Kai: well here we go again it is time for –glomp-
Rei: well here we go again its time for Rei's and Author's review corner
Author: whatever you say!
Rei: right here's our first review!
Gigi i sux startin frm de 1st chappie i knew it. i stopped rite dere and den. u sux man.
Author: HAHA he just said he sucks! Look at that, somehow he knew this from the beginning of the story
Rei: I would like to mention that the reviews are in no way tampered with, if you don't believe me check out the review itself from "gigi"
Author: what a dumbass that guy was NEXT!
Reis-tigress Love the change in looks as well as personality, it's a very original idea and i love it. hugs Authorboy i hope you keep it up cos i love reading your work.
Author: I got a hug!
Everyone: awwwwwww
Author: shaddup! Thanks for the review, guys you should check out her fic "A change of Pace (complete)" it really is quite amazing, if someone who can write like she does comments my work, then I gotta be doin summat right!
This is the link for A change of pace(warning contains M/M bondage and implied That fic was really good, I think its given me some ideas for Kai- chan!
Author: it's not real?
Rei:... um –hesitantly- no of course not
Kai: WHAT!
Rei: it was just... a spell
Kai: WHHAATT!
Author: lovers quarrel, and its gay, better stay out! Check out the chapter men!
- It was shaping to be an uneventful evening, Mariah and Miriam had gone for a night out, and the breakers were left staring at the ceiling listening to the strange sounds coming out of Emily's room. "Jeez" said Kaira "I didn't know such a little girl could scream!".
"I know!" said Reiura "You didn't scream that much when I took you!". To this Kaira blushed brightly. They were talking amongst themselves, when suddenly the lights cut and the TV turned off. The breakers went silent trying not to panic Little did they know that upstairs a dark figure had clicked the lock on Emily's room. Like a cat burglar he rummaged through their rooms as if looking for something important. He finally gave up. He was amazingly calm for a man who had snuck into someone else's place. Finally he leapt down into the pitch-black living room
It was too dark to see anything. The girls having been through so much were silent, hoping to catch the intruder without him seeing them. Suddenly there was a thud and a muffled scream from Maxine. The intruder had hit her, hard. She fell to the ground. "ungh" she said slightly dazed "Who's there!" Kaira clutched onto Reiura while Takara braced her self. There was silence for some time, nothing was happening, then the man spoke: "So, it has come to this" he stated
"What do you mean?" shouted Takara.
"Be patient, remember I can see you, but you can't see me".
"Oh yeah" said Takara. Takara struck the air in anger.
"Ha" laughed the intruder. "I have come for them," he said solemnly.
"Who hasn't" said Reiura drawing her blade.
"I like that" said the intruder "getting down to business".
"Come on," said Kaira finally speaking.
"Ah" said the intruder "The sweet and loveable Kaira, sister to the sour and hateful Kai!"
"You just watch what you say about my brother," warned Kaira. "You're so cute when you're angry," said the intruder. "Very well, we will battle but first let me introduce myself" began the intruder "I am Tatoshima, holder of the Massimo blade".
"Doesn't matter what blade you hold" said Reiura "Let's battle"
"Foolish little girl, allow me to demonstrate the power of the Massimo."
Tatoshima launched his blade, Maxine was now unconscious. The blade flew through the air and skimmed the edge of Kaira's cheek. This fouled her launch and Dranzer flew around the room before landing. She fell to one knee and the blade came around and caught her on the other cheek. Kaira screamed as the blade came round and caught her lips. Her scream dis - focused Reiura and Takara whose blades hit each other in mid air before landing. Kaira clutched her face. "What happened?" said Reiura "Kaira!" she shouted. Kaira's eyes filled with tears and soon there was a mix of tears and blood dripping down her face. "C'mon" said Takara "This guy's gotta pay" she said "Dragoon attack". Reiura facefaulted. "How are you meant to attack him when you can't see him of his blade" shouted Reiura. Takara came to realisation as dragoon hit a wall. "What are we to do?" cried Kaira. Tatoshima fielded this question. "Remember back at the warehouse" said Tatoshima "I bet you thought you were pretty good, well guess what?"
"Shut up," said Reiura "you can't win!"
"There's only one thing you forget" said Tatoshima "WHAT," said a crying Kaira, "I'm holding all the cards now!" said Tatoshima. He was right for in the dark his power intensified.
It didn't look good; the bladebreakers could here their blades being thrashed but couldn't do a thing about it. Tatoshima's blade was all over Dragoon and Drigger, seemingly blinded he laid waste to them. The blades were bouncing off all the walls. Tatoshima was taking complete control of the battle. Reiura could hardly fight as she was comforting Kaira. Dranzer's attack ring was grind into the ground loosing speed slowly. Suddenly Takara had an inspired moment; something about seeing the crying form of Kaira reminded him of Reiura's battle with team Psychic. "Hey" said Takara "Reiura remember how you defeated batanzer!" Reiura needed no more help, Forming the sign of the tiger she shut her eyes "Takara" said Reiura "yeah Reiura" replied Takara "Thanks". Takara nodded and also shut her eyes forming the sign of the dragon. What happened next is hard to explain. To this day neither Rei of Tyson know exactly what happened. The room seemed to be swallowed by a black energy "arghhh" said Tatoshima "How, it's so dark there's absolutely no light in this room, it doesn't make any sense!" Light shot out of Reiura and Takara and combined into one. It formed a strange beast A terrifying sound was it's cry and in lunged straight into Tatoshima, knocking him to within an inch of death. It entered his body and he glowed blue for a while, before fainting into unconsciousness.
It was over, no question; Tatoshima was lying on the ground, while Takara and Reiura nursed their lovers. Soon Maxine and Kaira came round. Kaira was still crying but at least she was stable. Tala and Hillary came in, seemingly as if from nowhere. Striding in as if nothing happened they were shocked so find the girls in such a state. After some intense explaining the situation was under control, there was one thing that Tala and his bitch wanted to know (lol). Where were Emily and Kyoko? Slowly the whole group crept upstairs to Emily's room. Opening the door they couldn't believe what they saw. There were two naked girls. Kyoko's face was being forced into Emily's dripping pussy. "I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU SHAGGED THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE THING!" said Hillary. "you...". "Oops" said Emily as Kyoko passed out from lack of air. - Mariah: Hey I wasn't in that chapter
Miriam: Neither was I
Mariah: awwwwww! man, why couldn't Author snoop on our night out?
Miriam: Indeed, but what was that night about anyway
Mariah: hmmm I'm not sure
Miriam: must have got drunk...
Mariah: wait I remember
Miriam: go on!
Mariah: you remember we were at that over 21's bar
Miriam: how did we get in anyway, we didn't look anywhere hear that age!
Mariah: sigh the doorman was a paedophile so you gave him a blowjob!
Miriam: I did?!
Mariah: yes... You did
Miriam: I don't remember that!
Mariah: -puts finger on Miriam's lips- well anyway we were there and our favourite song came on!
Miriam: Oh yeah and we were dancing and we were kissing and feeling each other and such!
Mariah: oh yeah and then a group of about 20 men saw us
Miriam: I remember each of them!
Mariah: yeah we were dragged into a separate room and raped!
Miriam: I wouldn't call it that!
Mariah: neither would I
Miriam: I still have the marks! They even hung me for a laugh
Mariah: there's a lesson here kids!
Miriam: what is it?
Mariah: next time you go into an over 21's bar filled with men bring some lube!
Miriam: and a first aid kit!
Author: WTF was that?
Mariah: well you asked us to talk about something truly unbelievable
Author: you were raped by 20 men?
Miriam: yeah
Author: ALL AT ONCE?
Mariah: no we were sorta tossed around –literally-
Author: goodness!
Author: well there's gross out!
Mariah: they even took a picture of Miriam to keepsake
Author: they were in the picture?
Miriam: No they dun wan to get arrested... Hey readers do you want to see the pic
Author: let me see first! –looks- Omigod!
Miriam: good aint it?
Author:...
Mariah: what Author means to say is that if he gets 10 more reviews you will see this picture LITERALY!
Author: -nods-