Mirage
Now that my story 'Feuer Frei' (check it out!) is nearing completion, I will soon have more time to write this story.
Reviewer Replies
-Shiroi-Tenshi-Tsubasa-
. I know that the last review was mostly descriptions, but I had to give you guys what Raivan looked like, and that seemed like a good place to stop...I'll try to make this a long (or a really action filled one...or maybe both. ) chapter to make up for that U
-Forfirith-on-a-sugar-high-
What is drawing people to my stories? Can anybody tell me o.O?
-kero-chan39- if you wanna find out what happens, review! -pokes back-
-SchoolBoredom- Thanks!
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The dark shadow raised a finger and touched the window, making the glass
open up to a small hole where it was touched. It morphed into a purple
raven, flying in and up to the first bed, looking at its owner. It morphed
again, this time into a human shaped figure, dressed in a hooded purple
cloak that covered its face. Taking out a black pouch, it sprinkled black
powder over Kai, making him fall into a deeper sleep so that he would not
be woken before the shadow's job was done. Putting the pouch away, he
turned to Rei. With a wave of his hand, Rei was levitated a few feet above
his bed, still sleeping, unknowing of what was going to happen to him. The
figure placed a hand on the back of Rei's neck, who whimpered slightly in
his sleep, his hand glowing purple. "S'htaed rehtaef" the figure whispered,
laying Rei back in his bed, then again morphed into a raven, flying out the
window, which closed by itself. Rei turned his face towards Kai's bed,
revealing on the back of his neck, before his hair covered it, a marking of a
dark purple feather. -------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------- Kai woke up at 9:00, feeling very strange. {What the hell? I usually get up
at 5:00, but I sleep in four hours late? Something must have happened last
night, but what...?} He turned his eyes to Rei's bed, and a confused look
came upon his face. Rei was sleeping, his arms and legs pointing straight
down, on top of a made bed. {Something weird defiantly happened last
night...but what?} Pulling the sheets off of him, he got up, and taking some
clothes out of his dresser, went to take a hot shower to clear his mind. -------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------- Rei ran through a long hallway made of gray stone, his long green robe
tangling around his legs. His long hair was gathered back with strings of
emeralds, the rest flowing behind him like a sheet of black silk. He soon
saw they end of the hallway, a large blackened steel door. When he reached
it, he tried to open it, but it would not budge. He heard a shriek behind him,
coming face to face with a large raven, its purple eyes glowing. Rei fell
down as the bird lunged at him, crying out as the bird gave him a long gash
in his arm, staining the bell shaped sleeves of his robe a dark crimson. The
raven then morphed into a human, but hidden by shadows so Rei could not
see who it was, even with his neko abilities. "You will be mine...and no one
else's..." The figure hissed, raising up a black sword and sweeping it down,
slashing Rei across his chest, making him scream in pain. -------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------- Kai was just tying on his scarf when he heard Rei scream, his eyes
widening. "Shit!" he swore running to the bedroom, where he saw Rei,
panting heavily and tangled up in white sheets that were swiftly turning
crimson. {What the hell?} Kai ran over to Rei, untangling him from his
cocoon. He saw slashes in Rei's top and unbuttoned it, taking it off. He
sucked in air quickly. A long slash had appeared on Rei's chest, and a
smaller one on his arm, both bleeding heavily. "Rei? Wake up! Rei!" He
felt the neko's forehead, pulling it away sharply. "Damm it, he's burning
up...what is happening to him?" Picking Rei up, he took him to the
bathroom, setting him near the tub, running cool water. He washed the
blood of Rei and cleaned his wounds, then taking him and wrapping him in
a big fluffy towel, grapping some gaze and roll bandages. Setting him
gently on the carpeted floor of the bedroom, he wiped more blood off of
Rei's wounds, then quickly yet neatly wrapping them up, tight enough to
stop the bleeding, yet loose enough to still let him breath and move his arm.
Running to and grabbing his cell phone from his bedside table, He went
back to Rei, dialing a number, praying the other person would answer.
"Hello?" "Listen, Doc, something is wrong with Rei." "What is it?" I don't
know. He went to bed normal, but this morning he was on top of a made
bed, laying there his hands pointing down and his legs straight. I went to
take a shower, and I was just about finished when I heard him scream. I ran
to him, and when I untangled his from his sheets, I saw that he was
bleeding, so I took of his shirt and there were two gashes, one across his
chest, and the other on his right arm. I cleaned and bandaged his wounds,
but the thing is, he has a really high fever and he will not wake up." There
was a pause on the other line. "Kai, look on the back of his neck. Is there
something there?" He set his phone down as he gently brushed Rei's now
messy braid aside, lifting his head slightly. Kai swore. On the back of Rei's
neck was a glowing purple feather. He picked up his phone. "There is a
glowing purple feather." There was an immediate response. "Kai, you need
to bring him to me immediately. I will explain everything when you get
here." the line went dead. "Damm It!" he swore, placing his phone in his
pocket and put on his coat. He found a long green shirt for Rei, and after
putting it on, picked him up and carried him out to the car.
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Now that my story 'Feuer Frei' (check it out!) is nearing completion, I will soon have more time to write this story.
Reviewer Replies
-Shiroi-Tenshi-Tsubasa-
. I know that the last review was mostly descriptions, but I had to give you guys what Raivan looked like, and that seemed like a good place to stop...I'll try to make this a long (or a really action filled one...or maybe both. ) chapter to make up for that U
-Forfirith-on-a-sugar-high-
What is drawing people to my stories? Can anybody tell me o.O?
-kero-chan39- if you wanna find out what happens, review! -pokes back-
-SchoolBoredom- Thanks!
VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV
The dark shadow raised a finger and touched the window, making the glass
open up to a small hole where it was touched. It morphed into a purple
raven, flying in and up to the first bed, looking at its owner. It morphed
again, this time into a human shaped figure, dressed in a hooded purple
cloak that covered its face. Taking out a black pouch, it sprinkled black
powder over Kai, making him fall into a deeper sleep so that he would not
be woken before the shadow's job was done. Putting the pouch away, he
turned to Rei. With a wave of his hand, Rei was levitated a few feet above
his bed, still sleeping, unknowing of what was going to happen to him. The
figure placed a hand on the back of Rei's neck, who whimpered slightly in
his sleep, his hand glowing purple. "S'htaed rehtaef" the figure whispered,
laying Rei back in his bed, then again morphed into a raven, flying out the
window, which closed by itself. Rei turned his face towards Kai's bed,
revealing on the back of his neck, before his hair covered it, a marking of a
dark purple feather. -------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------- Kai woke up at 9:00, feeling very strange. {What the hell? I usually get up
at 5:00, but I sleep in four hours late? Something must have happened last
night, but what...?} He turned his eyes to Rei's bed, and a confused look
came upon his face. Rei was sleeping, his arms and legs pointing straight
down, on top of a made bed. {Something weird defiantly happened last
night...but what?} Pulling the sheets off of him, he got up, and taking some
clothes out of his dresser, went to take a hot shower to clear his mind. -------------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------- Rei ran through a long hallway made of gray stone, his long green robe
tangling around his legs. His long hair was gathered back with strings of
emeralds, the rest flowing behind him like a sheet of black silk. He soon
saw they end of the hallway, a large blackened steel door. When he reached
it, he tried to open it, but it would not budge. He heard a shriek behind him,
coming face to face with a large raven, its purple eyes glowing. Rei fell
down as the bird lunged at him, crying out as the bird gave him a long gash
in his arm, staining the bell shaped sleeves of his robe a dark crimson. The
raven then morphed into a human, but hidden by shadows so Rei could not
see who it was, even with his neko abilities. "You will be mine...and no one
else's..." The figure hissed, raising up a black sword and sweeping it down,
slashing Rei across his chest, making him scream in pain. -------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------- Kai was just tying on his scarf when he heard Rei scream, his eyes
widening. "Shit!" he swore running to the bedroom, where he saw Rei,
panting heavily and tangled up in white sheets that were swiftly turning
crimson. {What the hell?} Kai ran over to Rei, untangling him from his
cocoon. He saw slashes in Rei's top and unbuttoned it, taking it off. He
sucked in air quickly. A long slash had appeared on Rei's chest, and a
smaller one on his arm, both bleeding heavily. "Rei? Wake up! Rei!" He
felt the neko's forehead, pulling it away sharply. "Damm it, he's burning
up...what is happening to him?" Picking Rei up, he took him to the
bathroom, setting him near the tub, running cool water. He washed the
blood of Rei and cleaned his wounds, then taking him and wrapping him in
a big fluffy towel, grapping some gaze and roll bandages. Setting him
gently on the carpeted floor of the bedroom, he wiped more blood off of
Rei's wounds, then quickly yet neatly wrapping them up, tight enough to
stop the bleeding, yet loose enough to still let him breath and move his arm.
Running to and grabbing his cell phone from his bedside table, He went
back to Rei, dialing a number, praying the other person would answer.
"Hello?" "Listen, Doc, something is wrong with Rei." "What is it?" I don't
know. He went to bed normal, but this morning he was on top of a made
bed, laying there his hands pointing down and his legs straight. I went to
take a shower, and I was just about finished when I heard him scream. I ran
to him, and when I untangled his from his sheets, I saw that he was
bleeding, so I took of his shirt and there were two gashes, one across his
chest, and the other on his right arm. I cleaned and bandaged his wounds,
but the thing is, he has a really high fever and he will not wake up." There
was a pause on the other line. "Kai, look on the back of his neck. Is there
something there?" He set his phone down as he gently brushed Rei's now
messy braid aside, lifting his head slightly. Kai swore. On the back of Rei's
neck was a glowing purple feather. He picked up his phone. "There is a
glowing purple feather." There was an immediate response. "Kai, you need
to bring him to me immediately. I will explain everything when you get
here." the line went dead. "Damm It!" he swore, placing his phone in his
pocket and put on his coat. He found a long green shirt for Rei, and after
putting it on, picked him up and carried him out to the car.
;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; Did you guys like it? If so, PLEASE REVIEW!