hey - it's me Angel of twsited souls here to say that i have created a new story!!!! yay! hope you enjoy - early note short 1st chapter.

all italics = thoughts

and now on with the story!

When evil comes to take the throne

When darkness covers land and home

He will come to save us all

And the evil dark lord will fall

Not only 1 but 2 races he is

A wizard and elf of whom he is the kid

And on his hand, he'll bear a ring

Carrying power never before seen.

-Excerpt from: The Prophecy of the Savior

Chapter 1

Maegwen stood in front of her tall mirror examining her image. At the moment she was wearing a wonderful blue dress that showed off her excellent figure. It had a low white collar and long sleeves with a simple white band around the waste. For her such dazzling apparel was uncommon for she was a simple elf that happened to live Lothlorien -the most treasured elven homes. So on a day like today it was mandatory that all were dressed like royalty and the royalty were dressed like gods. For today was the annual festival held in the honor of Lady Galadriel's birth.

Spinning around once more she smiled and took a deep breath watching as the dress accented her normally very plain chest. She smiled even wider giddy with excitement. Pelran is sure to love this dress. I might want to be careful that he doesn't tear it off of me tonight.Maegwen giggled at her thoughts and turned away from the mirror satisfied. It was only a few short seconds before a knock came on her door and Pelran stepped in dressed in an alluring sliver tunic set.

The minute he stepped fully in and saw Maegwen sitting on the seat near her window letting the moonlight shine through her locks of golden brown hair his jaw dropped and he felt as though his knees would give out. She was stunning. He watched weakly as she came over to him and nearly melted as she closed his mouth.

"Pel, it's rude to stare," Maegwen said softly looking into her lovers bright green eyes.

"It's hard not to, Mae. Such beauty should be admired always." Pelran kneeled and kissed Maegwen's hand causing the young girl to blush.

"Pelran - such flattery isn't necessary."

"I think it is." He stood and reached into his tunic bringing out a white box." And so is this." Maegwen took the box quietly and unlatched it letting the top fall backward revealing a gold necklace with a tree pendant.

"Pel, it's beautiful," Maegwen said breathlessly as she lifted it out of the box. Pelran took it and placed it around her neck moving her thick hair so that it rested on her skin.

"You deserve it, Mae."

"Pelran, how did you afford this. Surely it would have taken much gold to buy this and the queen's gi--. Pel you didn't. Pelran please tell me that you got a gift for the queen." The quiet guilty look on his face was enough and Maegwen was forced to sit back down. Her mind swam. She loved Galadriel for more reasons than the fact that she was their queen. Galadriel had done Maegwen a favor many centuries ago, one that was worth giving her a gift to celebrate her life. Maegwen sighed and fingered the necklace in thought - then it came to her and she closed her eyes heavily trying to convince her heart that is was right.

"Mae, please forgive me. But I love you so much, I had to."

"Lady Galadriel excepted us into her home and has cared for us since. i love the gift, Pel, but cannot keep it."

Pelran looked into the grey eyes of his future wife and knew what she was planning and it hurt him in every part of his body to let her but he for some reason could not move. He watched in utter sadness as Maegwen stood leading him along out the door and to the happy celebrations below.

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Well that's the end of chapter 1. I know it's short but you can expect quicker uploads with longer chapters so don't worry. Any way teaser for the next chapter which I promise to make 5 pages long size 11 font.

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The young girl stood weakly against the marble wall her clothes ripped and torn blood dripping from open wounds her blackend left eye closed. She was always the one that was teased and she hated it. It was only because she was the most beautiful human they had ever seen and the fact that she never got sick and the fact that strange things happened around her. But that no reason for them to hurt her so. Nor did it stop her from wishing that they'd all just fall over and DIE!!!! She shut her eyes angrily imaging the five boys limp bodies their blue eyes dead to the world. She took a deep breath and opened her eyes a horrible seen meeting her eyes. All that she had imagined was laying out before her. The five boys dead in the grass.

She shook her head and slowly backed away. I have to get out of here. If they see this and me - I'll be killed.With that though the bruised girl ran off into the open area praying that she could make it to some cover before the dark clouds above opened up on her.

okay well that's all for now! R&R plz