Authors note: k, I am trying to write a stargate, tremors mix but I need
help on the characters. If you can help email me at Hannah@keromail.com.
#2: I am low on ideas, so I am asking for help. I have a ruff idea but all
suggestions wanted. #3: I was thinking about writing a second Ella
enchanted. Help needed. Again email address is Hannah@keromail.com.
Harry Potter and the Preparation
Chapter 3
Harry opened the door and saw a girl. She was his age and had auburn hair, brown eyes, tan skin and wore a navy blue skirt and white shirt. She also had five books under her left arm. The first one was called The Way to Yourself. Harry new that book. The other one was called The Silmarillian by J.R.R Tolkien. The third one was called A wind in the Door by Madeleine L'Engle. The fourth book was called The Wanderer by Sharon Creech. And the fifth one was called The Diamond in the Window by Jane Langton. This had to be Harry's friend Hermione. All the clues fit, the proper outfit, the books. He also saw a boy, Ron. He was a gangly red headed boy. Like a rag doll.
"Hi", said Harry. He put his hand out to shake hands with his friend but instead came a, "Oh Harry," from Hermione and a warm embrace. Then she looked around the room to see three people staring at her. "Hi Ya" said Ron, "Surprise". "Um," said Hermione, "Hi". Then Hermione was led into the living room followed by her parents. Her father was tall, had dark brown eyes, brown hair (clearly were Hermione got her mouse colored hair, but unlike Hermione, it worked for him), and had a suit on. The woman had radiant light blond hair, but it was very poofy (so that was where Hermione got the form of her hair). Then Hermione turned to Dudly. He was leaning against the wall trying to look as thought her was the coolest guy around and flirt with her. There were still traces of chocolate on his chin from his snack. Hermione turned in the other direction in disgust. When her parents saw Aunt Petunia the two women shrieked. Harry, Ron and Hermione were terrified that they hated eachother. "This is an outrage" hollered Aunt Petunia, "get out, get out at once". Uncle Vernon looked at his wife in shock. She had always told him to hold his temper and there she was, shrieking away like a dyeing bat. Mr. Granger grabbed Harry's trunk and led the group out of the terrible house. Mr. Granger opened the back of the car and stuck the trunk into it (Harry held Hedgwig in his cage on his lap).
The car took off. Terring down the road to get as far away from that dreadful house as possible.
Hey, well, I hoped you liked the chappie. Sorry it took so long to upload but I didn't like the way the chappie was going. It may have seemed rushed, but that is what was sopouse to happen, you know, get out of the house fast. Thanx all reviewers, oh, ya, knead major suggestions.
Reviewers: Boogalaga (said) Hello Goober. Guess what, you REALLY need to work on your spelling. Have me read your story before you post it, Kay? Come, isn't spelled Came! You writing style is very professional, characters are in character. I am quiet honestly shocked. How does the Hary learning mind trickscome into play in the plot? Or is it just a cool tidbit? Hmm.I eagerly await your next chapter.
(Response) no! You have to read it at the same time as the others (. Well, I hope that this chappie was better if not, sorry (! CrimsomEnchantress (said) i think u need to kinda get the story moving a bit, like interest level wise...because most of the ppl readin HP fanfics will have read the bookks, so i dun think explaination is necessary..and u could work on spellin a bit..but keep goin!
(response) I tried. I hope you liked this chappie better.
Ami-griffindor89 (said) this doesn't deserve flamers. this is a good chapter. i like it! this story is headed somewhere, i can see it now.. **dreamy look on face** **sigh** ok well anyway... UPDATE! PLEASE me (response) sorry I took so long, I was having a writing cramp. Well, I will try to upload fast. Jaspercat(said) SAW WHAT? WHAT DID HARRY SEE? Please update cause i'm reading all your other story's and i really like this one. Can't wait to read more Love Jaspercat PS. Can't wait to see the look on Hermione's face when she see's Dudley. : )
(response) I hope you liked this chappie. I know it didn't have too much dudly, but im saving it for later. You know, with ron he can exagerate Dudly so that he is more terrible.
Harry Potter and the Preparation
Chapter 3
Harry opened the door and saw a girl. She was his age and had auburn hair, brown eyes, tan skin and wore a navy blue skirt and white shirt. She also had five books under her left arm. The first one was called The Way to Yourself. Harry new that book. The other one was called The Silmarillian by J.R.R Tolkien. The third one was called A wind in the Door by Madeleine L'Engle. The fourth book was called The Wanderer by Sharon Creech. And the fifth one was called The Diamond in the Window by Jane Langton. This had to be Harry's friend Hermione. All the clues fit, the proper outfit, the books. He also saw a boy, Ron. He was a gangly red headed boy. Like a rag doll.
"Hi", said Harry. He put his hand out to shake hands with his friend but instead came a, "Oh Harry," from Hermione and a warm embrace. Then she looked around the room to see three people staring at her. "Hi Ya" said Ron, "Surprise". "Um," said Hermione, "Hi". Then Hermione was led into the living room followed by her parents. Her father was tall, had dark brown eyes, brown hair (clearly were Hermione got her mouse colored hair, but unlike Hermione, it worked for him), and had a suit on. The woman had radiant light blond hair, but it was very poofy (so that was where Hermione got the form of her hair). Then Hermione turned to Dudly. He was leaning against the wall trying to look as thought her was the coolest guy around and flirt with her. There were still traces of chocolate on his chin from his snack. Hermione turned in the other direction in disgust. When her parents saw Aunt Petunia the two women shrieked. Harry, Ron and Hermione were terrified that they hated eachother. "This is an outrage" hollered Aunt Petunia, "get out, get out at once". Uncle Vernon looked at his wife in shock. She had always told him to hold his temper and there she was, shrieking away like a dyeing bat. Mr. Granger grabbed Harry's trunk and led the group out of the terrible house. Mr. Granger opened the back of the car and stuck the trunk into it (Harry held Hedgwig in his cage on his lap).
The car took off. Terring down the road to get as far away from that dreadful house as possible.
Hey, well, I hoped you liked the chappie. Sorry it took so long to upload but I didn't like the way the chappie was going. It may have seemed rushed, but that is what was sopouse to happen, you know, get out of the house fast. Thanx all reviewers, oh, ya, knead major suggestions.
Reviewers: Boogalaga (said) Hello Goober. Guess what, you REALLY need to work on your spelling. Have me read your story before you post it, Kay? Come, isn't spelled Came! You writing style is very professional, characters are in character. I am quiet honestly shocked. How does the Hary learning mind trickscome into play in the plot? Or is it just a cool tidbit? Hmm.I eagerly await your next chapter.
(Response) no! You have to read it at the same time as the others (. Well, I hope that this chappie was better if not, sorry (! CrimsomEnchantress (said) i think u need to kinda get the story moving a bit, like interest level wise...because most of the ppl readin HP fanfics will have read the bookks, so i dun think explaination is necessary..and u could work on spellin a bit..but keep goin!
(response) I tried. I hope you liked this chappie better.
Ami-griffindor89 (said) this doesn't deserve flamers. this is a good chapter. i like it! this story is headed somewhere, i can see it now.. **dreamy look on face** **sigh** ok well anyway... UPDATE! PLEASE me (response) sorry I took so long, I was having a writing cramp. Well, I will try to upload fast. Jaspercat(said) SAW WHAT? WHAT DID HARRY SEE? Please update cause i'm reading all your other story's and i really like this one. Can't wait to read more Love Jaspercat PS. Can't wait to see the look on Hermione's face when she see's Dudley. : )
(response) I hope you liked this chappie. I know it didn't have too much dudly, but im saving it for later. You know, with ron he can exagerate Dudly so that he is more terrible.