Teepers: because you asked so nicely (unlike some ppl) you are now Follower #9 review what name you want to be known by.

sapphireSword: thanks we are now in the temple and I just got to the big boss door but the fountain that I am supposed to used to jump to the door...wouldn't go on?

TPfan333: don'take me off your fav list, I'm only on 3!

Ok we've come to an end to the votes. So let the story continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We last saw Cliff Hanger, hanging from a cliff! "Can't...hold...on...much...longer!"

Tristian was the guy Numair turned into a tree.

ending of last chapter:

"So who was your favorite character?" Before he could answer I pointed at him and added, "If you say Thayet, I'm going to kill you!"
Now he got into the conversation. "Oh, no! I hated her! She was such a preppy. No I liked......."

Ch 6 continued:

......Alanna. She was so cool. At first, I kept thinking she was going to quit and go home. And when she told Coram she was going to leave, and how it all worked, I finally started to like the story. And that fight with Roger! That was so cool! And then I was kind of shocked when I found out that Alex went all evil, and tried to kill her with a practice sword."

This whole time that he was talking, I was trying to hold in a laugh. I mean come on, a guy who likes Alanna!!!!!!!

Ok I'm not going to write down the rest of what we said cause it would take too long. So lets summarize. We kept talking about Alanna and how she should have killed Alex a lot sooner and how it wasn't right that Alanna cheated on George, or how Roger came back to life, until it was what's his name's turn to order.

After we both ordered our pizza and drinks, (he got pepperoni and I got cheese.) we sat down at some random table. We took bites as we talked about the guys of the book. "Do you think that Alanna should have married Jon?" I asked. He took a huge bite then said with his mouth full,(kind of a turn off)

"No, after Alanna left, he seemed to get cocky or something."

"I know! You would think that Raoul or Gary would keep him in line, but no, he became a jerk."

"seriously."

"I'm glad she married George."

"I don't know. I think she should have stayed with Liam."

"Liam? Liam was scared of her magic, it would have never worked."

He seemed very serious as he said, "They could have worked it out, so that he didn't have to be around when she used her gift or something."

"They both had huge tempers, they would have fought all the time and never resolve any thing."

"Ok, you've got a point there." We didn't talk after that. We just....ate in...silence. It wasn't that uncomfortable kind of thing though, we were just eating.

Then I finally asked, "What's your name?" He looked up at me with a piece of cheese hanging from his mouth. I laughed and pull it out and dropped it on his plate. He blushed (Did I already say he looks cuter when he blushes?) and wiped his mouth.

"It's um, Tristan. (Ok, to those who have read the second book of Immortals, that name range a bell, and not a good one. (Go to the top of page if you don't remember)) I didn't tell him what I thought about his name. Even though I took it as a bad omen.

I just smiled and said, "Weird name for a punk."

"I know, it sounds like a jock's name, I hate it." He smiled at me (the smile really reminded me of George) "So what's your name? You know mine its fair I know yours." He sounded flirty, which got me going. (Ok I never said this before but I have flirty things to say coming out of my ears) I smiled as I thought of the perfect response. I had been wanting to say this to some one for a long time.

Lowering my voice to a whisper, kind of pouting my lips (guys seem to like that) "To know a person's name is to have power over them." With that, I stood up and walked to a trashcan and threw away my trash. I then looked back at Tristan and blew him a kiss, then walked toward Jess. (I had seen her earlier, before I stood up) I grabbed her arm and told her just to come with me.

When we got around a corner where I knew he couldn't see us, I let go of Jess. "Why did you do that, I'm hunger." She pouted.

"We'll go back later....I just met a guy." a smiled worked its way on my face.

"Did you get his number?"

"No." I said still smiling.

"Then what are you doing? Go back."

"Jess, I just made a really good exit. Plus," I reached in to one of the many pockets in my new pants. "I have his wallet."

Jess smiled too, after that. "Girl, you're good.

We found a bench and I told her what had happened. When I told her about the name line, she laughed so hard. But I didn't tell her what I thought of his name, she hasn't read that book yet. "Oh, and look at this." I pulled out the rock that looked like the Dominion Jewel and showed Jess.

"Dana you really are obsessed, you know that?"

I smiled a smile that George would be proud of. "Of course I am. What kind of Leader would I be if I wasn't obsessed?" Jess rolled her eyes and stood up.

"I bet he's gone now so lets go, I'm still hungry." I got off the bench and followed her. When we got near the table I was sitting at with Tristan, I looked around for him, not wanting to run into him. I didn't want to ruin my perfect exit. But he wasn't there, so I got in line with Jess for Del Taco.

After I sat for what seemed like forever watching Jess slowly eat those Gods cursed tacos, we finally went to find a phone. Jess called her mom and told her to come pick us up. Then we went to one last store before we left. Glow. (For those who have never heard of Glow, it's a store with glow in the dark stuff, lava lamps, stupid joke magnets, and a lot of things not meant for little kids)

We looked at the ass that blew bubbles then at the stupid magnets. There was also this poster that when you looked at it, you got dizzy. Then this thing with nails, and you can make a hand print in it. (I have so far made a hand print, the finger, my face, my lips, got to think of more things to do with that thing.)

After that, we ran out side the mall just as Jess's mom pulled up. Inside the car, we talked about the stuff we bought and other things like what Melissa did. I wasn't paying attention to that part.

Jess asked her mom if I could spend the night, she said she didn't care. As long as I would help make dinner. I said I didn't mind.

When we got back, we made dinner. A very big Mexican stile dinner. It took forever to cook it all. But very yummy.(lots of salsa)
After we finished dinner, Jess went strait for the shower, she had said that she smelled like rotten eggs? And I went strait to the bedroom to see what was in Tristan's wallet. Hehe, I had fun.

So now I'm in the bathroom writing all this. (I don't want to wake up Jessica's many brothers and sisters. And I mean many.) I found Tristan's phone number in his wallet, but his driver's license wasn't in there. (Smart of him to keep that on person.) I also found $20 dollars that I will not take. ( keep telling myself that) There was a library card, a Starbucks card, and couple receipts. (I like him even more for the fact that he had a Starbucks card)

Tomorrow I plan on calling him, meeting him, to give back the wallet of course. No more, I swear. I'll tell him I found it after I made my grand exit. (not in those words) After that, I plan on going on EBAY to find the other things I need. Better get to sleep if I want to look hot tomorrow. Not...that I have... any reason to, ....of course.

How about that. do you like it? Don't worry I got more stuff planed for the mall, it gets pretty.....weird. Ya, weird. Plus there's a secret about Tristan we haven't learned yet.