Author: Well, cheers for the flame!
Rei: Yeah man... keep flaming him, he's bound to stop if you people...
Author –whacks Rei- ignore him, he's just sore from last night with Kai, you see Kai...
Kai: there's no need to tell the world Author!
Author: ok ok cool it
Kai: Also you have another matter to attend to Author
Author?
Kai: the (erhem)
Author: oh yeah, I decided to feature two of my favourite reviews this time, considering that everyone else seems to. Kai can you do the honours
Kai: with pleasure the first is an interesting review by a certain worst nightmare, before we get into this one Author, what's you're worst nightmare?
Author: hmmmmmm that's a hard one
Kai: I'll tell you mine, -whisper into Author's ear-
Author. okkkkkkk kai that's nice, well it has summat to do with Tyso... (is cut off be had over mouth)
Kai: I said NOT to tell them!
Author ok ok, seesh!
Kai: good, and besides you wouldn't want anyone to know you're worst nightmare. He's afraid of those...
Author –whacks kai- just read the damn review
Kai: Please dun hurt me!
Author: o.0
Kai: anyway here we go!
This is so crap and retarded. What absolute rubbish! Shit like this should'nt be allowed in fanfiction net. Get another hobby loser. Mwah!
Author: well I'm glad that my story had such an impact to make you write me a review, and SIGN it, woah that's even better! I would however like to see some of you're work so I could see what should be allowed on . Also you read through 18,000 WORDS! JEEZ MAN YOU SPENT ALL THAT TIME... seesh, plus I dunno, I assume you a guy, you must have enjoyed chapter 9... lol! (PS. there's a spelling error!) see if anyone can spot it!
Kai: The second of our reviews is a very distraught girl and I personally side with her on this one
Author: cheers kai!
Kai: errrrrr whatever anywho she says
maybe I tell you something Authorboy-uk I see your guy! so if I were I wound't write stories about things you don't know of! A girl (which I am and very proud) know that when a girl gets overally excited she does not soak her pants her pussy does not drip like a fountain, just bits of stuff fall out and you can't see it! so please don't write crap about the female body because I will hunt you down! I hope you understand and follow Thank you!
Author: I never knew that, I'm not too good at getting girls excited lol! I'm sorry if I was technically inaccurate, I am a boy yes. "bits fall out" errrrrrr that's kinda worrying when you think about it but who am I to say, please don't hunt me down, I need to like... live. Also you dunno that I was implying, she could have been doing anything, Miriam could have snuck her hand up her skirt and who knows, she could have wet herself! Sorry if I offended you, being a simple teenager I can't help my actions
Kai: ok that's it for know
Rei: -wakes up- what happened, Kai what hap...
Kai –putting foot on rei's face- don't call me kai!
Rei: Sorry master
Kai: that's better –leashes Rei and walks off-
Author: okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Author: Let's roll on after those shenanigans!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ After Emily's spectacular victory the girls were one up. As they were congratulating and patting Emily on the back they heard a small whimper. On the ground was Kyoko, sobbing. She'd been badly beaten up and having been weak from the last attack she looked to be fading. Emily rushed to Kyoko's side.
"No" she stammered "You... you'll be ok" She cradled the sobbing Kyoko. Kyoko tried to speak but only blood came out of her mouth. Emily was now sobbing uncontrollably. The others could only look on, trying to absorb the terror of the past hour's events.
"Kyoko, I'm here, it's ok now I've defeated them". Emily comforted. Kyoko just managed to utter
"It... hurts" before her head dropped lifelessly. Emily felt for a pulse to her joy Kyoko had not died.
"Kyoko, I'll get you to a hospital". Turning back to the other bladers for support, but they didn't move. "Well don't just stand there," shouted Emily. The now submissive Kaira was crying her eyes out while the others stood motionless.
"We must" started Reiura "stay". Emily eyes filled with more tears as she remembered
"Yes" she said under her breath "go save Hillary, I'll look after Kyoko." Emily was trying in vein to wake Kyoko up. The other bladers merely looked on helplessly.
"Wake up" said Emily "Wake up, you have to, so I can..." she trailed off.
"Show my love for you!" Everyone gasped. Emily without thinking slowly pressed her lips onto Kyoko's blood stained ones. The tangy taste of blood was like an acid to her heart as she took Kyoko's mouth. Mariah and Mariam witnessed this act of true love and smiled at each other. Slowly but surely Kyoko fed off Emily's love and opened her hazed eyes. Looking into Emily's pupils she kissed her new found lover. Emily picked up Kyoko and carried her towards home. She paused a minute
"you go get em girls" and with that she and Kyoko disappeared over the Horizon. Reiura turned to everyone else
"Ok, we've seen them play! We can get the better of them!" Reiura continued this warm up speech and they headed towards the warehouse. Before they could get there four unknown bladers dropping from the sky intercepted them. They landed and stood in the girls way
"ohhhhh, what do we have here" they said mockingly
"yeah some little girls lost their way".
Kaira hid behind Reiura at this point. Miriam and Mariah were livid,
"Fine" they said simultaneously "let us show you what a girl can do".
"Yeah" said Reiura stepping forth. Kaira who had changed greatly from when she was a boy was very afraid. She said nothing.
"ohhhhh a quiet one" one of the boys mocked. Kaira turned away and a nervous blush filled her face. This was making Reiura more and more angry. Before she could do anything a beystadium appeared before them. Takara and Maxine took the sidelines in this battle. Emanating the call from Maxine came
"3..." everyone tensed
"2..." muscles seized
"1..." blood pumped "let...it...rip! At this the 8 bladers launched their blades in synchronicity. The bit beasts sensing their master's distress went at the strange vibrating the blades the boys were using with incredible intensity. There were so many sparks it was hard to see what was going on. It seemed every man (or girl in this case) for herself. While the battle was going on two men grabbed Maxine and Takara
"not again" was all Takara could utter before she was curled up in an uncomfortable position and bound up.
"This is getting out of hand," said Reiura "you people are sick". The other bladers laughed
"Yes, yes we are!" Kaira had heard enough, she was crying heavily causing her blade to lurch forward like a bullet. The others watched on in amazement as Dranzer appeared. Kaira fell to the ground and continued crying. On one knee she began to get even more stressed and without realising it she was making Dranzer more and more powerful. The two men seeing how Kaira was now fending off all four of their team set their sights on the four girl bladers. Miriam tried to resist but Reiura said
"no" Reiura had put her complete faith in her lover by giving herself up. Neither Miriam nor Mariah understood but submitted, as they were knocked unconscious. Their blades stopped spinning and were knocked well out of the dish. Only Kaira was still in. The men each took a hand and bound her hands. Dranzer's attack intensified. As they tied her legs Dranzer ignited in a 2-meter high flame. Little did they know that they were making Dranzer stronger and stronger. They were beating Kaira like a doll. It took Dranzer about 3 seconds to ignite the dish. The four bladers and the men ran for their lives as the flame from the dish engulfed they're blades melting them into liquid. It had been done Kaira limp and frail untied herself and caught her blade. Falling over from the impact she lied down. She'd done it... no she decided Dranzer had done it! Eventually everyone woke up and Takara and Maxine were freed. All were celebrating.
"Wow Kaira" said Reiura "Dranzer really came through for us didn't she?" All were laughing but were suddenly brought down to earth by a scream from a distant Hillary. Takara and Maxine gulped.
"We're not gonna let the side down!" they shouted together "we're coming Hillary, we're coming". It'd been long and difficult, they'd suffered a lot of pain, been tied up, beaten, but they were still ready to play. Just as they were about to enter two of the girls let out cried of anguish. It seemed that the battle had taken it's toll. Reiura and Miriam carried off their lovers leaving Takara and Maxine alone. After watching them leave Kaira and Maxine strode determinedly to meet their last challenge they knew it would be hard, it'd be their turn next and they had to win no matter what!