Disclaimer: I really hope that own Dragon Ball but I don't (and I really
want Trunks for my self ^-^ or M. Trunks don't mind! jajaja)
Please consider that is my FIRST story and I'm not a native speaker of English, so they're going to be a lot. of errors! Sorry!
* Chapter 1 = Goku Return *
After Goku dies and Bubu is going to come (you know the martial competition when he comes from heaven):
"Are you sure this is the place where Goku is going to appear?" asked Krillin.
" Yeah" Gohan responds.
Not seconds past after a noise came from the sky. They all look up and they see Goku (with the gold aureola on his head), he comes with a witch on crystal ball and a girl of about Goten or Trunks age (six years)
"Hi!" said a very cheerful Goku "miss me?"
Everyone went to hug Goku except a little boy with black spikes who hide behind Chichi. Goku saw him and said:
" I didn't know I had another child!" and got Goten into a hug.
After all the hugs, kisses, ect. from everybody. Vegeta made a comment:
" Who's that girl?" looking at the cute girl.
They all turn the heads to the little girl. She was dressed with a simple orange kimono (The one Goku wears but in girl), with her brown looking curiously at everyone, her also brown hair was in a little ponytail, and she had a cute look! They couldn't see she's back because she was like hiding something.
*Who's that little girl? What has to do with Goku?!?! See it in the next chapter! *
Now after you read this (horrible) story review (you now that little button down there!) BUT PLEASE NOOOOO FLAMING! Only regular comments or good comments (no lots of last one surely!)
Please consider that is my FIRST story and I'm not a native speaker of English, so they're going to be a lot. of errors! Sorry!
* Chapter 1 = Goku Return *
After Goku dies and Bubu is going to come (you know the martial competition when he comes from heaven):
"Are you sure this is the place where Goku is going to appear?" asked Krillin.
" Yeah" Gohan responds.
Not seconds past after a noise came from the sky. They all look up and they see Goku (with the gold aureola on his head), he comes with a witch on crystal ball and a girl of about Goten or Trunks age (six years)
"Hi!" said a very cheerful Goku "miss me?"
Everyone went to hug Goku except a little boy with black spikes who hide behind Chichi. Goku saw him and said:
" I didn't know I had another child!" and got Goten into a hug.
After all the hugs, kisses, ect. from everybody. Vegeta made a comment:
" Who's that girl?" looking at the cute girl.
They all turn the heads to the little girl. She was dressed with a simple orange kimono (The one Goku wears but in girl), with her brown looking curiously at everyone, her also brown hair was in a little ponytail, and she had a cute look! They couldn't see she's back because she was like hiding something.
*Who's that little girl? What has to do with Goku?!?! See it in the next chapter! *
Now after you read this (horrible) story review (you now that little button down there!) BUT PLEASE NOOOOO FLAMING! Only regular comments or good comments (no lots of last one surely!)