Haru's Point of View

It was the middle of the night and I had a feeling that something was wrong. As I was walking to Shigure's house to see if Yuki was alright, I saw them... I saw Kagura and Yuki kissing. My heart stopped. I knew he loved Tohru but what happened that caused them to get together. I ran pasted them hoping they did not see me. I had to find out what was the cause... why my Yuki was kissing... Kyo's girl..... I ran as fast as I could and I finally got there and went up stairs and there I saw Kyo and Tohru kissing. My world was falling about... Everyone was happy but me... I didn't know awhat to do... So I ran... ran as fast as I could. I planned never to return... til I found her.....Rin.

Notes: what do you think? I had no more dreams so I have to wing it now.... Does everyone like this?