lily was still out of conscious but she heard voices calling her name out.
*Who could that be? Could it be James? Maybe I saw wrong and Amy was forcing herself on him. Maybe I didn't even see him... yhea that it!! I have to keep alive! *
Her eyes were closed and wouldn't open so she tried to move her feet..............but it was stuck!
*No this can't be happening! I can't die! *
-----Sirius and Remus-----
Remus and Sirius were both running out of air, but they were too deep to close to give up. If their was only a way to breathe.
*That's it! * Remus thought. He took out his wand and nudged Sirius.
"parleo aquadaro," he mumbled and swished his wand.
(I know its lame but I thought it made sense because parleo is like parle which means to speak. thank god for French class! aquadaro is like aqua. )
Sirius smirked and did the exact thing. Their chances were way better now. They both swam deeper into the pool. Suddenly they found a blurry figure. It was lily! Sirius and Remus grabbed her by the hand but she wouldn't budge. It looked like a rock. Remus tugged and her foot but it wouldn't budge.
"Sirius give me a hand here!" (They could talk because of the spell.) Sirius tugged at the foot as well but it wouldn't move. He yanked it a few times; try to wiggled it out, even took his wand and used it like a leaver. Nothing was working. In frustration he kick the rock but only to find it didn't feel like a rock. It was ...It was...it was ....
Squishy
Suddenly two huge eyes blinked and 6 arms moved around.
"Well what do you know, it wasn't a rock after all" Sirius mumbled
"No it was acutely a squid," Remus mumbled.
"Squid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
They tried to grab Lily but the squid had its arm tightly around her foot.
"She's not going to last very long at this rate,"Sirius yelled
"That's why you should always know when to ask for help Mr. Black."
They both looked up to see professor Dumbledore wearing a swim suit and a ducky float with snorkels. (I couldn't resist!)
"Now Mr. Black, Mr. Lupin. We all are quite happy both of you made it this far. You took a lot of courage to get this far and so I'm going to tell you a secret. All squids have one weakness...they're all ticklish. "
. "'-.,.-'" + .I'm glad that you liked it. It means a lot to me. You know I don't own anything so I'm not bothering to say so in the future.
Thanks a lot dlster for you character. Since it was the first one I'm putting Jana in my story!
Not your stereotype
Lily plunger deeper into the pool, she tried to scream for help but water just filled up in her mouth. She kicked her feet but it was no use and fell into unconscious.
"Lily!!!"
Sirius, Remus, Annie and Jana (pronounced jay-na) came rushing. Sirius and Remus jumped into the pond and swam deeper into it. After 2 minuets the came back for breath.
"Did you find her! "Annie screamed. Sirius shook his head. "Who knows how deep this pond is, she could be anywhere! "he replied. Jana and Annie tensed up. "We can't give up! I'm going to get help! "Jana replied and rushed away. Remus and Sirius took a deep breath and went back into the water.
-----Where Lily is-----
Lily was still out of conscious but she heard voices calling her name out.
*Who could that be? Could it be James? Maybe I saw wrong and Amy was forcing herself on him. Maybe I didn't even see him... yhea that it!! I have to keep alive! *
Her eyes were closed and wouldn't open so she tried to move her feet..............but it was stuck!
*No this can't be happening! I can't die! *
-----Sirius and Remus-----
Remus and Sirius were both running out of air, but they were too deep to close to give up. If their was only a way to breathe.
*That's it! * Remus thought. He took out his wand and nudged Sirius.
"parleo aquadaro," he mumbled and swished his wand.
(I know its lame but I thought it made sense because parleo is like parle which means to speak. thank god for French class! aquadaro is like aqua. )
Sirius smirked and did the exact thing. Their chances were way better now. They both swam deeper into the pool. Suddenly they found a blurry figure. It was lily! Sirius and Remus grabbed her by the hand but she wouldn't budge. It looked like a rock. Remus tugged and her foot but it wouldn't budge.
"Sirius give me a hand here!" (They could talk because of the spell.) Sirius tugged at the foot as well but it wouldn't move. He yanked it a few times; try to wiggled it out, even took his wand and used it like a leaver. Nothing was working. In frustration he kick the rock but only to find it didn't feel like a rock. It was ...It was...it was ....
Squishy
Suddenly two huge eyes blinked and 6 arms moved around.
"Well what do you know, it wasn't a rock after all" Sirius mumbled
"No it was acutely a squid," Remus mumbled.
"Squid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
They tried to grab Lily but the squid had its arm tightly around her foot.
"She's not going to last very long at this rate,"Sirius yelled
"That's why you should always know when to ask for help Mr. Black."
They both looked up to see professor Dumbledore wearing a swim suit and a ducky float with snorkels. (I couldn't resist!)
"Now Mr. Black, Mr. Lupin. We all are quite happy both of you made it this far. You took a lot of courage to get this far and so I'm going to tell you a secret. All squids have one weakness...they're all ticklish. "