I'm back!!! Now the very first thing I should do is thank my reviewers. Y'all guys were so nice.
Hobbits are Hot: just, keep trying you never know when it'll hit you
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Disclaimer: is in chapter one
To Frodo she showed
A disturbing sight
The Shire in danger
Gave him more urge to fight
Her test she passed
If only by a little
Luckily her strength to resist
Was anything but brittle.
Gifts they received
To help them out
Each would be helpful
I do not doubt
Down the winding river, Anduin
They went with no delay
Until at Parth Galen
They could rest for a day.
Boromir's will against the Ring
Broke apart there
He scared poor Frodo
Without a care
Frodo ran, invisibly
Then he saw Sauron
There was nothing to explain
This frightening phenomenon
The Orks had come
To answer its call
Their job was
To bring the Walker's fall
Aragorn arrived
Just in time
Letting Frodo run
In the meantime
Pippin and Merry
Mislead the Uruk
An advantage that
Frodo soon took
However, their speed
They had miss quessed
So then they soon
Became distressed
Boromir jumped in
To save them fast
It also helped him
To redeem for his past
Sad to say
His life was forfeit
This of course
Made the other's upset
However they had
To leave very fast
For Pippin and Merry
Had finished in last
Frodo and Sam
Want a different way
The correct one
They could only pray
Thus ends
The very first book
Check back in soon
For another look.
Sorry couldn't help myself. Of course I just found something out. I can't find myself in a search. Not that I need to but that will cut down the number of folk who check in.
