Mirage
-Reviewer Replies-
-Shiroi-Tenshi-Tsubasa-
95 candy bars? No wonder you're hyper. You are forgiven. And yes, there will be more Rei torture (sorry people! it just has to be.)
-SchoolBoredom-
Thanks. And let me explain the gash thing. The feather makes it so that anything that happens in his dreams actually happens, so when he got the gashes in his dream, it happens in real life. It will be explained more later.
-Forfirith-on-a-sugar-high-
Like I said before, what is so great about my stories? What makes them so good? Can you people please help me figure that out? It will help me write better if I know what you guys like. And think about it. In Rei's dream a raven attacked him. He was hurt by a black blade...get it now? ?
-kero-chan39- If you really want to express it more, keep reviewing, please!
-Platinum Rei- Since you asked so enthusiastically, here's the next chapter!
-Devlinn Reiko-sama- You can't rush a good story! (Since you guys think this is a good story, that is..)
âªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâª "What the hell?! What asshole did this?!" Kai swore. His Firebird was
trashed. The sides were dented and its paint scratched, the inside was all
torn up, and the windshield was smashed. It seems that whoever hurt Rei
did not want him to get help for him, because stuck in the shattered
windshield was a dark purple feather. Then his phone rang. "Hello?" "Kai?
It's Dr. Moon. Instead of the hospital, go to 963 Laitselec Circle, go
down the path and meet me there, and do all of this as soon as you can.
Something has come up that we cannot have other people knowing." "Well,
doc, I'll come as soon as I can, but the same person who hurt Rei also
trashed my car, but if they haven't found it and trashed that to, I might have
another means of transportation." "Alright. Just hurry!" The line closed and
Kai put his phone away in his pocket. Kai heard a small whimper from his
arms. He placed a hand to his forehead. Rei was not getting worse, but he
was not getting any better. Shifting Rei so he could use his left arm, he
pressed in a gray tile on the right wall, backing up as light erupted from the
square of the floor that was rising up. On a black metal platform/ramp,
propped up, was a motorcycle. It was made of black metal, with gold armor
on the front, sides and back, along with gold rims for the tires. The armor
was shaped like a phoenix head in the front; it's beak open, with faceted
ruby eyes glinting. The sides were made of two layers, a single smooth
layer under a part shaped into sharp wings, with the back and the back's
guard shaped like a sweeping phoenix tail. (Sorry 'bout the way lame
description...I can't describe cars and motorcycles that well.)Kai sat astride
the black leather upholstered seat, sweeping his coat behind him and setting
Rei in front of him. Putting on his black glasses, he tucked Rei's braid into
His shirt before tying him close to him with some leather cord he had.
"Hold on Rei..." he whispered. Placing a gold key in the slot and turning it,
he started up the engine, shooting off the ramp in a wheelie and onto the
road. When they reached the doctors address, he raised an eyebrow. There
was the large path. That nobody else noticed or went down. Sighing, he
went down the road, and in muttering about crazy doctors, he didn't notice
that the path disappeared, replaced with trees a few minutes later. He
stopped when he reached the edge of a large clearing surrounded by tall
pine trees. Stopping and turning off the engine, he untied him and Rei.
{Where the hell is that Doctor?} Getting off and putting down the
kickstand, he took Rei into his arms bridal style then walked to the middle
of the clearing. "Where the hell are you?" "All around you." Kai's eyebrow
twitched. "Well get your ass down here and help Rei!" in a flash, a figure
stood before Kai. Dr. Moon was wearing white pants and his white jacket
buttoned up, a green blanket in one hand, a white bag in the other. "Lay him
down on this blanket." When they had did so, Dr. Moon took off Rei's shirt,
and unwrapped the now bloody bandages from his arm and chest. "You did
a good job wrapping up the wounds." "I've had practice." Inside, Kai was
worried. Rei was pale and sweating, his fever spiking through the roof. And
no matter what he did, Rei would not wake up. Taking a bottle full of water,
a wooden bowl, some fresh bandages and a box full of a white powder out
of his bag, he began to work. The doctor mixed together a bit of the water to
the powder in the bowl to make a cream, which he applied to Rei's
forehead, wrapping a bandage around his head to keep it in place. "This will
bring down his fever." The doctor explained. He put away the powder,
bringing out some thick, pearly dark green liquid in a clear phial. "Kai?"
"What?" "When I pour this on his wounds, don't freak out at what is going
to happen, okay?" Kai raised his eyebrow. "Okay..." Unstopping the phial,
he poured it on Rei's wounds. What happened next made Kai's jaw drop.
When the liquid touched Rei's skin, it healed them instantly, one minute the
wounds were covered in green liquid, the next, there were no wounds at all,
only light areas of skin where the injuries were previously. "How did...?
What are you?" Packing up his stuff, Dr. Moon rolled his eyes. "I told you
not to freak. But if you want to know, lets talk over here." Walking over a
few feet away from Rei, Dr. Moon started to explain. "First, my name is not
Dr. Moon. My true identity, though is one you may know well, my true
name is..." At that moment, a loud shriek filled the air. A giant raven
wearing an amethyst and black steel collar swooped in, grabbing Rei in its
talons, flying off to the north. "REI!" Kai yelled, about to go after the bird
when the doctor pulled him back. "No, wait! It would be very foolish to go
after him when you are so ill prepared for what you would have to go
through to get to him!" So as Kai watched helplessly as the evil bird carried
away Rei to the Far North, he knew he would do anything and everything
he could to get him back.
âªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâª Another chapter down...so please review!
-Reviewer Replies-
-Shiroi-Tenshi-Tsubasa-
95 candy bars? No wonder you're hyper. You are forgiven. And yes, there will be more Rei torture (sorry people! it just has to be.)
-SchoolBoredom-
Thanks. And let me explain the gash thing. The feather makes it so that anything that happens in his dreams actually happens, so when he got the gashes in his dream, it happens in real life. It will be explained more later.
-Forfirith-on-a-sugar-high-
Like I said before, what is so great about my stories? What makes them so good? Can you people please help me figure that out? It will help me write better if I know what you guys like. And think about it. In Rei's dream a raven attacked him. He was hurt by a black blade...get it now? ?
-kero-chan39- If you really want to express it more, keep reviewing, please!
-Platinum Rei- Since you asked so enthusiastically, here's the next chapter!
-Devlinn Reiko-sama- You can't rush a good story! (Since you guys think this is a good story, that is..)
âªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâª "What the hell?! What asshole did this?!" Kai swore. His Firebird was
trashed. The sides were dented and its paint scratched, the inside was all
torn up, and the windshield was smashed. It seems that whoever hurt Rei
did not want him to get help for him, because stuck in the shattered
windshield was a dark purple feather. Then his phone rang. "Hello?" "Kai?
It's Dr. Moon. Instead of the hospital, go to 963 Laitselec Circle, go
down the path and meet me there, and do all of this as soon as you can.
Something has come up that we cannot have other people knowing." "Well,
doc, I'll come as soon as I can, but the same person who hurt Rei also
trashed my car, but if they haven't found it and trashed that to, I might have
another means of transportation." "Alright. Just hurry!" The line closed and
Kai put his phone away in his pocket. Kai heard a small whimper from his
arms. He placed a hand to his forehead. Rei was not getting worse, but he
was not getting any better. Shifting Rei so he could use his left arm, he
pressed in a gray tile on the right wall, backing up as light erupted from the
square of the floor that was rising up. On a black metal platform/ramp,
propped up, was a motorcycle. It was made of black metal, with gold armor
on the front, sides and back, along with gold rims for the tires. The armor
was shaped like a phoenix head in the front; it's beak open, with faceted
ruby eyes glinting. The sides were made of two layers, a single smooth
layer under a part shaped into sharp wings, with the back and the back's
guard shaped like a sweeping phoenix tail. (Sorry 'bout the way lame
description...I can't describe cars and motorcycles that well.)Kai sat astride
the black leather upholstered seat, sweeping his coat behind him and setting
Rei in front of him. Putting on his black glasses, he tucked Rei's braid into
His shirt before tying him close to him with some leather cord he had.
"Hold on Rei..." he whispered. Placing a gold key in the slot and turning it,
he started up the engine, shooting off the ramp in a wheelie and onto the
road. When they reached the doctors address, he raised an eyebrow. There
was the large path. That nobody else noticed or went down. Sighing, he
went down the road, and in muttering about crazy doctors, he didn't notice
that the path disappeared, replaced with trees a few minutes later. He
stopped when he reached the edge of a large clearing surrounded by tall
pine trees. Stopping and turning off the engine, he untied him and Rei.
{Where the hell is that Doctor?} Getting off and putting down the
kickstand, he took Rei into his arms bridal style then walked to the middle
of the clearing. "Where the hell are you?" "All around you." Kai's eyebrow
twitched. "Well get your ass down here and help Rei!" in a flash, a figure
stood before Kai. Dr. Moon was wearing white pants and his white jacket
buttoned up, a green blanket in one hand, a white bag in the other. "Lay him
down on this blanket." When they had did so, Dr. Moon took off Rei's shirt,
and unwrapped the now bloody bandages from his arm and chest. "You did
a good job wrapping up the wounds." "I've had practice." Inside, Kai was
worried. Rei was pale and sweating, his fever spiking through the roof. And
no matter what he did, Rei would not wake up. Taking a bottle full of water,
a wooden bowl, some fresh bandages and a box full of a white powder out
of his bag, he began to work. The doctor mixed together a bit of the water to
the powder in the bowl to make a cream, which he applied to Rei's
forehead, wrapping a bandage around his head to keep it in place. "This will
bring down his fever." The doctor explained. He put away the powder,
bringing out some thick, pearly dark green liquid in a clear phial. "Kai?"
"What?" "When I pour this on his wounds, don't freak out at what is going
to happen, okay?" Kai raised his eyebrow. "Okay..." Unstopping the phial,
he poured it on Rei's wounds. What happened next made Kai's jaw drop.
When the liquid touched Rei's skin, it healed them instantly, one minute the
wounds were covered in green liquid, the next, there were no wounds at all,
only light areas of skin where the injuries were previously. "How did...?
What are you?" Packing up his stuff, Dr. Moon rolled his eyes. "I told you
not to freak. But if you want to know, lets talk over here." Walking over a
few feet away from Rei, Dr. Moon started to explain. "First, my name is not
Dr. Moon. My true identity, though is one you may know well, my true
name is..." At that moment, a loud shriek filled the air. A giant raven
wearing an amethyst and black steel collar swooped in, grabbing Rei in its
talons, flying off to the north. "REI!" Kai yelled, about to go after the bird
when the doctor pulled him back. "No, wait! It would be very foolish to go
after him when you are so ill prepared for what you would have to go
through to get to him!" So as Kai watched helplessly as the evil bird carried
away Rei to the Far North, he knew he would do anything and everything
he could to get him back.
âªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâªâª Another chapter down...so please review!