Hello! Kat here! This is the first fan fic I've ever written so
I would greatly appreciate some constructive criticism! This is a FFT fan
fic, not a FFTA fan fic. It takes place during the first chapter, that's
why Delita and Algus are with Ramza still. The other characters are
actually soldiers in my troop (you know the one's w/o bios?). So I decied
to give each of them a personalty by putting them in my fan fic! I still
haven't finesh the game yet T_T so no spoilers please! ~_^
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"Sigh.." three seconds later.. "Sigh." Ramza had been sighing non-stop lately; it had been worrying his troop. He wasn't usually like this, in stead he would try to look for around for any random battles to make his troop stronger, which would usually get on their nerves because they were sick of traveling all over the place. But they have been staying for over a week in Gariland Magic City and they wanted to get out! "Well", said Delita, "Someone ought to talk to him."
"Why cant you! You're his friend!" snapped Joleen, staying in one place for so long got her in a crabby mood.
"I would but."
CRASH! , a noise came from outside the inn they were staying at.
"Whoo Hoo! Finally some action!" Shouted Tensberger as he dragged Delita and Kenshin out along with him.
All eyes were on Brandon now, "What?" said the young Oracle. "You blokes want ME to talk to him?!?"
"Of course!" they all said in unison.
"Grrr.FINE I WILL!" he shouted and then muttered quietly to himself, "For all I know he might be some mad man by now, locking himself up in that room of his."
He entered the room quietly as to not disturb Ramza. "Hellooo." Brandon said in a quite whisper then, "There you are you silly ass! Whot's with you locked up in your room like that, and surrounded by all these books! While the rest of us are just sitting around bored to tears!" he boomed.
This obviously startled poor Ramza as he jumped off his seat and came back down with a large THUD!
"Brandol! Don't scare me like that!" Ramza's heart was still racing, but what Brandol said was true; on the top of the desk which Ramza was doing his work on were piles of books some were old and new, big and small, thick and thin. Yet Brandol noticed that they all had one thing in common: they were about monsters. But not just any monsters.they were about Chocobos.
"Hmmmm .. You know Brandon, Chocobos are pretty strong creatures right?"
"Of course they are..that's why hate them!"
"What if we own one?"
"WHOT??!!" poor Brandon had gotten scar on his right shoulder blade from a very nasty Chocobo attack a while ago.
"Just think! They're fast, strong, can move long distances, heal allies, give us rides, and the most important part!
"..and whot is that may I ask?"
"They're cute!"
"Good lord!" cried a very exasperated Brandon. "How on earth are you going to get a Chocobo?"
"That's where you come in."
"Huh?" ***********************************************************************
You like? Please review! Oh and Brandon's "Whot's" aren't typos, that's how he says them! ^_^
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"Sigh.." three seconds later.. "Sigh." Ramza had been sighing non-stop lately; it had been worrying his troop. He wasn't usually like this, in stead he would try to look for around for any random battles to make his troop stronger, which would usually get on their nerves because they were sick of traveling all over the place. But they have been staying for over a week in Gariland Magic City and they wanted to get out! "Well", said Delita, "Someone ought to talk to him."
"Why cant you! You're his friend!" snapped Joleen, staying in one place for so long got her in a crabby mood.
"I would but."
CRASH! , a noise came from outside the inn they were staying at.
"Whoo Hoo! Finally some action!" Shouted Tensberger as he dragged Delita and Kenshin out along with him.
All eyes were on Brandon now, "What?" said the young Oracle. "You blokes want ME to talk to him?!?"
"Of course!" they all said in unison.
"Grrr.FINE I WILL!" he shouted and then muttered quietly to himself, "For all I know he might be some mad man by now, locking himself up in that room of his."
He entered the room quietly as to not disturb Ramza. "Hellooo." Brandon said in a quite whisper then, "There you are you silly ass! Whot's with you locked up in your room like that, and surrounded by all these books! While the rest of us are just sitting around bored to tears!" he boomed.
This obviously startled poor Ramza as he jumped off his seat and came back down with a large THUD!
"Brandol! Don't scare me like that!" Ramza's heart was still racing, but what Brandol said was true; on the top of the desk which Ramza was doing his work on were piles of books some were old and new, big and small, thick and thin. Yet Brandol noticed that they all had one thing in common: they were about monsters. But not just any monsters.they were about Chocobos.
"Hmmmm .. You know Brandon, Chocobos are pretty strong creatures right?"
"Of course they are..that's why hate them!"
"What if we own one?"
"WHOT??!!" poor Brandon had gotten scar on his right shoulder blade from a very nasty Chocobo attack a while ago.
"Just think! They're fast, strong, can move long distances, heal allies, give us rides, and the most important part!
"..and whot is that may I ask?"
"They're cute!"
"Good lord!" cried a very exasperated Brandon. "How on earth are you going to get a Chocobo?"
"That's where you come in."
"Huh?" ***********************************************************************
You like? Please review! Oh and Brandon's "Whot's" aren't typos, that's how he says them! ^_^