The Biggest Regret Was Letting You Go...
Chapter Three: A Goddess
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Before starting I just want you to know that I can't be updating or won't be updating for 2 weeks, I have an exam, in math and English, and you know I'm not good at English so does math, I told my teacher in English to give me a week for reviewing so hope you guys will understand, but I told my sister to update my chapter on Saturday, but I don't think I can update here, she'll be updating my chapter in my story A LONG WAY TO LOVE. It's an Achilles and Briseis Fan Fiction too, so hope you drop some reviews there, See yah soon! =D
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After a few hours of searching, a group of soldiers came to tell that they saw a woman near the ocean. He quickly came to where the women is, hoping that that's his slave. He didn't failed, he saw Briseis lying at the sand. He came to her and carried her back to his chamber. He put her slowly at his bed and he changed Briseis's wet robes with a new one. He wet down a piece of rugged clothes then wipe her sanded face, as he wiped her face, Briseis woke up and saw him, he wasn't angry nor happy to see her wake up, instead he stood up then left the room.
He left Briseis alone in his chamber; Briseis saw Achilles's expression and that made her guilty for leaving and trying to run away from him, She curled herself at the bed then started crying, She sobbed as she wipes her tears. 'Why did I even tried to run away from him, now his angry at me, what do I care, its his fault...if he didn't hurt me and shouted at me, maybe I wouldn't run away...' she said to herself still curling herself. She wiped her last tear then stood up, When she was about to open the door for some air, it suddenly showed Achilles's big and muscular figure as he blocked her with his angry look. "Are you trying to run again?!" He jeered. "I ran away because you...because...never mind.." She replied silently as she looked down. "Because what?!" He asked furiously. "Just forget it!" she replied angrily. "Look! If you run away again, I'll sell you! Or worst, I'll give you to my men!" He threaten her. She gave an 'TRY ME' expression to him but still scared inside her thoughts, She wanted to say sorry to him but didn't want to make Achilles's laugh at her. "Go to sleep now! We'll continue our discussion tomorrow!" He retorted back at her then lay to his bed for a sleep. As Briseis sat down at the floor then get a rug and covered her cold body with it as she tried to sleep, She couldn't, she keeps on thinking and seeing what had happened a few hours ago, The way he shouted at her and the way her hurt her. 'That's ok, his my master anyway.' But all she can remember directly is Stanislas, her old master, the way he was attacking her like a beast. That made her started to cry a bit. But she just remembered the way Achilles looked at her the moment she opened her eyes as he washed her face with a wet towel.
'I saw love and worries in his eyes, his ocean-blue eyes, his warm touch...how can a monster like him makes my heart beat faster, am I falling for him? A man that can kill anyone he likes, a man like him that only loves glory, victory and war...' she thought, she shook her head up and down fastly. 'No! You can't fall in love to him! Remember what he did to your family, Briseis.' She lectured herself.
Next Morning, She opened her eyes and saw Achilles's took off his sleepwear. How his fine body looks, she didn't saw any bruises nor scars from war. She played asleep as he wore his war toga then breastplate, she realized that Achilles is coming towards her, She closed her eyes then didn't move a bit, He sat next to her at the ground and search her body with his eyes. After a few while he stood up and left his chamber. That time Briseis quickly stood up; she folded the rug then puts it under Achilles's bed. Just in time the door opened and showed Achilles. Briseis almost jumped when the door opened. Achilles smiled a little then said "I knew you where awake." He said plainly. Briseis touched her robes the replied. "I just woke up!" she replied quietly as she combs her soft, chestnut and brown curly hair. He looked at her with a look of a man towards a woman. "I know when a man or a man is asleep or not. "He replied plainly. "Really? Then how?" she asked looking at him in the eye.
"It's simple." He spoke silently as he come closer to her and he continued. "I saw you looking at me when I was naked and You where exploring me while I get dressed." He spoke with lust and that made Briseis's a bit annoyed. But he came closer and closer to her, tempting her to kiss his lips. A few centimeters more, She pushed him away slightly then spoke "What do you want me to do Milord?" she asked politely. He smirked then replied. "Nothing, oh-just give me a bath when I come back." He replied a bit arrogantly then started walking.
After he left she went outside to gather water for her masters bathe. After long hours, its already night and he arrived with wet body and blood on his face and arms. He laid his blade on his bed and his helmet on the table. She came to him to help him took his armor off. When she was about to help him, Achilles said. "I don't need your help, slave, get my bathe ready!" he ordered, the word 'slave' made her angry. She didn't react, she just walked away where the basin is and he took a bath.
She sat at the ground where she usually sat and sleep. He looked at her and sat down near her, He putted the breastplate near her then said. "Eat!" he said, he started eating as she just looked at him then curled herself. "You don't want to eat slave?!" he asked arrogantly. "I might be a slave! But treat me as a human being too!" she retorted and that made Achilles's look at her, Flashing a bit of his anger then spoke. "So tell me, what's your name?" he asked arrogantly once again. She didn't replied; she just looked down and bit her lower lip. "You didn't heard me? I asked what's your name!" he ordered her angrily.
"You don't deserve to know my name!" she replied sardonically. "I deserve to! I'm your master, I bought you! So tell me your name, slave before I hurt you!" He said angrily, his eyes turning from icy to quizzical. She looked at his eyes without fears. "Your right...I'm just your slave, you bought me from that old man and I should thank you for that..." she whispered plainly looking at the ground. What he said made his heart melt a bit. " But still I won't tell you my name!" she spoke firmly. That made his angry again. 'This women is crazy!' he thought. He stood up angrily then starts to open the door but before he went outside he made her tell her name.
"If you tell me your name I will give you 3 days of freedom!" he spoke a bit angry and annoyed wanting to get back what he said. 'Damn it! Why did I say that! I don't need to give her something in exchange of her name!' he said to his self. "She didn't replied once again and that made him want to freak. He turned around again then she spoke. "3 days isn't enough!" she replied silently and strongly. "How many days do you want?" he asked. "5 days!" she spoke. 'Man! This women really wants freedom!' he thought. " Deal! What's your name then?!" he asked coolly. "Briseis..." she whispered but loudly. "Nice name!" he said plainly then left the room. 'No one ever told me that I have a nice name...ever before...' she said to herself smiling a bit.
As he left the room he walked for a few steps then said to himself. 'Briseis...Briseis...wow...it's smooth in my tongue to say briseis...' he thought. After a while he went back to his chamber as he saw Briseis, his slave, sleeps like an angel. He came closer and closer to her and looked at her. 'I didn't know she is pretty, her hair that has the color of chestnut, with curls, soft and brown curls as her eyes are as dark as chocolate...her small body that fits her and make her a true beauty...she doesn't fit for a slave, she should be a princess no.... a goddess...' he said to himself.
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A/N: "so...is this okay? Or should I change something? My grammar? My writing? Story? All or make the chapter longer shorter? Heheh so questionable am I? Heheh! Well don't forget to give me some reviews =D thanks guys.
Trojans
Thanks To:
Addicted2FanFics :-p – Okie Dockie! I'll make them together because I'm an Achilles and Briseis's Crazy Fan too =D
Baphomet – thank you very much, I am very happy to know that I have a great story =P
Donna Lynn – okie, more and more are coming up!
Maui – yes, I know, horror in my grammar, sorry for that, heheh, I'm a Korean and im just starting to study English, ahmm...I had been studying English for almost 3 weeks and well...what can my small brain do? Heheh thanks for your reviews =D.
Yin/Yang Demon – yup...I understand, I'll try my best to spell and fix it soon =)
Candice – thank you for your review (0o)
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Chapter Three: A Goddess
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Before starting I just want you to know that I can't be updating or won't be updating for 2 weeks, I have an exam, in math and English, and you know I'm not good at English so does math, I told my teacher in English to give me a week for reviewing so hope you guys will understand, but I told my sister to update my chapter on Saturday, but I don't think I can update here, she'll be updating my chapter in my story A LONG WAY TO LOVE. It's an Achilles and Briseis Fan Fiction too, so hope you drop some reviews there, See yah soon! =D
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After a few hours of searching, a group of soldiers came to tell that they saw a woman near the ocean. He quickly came to where the women is, hoping that that's his slave. He didn't failed, he saw Briseis lying at the sand. He came to her and carried her back to his chamber. He put her slowly at his bed and he changed Briseis's wet robes with a new one. He wet down a piece of rugged clothes then wipe her sanded face, as he wiped her face, Briseis woke up and saw him, he wasn't angry nor happy to see her wake up, instead he stood up then left the room.
He left Briseis alone in his chamber; Briseis saw Achilles's expression and that made her guilty for leaving and trying to run away from him, She curled herself at the bed then started crying, She sobbed as she wipes her tears. 'Why did I even tried to run away from him, now his angry at me, what do I care, its his fault...if he didn't hurt me and shouted at me, maybe I wouldn't run away...' she said to herself still curling herself. She wiped her last tear then stood up, When she was about to open the door for some air, it suddenly showed Achilles's big and muscular figure as he blocked her with his angry look. "Are you trying to run again?!" He jeered. "I ran away because you...because...never mind.." She replied silently as she looked down. "Because what?!" He asked furiously. "Just forget it!" she replied angrily. "Look! If you run away again, I'll sell you! Or worst, I'll give you to my men!" He threaten her. She gave an 'TRY ME' expression to him but still scared inside her thoughts, She wanted to say sorry to him but didn't want to make Achilles's laugh at her. "Go to sleep now! We'll continue our discussion tomorrow!" He retorted back at her then lay to his bed for a sleep. As Briseis sat down at the floor then get a rug and covered her cold body with it as she tried to sleep, She couldn't, she keeps on thinking and seeing what had happened a few hours ago, The way he shouted at her and the way her hurt her. 'That's ok, his my master anyway.' But all she can remember directly is Stanislas, her old master, the way he was attacking her like a beast. That made her started to cry a bit. But she just remembered the way Achilles looked at her the moment she opened her eyes as he washed her face with a wet towel.
'I saw love and worries in his eyes, his ocean-blue eyes, his warm touch...how can a monster like him makes my heart beat faster, am I falling for him? A man that can kill anyone he likes, a man like him that only loves glory, victory and war...' she thought, she shook her head up and down fastly. 'No! You can't fall in love to him! Remember what he did to your family, Briseis.' She lectured herself.
Next Morning, She opened her eyes and saw Achilles's took off his sleepwear. How his fine body looks, she didn't saw any bruises nor scars from war. She played asleep as he wore his war toga then breastplate, she realized that Achilles is coming towards her, She closed her eyes then didn't move a bit, He sat next to her at the ground and search her body with his eyes. After a few while he stood up and left his chamber. That time Briseis quickly stood up; she folded the rug then puts it under Achilles's bed. Just in time the door opened and showed Achilles. Briseis almost jumped when the door opened. Achilles smiled a little then said "I knew you where awake." He said plainly. Briseis touched her robes the replied. "I just woke up!" she replied quietly as she combs her soft, chestnut and brown curly hair. He looked at her with a look of a man towards a woman. "I know when a man or a man is asleep or not. "He replied plainly. "Really? Then how?" she asked looking at him in the eye.
"It's simple." He spoke silently as he come closer to her and he continued. "I saw you looking at me when I was naked and You where exploring me while I get dressed." He spoke with lust and that made Briseis's a bit annoyed. But he came closer and closer to her, tempting her to kiss his lips. A few centimeters more, She pushed him away slightly then spoke "What do you want me to do Milord?" she asked politely. He smirked then replied. "Nothing, oh-just give me a bath when I come back." He replied a bit arrogantly then started walking.
After he left she went outside to gather water for her masters bathe. After long hours, its already night and he arrived with wet body and blood on his face and arms. He laid his blade on his bed and his helmet on the table. She came to him to help him took his armor off. When she was about to help him, Achilles said. "I don't need your help, slave, get my bathe ready!" he ordered, the word 'slave' made her angry. She didn't react, she just walked away where the basin is and he took a bath.
She sat at the ground where she usually sat and sleep. He looked at her and sat down near her, He putted the breastplate near her then said. "Eat!" he said, he started eating as she just looked at him then curled herself. "You don't want to eat slave?!" he asked arrogantly. "I might be a slave! But treat me as a human being too!" she retorted and that made Achilles's look at her, Flashing a bit of his anger then spoke. "So tell me, what's your name?" he asked arrogantly once again. She didn't replied; she just looked down and bit her lower lip. "You didn't heard me? I asked what's your name!" he ordered her angrily.
"You don't deserve to know my name!" she replied sardonically. "I deserve to! I'm your master, I bought you! So tell me your name, slave before I hurt you!" He said angrily, his eyes turning from icy to quizzical. She looked at his eyes without fears. "Your right...I'm just your slave, you bought me from that old man and I should thank you for that..." she whispered plainly looking at the ground. What he said made his heart melt a bit. " But still I won't tell you my name!" she spoke firmly. That made his angry again. 'This women is crazy!' he thought. He stood up angrily then starts to open the door but before he went outside he made her tell her name.
"If you tell me your name I will give you 3 days of freedom!" he spoke a bit angry and annoyed wanting to get back what he said. 'Damn it! Why did I say that! I don't need to give her something in exchange of her name!' he said to his self. "She didn't replied once again and that made him want to freak. He turned around again then she spoke. "3 days isn't enough!" she replied silently and strongly. "How many days do you want?" he asked. "5 days!" she spoke. 'Man! This women really wants freedom!' he thought. " Deal! What's your name then?!" he asked coolly. "Briseis..." she whispered but loudly. "Nice name!" he said plainly then left the room. 'No one ever told me that I have a nice name...ever before...' she said to herself smiling a bit.
As he left the room he walked for a few steps then said to himself. 'Briseis...Briseis...wow...it's smooth in my tongue to say briseis...' he thought. After a while he went back to his chamber as he saw Briseis, his slave, sleeps like an angel. He came closer and closer to her and looked at her. 'I didn't know she is pretty, her hair that has the color of chestnut, with curls, soft and brown curls as her eyes are as dark as chocolate...her small body that fits her and make her a true beauty...she doesn't fit for a slave, she should be a princess no.... a goddess...' he said to himself.
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A/N: "so...is this okay? Or should I change something? My grammar? My writing? Story? All or make the chapter longer shorter? Heheh so questionable am I? Heheh! Well don't forget to give me some reviews =D thanks guys.
Trojans
Thanks To:
Addicted2FanFics :-p – Okie Dockie! I'll make them together because I'm an Achilles and Briseis's Crazy Fan too =D
Baphomet – thank you very much, I am very happy to know that I have a great story =P
Donna Lynn – okie, more and more are coming up!
Maui – yes, I know, horror in my grammar, sorry for that, heheh, I'm a Korean and im just starting to study English, ahmm...I had been studying English for almost 3 weeks and well...what can my small brain do? Heheh thanks for your reviews =D.
Yin/Yang Demon – yup...I understand, I'll try my best to spell and fix it soon =)
Candice – thank you for your review (0o)
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