Great news! I got my first two reviews, ohh sure it doesn't sound like much but when you think people aren't interested and then somebody does show interest its the GREATEST feeling in the world, plus it lets me know how much of a screw up I am, yes I'm rambling on but hey I can't help it I'm floating on cloud 9 (hehee fun song)
Anyways my thanks to AnimeCrazedGalz, and Angel Dranger (I would have thanked you by e-mail but I couldn't find it soo I'll do it the hard and time consuming way wink THANK YOU MUCHLY! I'm glad to know you people enjoy my fanfic, and I hope you continue reading) --- that goes for the rest of you folks out there, enjoy my fanfic and keep on reading...ahem yes well I think I've talked enough, (my poor fingers), on with the story...
Chapter 4
Kenny's intro: Tyson and Tony had an intense battle, in the end Tyson pulled another victory but Tony hadn't given up just yet. Oh no now he wants to be a member of the team, what will Tyson say to that? And how does the rest of the bladebreakers react...read on and you'll find out!
"I want to join the team," said Tony, shocking everybody enough to leave a ringing silence in the group, broken only by Kenny's bouts of laughter which was from the excitement of his new stats that seemed to block all else that was going on infront of him.
"Sorry Tony, no can do," said Tyson in a sympathetic voice. He had gotten a lot of people already asking to join the bladebreakers, and every one of them he turned down.
Max shook his head and Ray looked at the ground by his feet.
"Why not?!" Replied Tony
"Because, we already have enough people on our team and..."
"And I'm not good enough, is that it?!" Yelled Tony truly hurt that Tyson would try to lie to him.
"Thats not true,"replied Ray, looking at Tony with his unnerving cat eyes.
"Really? Well if its not, then what is?"
"Look we just don't need anymore members on our team," Tyson said sounding exasperated.
Kai then made his appearance known. The unskilled attempt to let the kid down easily was getting on his nerves, "look kid, we don't want you on our team, now beat it." Crossing his arms over his chest in a traditional manner that usually sent people scrambling to get away, he stared down at Tony.
Max looked towards Kai, "you didn't need to be so harsh Kai."
Tony, anger burning in his chest turned to Tyson who was now staring at the ground. How could he do this to him? He said he was good, so why couldn't he join the team? "Well if I can't join your team I'll make my own and beat you the hard way, then you'll see. You'll all see that I'm worthy enough to be on the bladebreakers team."
"Yeah, yeah we heard this all before, now go on your merry way kid."
Tony lost his temper at that, "you think your soo hot don't you, well you'll be sorry for lying to me Tyson and not giving me a chance to prove myself," he pointed a his finger at Kai, "you'll be the first to lose your beyblade, say goodbye to your precious Dranzer, while you still can." At that Tony turned and walked out of the park.
Tyson turned to Kai, "why'd you do that to him Kai? You could've been a little easier on him."
Kai just turned and walked away.
I know that the last chapter as well as this one is short but don't worry I'll make up for it in the next few chapters, So how'd you like it?
Tyson: I didn't, you made me sound like a jerk AND a lier
Max: At least you spoke
dragon-slayer69(author): Hey would you rather have him join the team, then there wouldn't be a plot
Ray: She's got a point guys
Tyson: your just agreeing cause you sounded nice in the chapter even if a bit cowardly
Ray: Hey!
Max: come on Tyson give him a break, its not his fault if he agrees with the author, even if she didn't give me any lines
dragon-slayer69: come on maxy don't be mad, I'll give you more lines later on okay, oh and Tyson isn't that your grandpa?
Grandpa: yo little dude its dojo time
Tyson: (runs away) gotta run
Any wayz REVIEW!!!
ps. sorry AnimeCrazedGals, I promise the next chapter will be a lot longer...or at least I'll try to make it longer
Angel Dranger, I'm glad to know that you liked my fanfic and I hope that you continue to enjoy it, but it isn't surprising really that I wouldn't get a whole load of reviews its only been out for maybe 5 months or soo, yeah ahem been busy, but I hope to get some more soon, and I really am happy that you reviewed cause it means alot to me, don't I sound weird...see you later, and I'll read some of your work too ;)
