I own nothing! Nothing tear trickling down face. Well, nothing is perfect. I am thinking about a NL/LL slash, there will be a slight HG/RW slash. I'm thinking about Puss and Dean or Smeas or Hannah and Dean or Smeas. I know, Harry and Valdimort. smiles viscously no I couldn't, you forgive me for the joke smiles sweetly, guys melt Okay, thanks for putting up with that sweat trickle. Well, that's it!

Oh, ya, are y'all left or right handed?

Harry Potter and the Preparation

Harry woke up at 5; after all, today was to be the first day at Hogwarts! Okay, so that wasn't it all, he also had to pack. Harry got out of bed and headed over to his dresser. He grabbed a tee, pants, smiley underwear and a pair of socks... He went into the bathroom, took his shower, changed and brushed his teeth, almost ready for a new day. Harry looked at the fish shower curtain and green tiles, ignoring the ugly puck green paint and sink. He slowly walked out and headed over to the empty, blue trunk, open, in the middle of the blue room. Harry walked over to the dresser and pulled out first his underwear and socks, then pants, then shirt. Harry next went to his bookshelf and grabbed all his books and put them into the suitcase. He stopped at 12 books. All by Tamara Pierce; the Circle of Magic 1 2 3and 4 and the Circle Continues 1 2 3and 4. She had an ideal world for magic, Muggles and Witches, or "Mages" she called them. Yes she was a Muggle, but not a stupid one. Harry put the books into the bag. He also put in Song of the Lioness.

Then he took out his CFDPlayer. It is the same as a CD player except for the fact that is was able to be played in Hogwarts and did not need batteries. He pulled out another blue bag and put it in it. He started putting in the CFDs. He put in the Lord of the Rings CFD sound tracks, English hits 2004, Belly which is a sort of rock group, and David Byrne, Like Humans Do. It was a very Sci-Fish CFD. It belonged to Luna; she is a major Sci-Fi freak. Then he pulled out a random amount of CFDs.

Then he started putting his wand, and other such things. There, know he was packed. Harry walked the stuff down the stairs. The walls paint was chipping away, and the stairs squeaked, but this was his new home, but nothing like Sirius's. Harry swallowed up a tear that was trying to emerge on his soft hot skin. Harry finely made it down the stairs to find an empty kitchen except for two people, Fred and George.

"Hey" said Harry as the scurried out the door, there red hair looked ablaze in the sunrise. Ron nudged George and they both turned around, there green robes bringing out there eyes.

"Hey Harry" said Fred.

"Lipou Contre grn'ce," said George. Harry looked at Fred in confusion. Fred explained.

"It's our language," said Fred.

"We just invented it," said George.

"After all," said Fred.

"Don't all twins try at one point in there life (me and my twin sister tried it, but it didn't work. Aka, were both girls a partly ferternal and partly identical) ," finished both the twins. Harry still stared at them, not breaking the connection.

"Um," Fred finely said, "We are kind of already late for work so".

"Oh," said Harry, "I just wanted to say "Bye"".

"Oh," said George looking at Fred as though they were all knowing. They nodded to each other and headed over to Harry.

"What else is it," asked George.

"Just" said Harry, "How are we going to keep enough money to get the stuff the Jr.O (order) needs".

"Work for it" said Fred simply. They headed for the door, waved good bye and, POFFED! Harry walked into the living room, sat down and started to read, Alanna, book one in the Lioness quartet by Tamara Pierce. Harry sat there for hours just reading.

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Harry got into the car that was arranged for the group to get to the platform. For six years Harry had gone to the platform, argued with Draco, and then talk. Hermione settled herself next to him and Ginny on the other side. "What do you think of Alanna in "Song of the Lioness" Ginny asked.

"Its okay" said Harry, "If you like stories for girls". Harry looked straight at Ginny. Ginny was laughing at him! He could tell it through the eyes.

"Go on" Mrs. Weasly said to Harry as he ran through the wall that divided platform 9 & 10. He felt cold as he passed through. He started to see the train appear, then the ground, the people and then, he fell face first into the ground on platform 9&3/4. Harry stood up and brushed off the dirt. He was a mess. A girl stood in front of him, laughing hysterically. It was Puss.

"You might want to get out of the way" said Hermione to Harry. Harry looked at Hermione confused, why did he need to get out of the way. Ginny had walked up behind Hermione and pointed at the entrances to the platform. Harry looked behind him, smiled and then moved.

"So" said Hermione, "You ready for the new year?"

"I am" said Ginny, "You Harry?" There was no response. They waited.

"Um Harry" said Luna who had snuck up on Harry.

"Um what" Harry asked. Ginny looked down at his blank expression and Hermione shook her head. Ron had now come out of the wall as did Neville. Harry grabbed his things preparing to get onto the train when, "Know, you all be good" said Mrs. Weasly.

"Of course Mum" said Ginny, smiling in a very mischievous manner. Mrs. Weasly sighed. Mrs. Weasly hugged first Ginny, Hermione, Luna, then Neville, Ron and last Harry.

"Don't forget to make Ron write" said Mrs. Weasly. Harry smiled, nodded and went towards the train. It was red, clean, and solid. Harry walked on.

The familiar red seats, white walls, wooden tables, and tinted windows made Harry feal at home for the first time since Sirius. Harry walked through the compartments all full of people. First he passed a group of Hufflpuffs who giggled at a joke when he passed. Next compartment was full of Ravenclaws, including a girl he used to like, Cho Chang. Then were a group of first years. Harry stared at one girl; she greatly resembled Tom Riddle, when he was young of course. Tom Riddle was Valdimort when he was young. Harry wasn't paying attention and almost tripped on a seat leg. Harry continued until he reached a compartment filled with familiar people.

He looked around. There sat Ron, his face covered with traces of chocolate. Then there was Hermione, reading a book silently and Luna, who was reading the Quibbler. As well as Ginny, who sitting by the window looked like her hair was ablaze. Then Puss, who was quietly talking with Hannah. And last of all was Dean who was daring Smeas to eat a suspiciously colored yellow bean.

"Hey Harry" said Ron as he looked up.

"Hey" said Harry gloomily, feeling like there was no one who understood him, after all, he had to fight Valdimort. He was a teenager and therefore was obliged to think stupid things.

"Not again" wined Ginny, smiling, seeing he was feeling sorry for himself; Ron just grinned.

"Hi Harry" said Hannah and tossed him a bag, about a foot tall filled with varieties of candies like chocolate frogs, those evil beans and several Weasly products.

"Thanks" mumbled Harry.

"So" said Puss to Hannah bringing back up there conversation.

"There becoming inseparable" said Ginny nodding at Puss and Hannah, "I guess that's one good thing we did".

"Ha" yelled a voice from across the room making Neville jump. Harry hadn't noticed Neville there; he had been quietly petting Crookshanks and reading a book.

"Ha" yelled the voice again, it was Dean. He had clearly gotten Smeas to eat the bean. Smeas was trying to gag uselessly.

'What flavor was it" asked Ginny, very interested.

Dean grinned a devilish grin that made all the girls fall in love with him. Harry had always been jealous about the smile Dean had. "It was a Weasly bean" said Dean. Ginny waited for a complete answer.

"P-puck an-d-d" started Smeas and then he tried to gag again.

"And slugs" said Dean happily.

Hermione just shock her head and turned back to her book. Ginny smiled and then looked back out the window. Neville had the same reaction as Hermione. Hannah and Puss smiled at each other and pulled out there candies and followed Dean and Smeas's example, daring each other to eat certain candies. Ron laughed aloud. Ron was beginning to sound and looked like Charley and Bill. He was sort of a mix. Harry sat down next to Ron and ate candies happily.

After a while Harry emerged from the candy trance, there very hard to break you know!  That was a smiley face and arrow. "We might want to get changed" said Harry to everyone. They got up, grabbed the cloths and changed then and there! heheh just kidding Smiles sweetly or was I evil grin.

The bathrooms were all red, boring and red. Everyone was back in about 5 minuets. Everyone sat where they were, except for Dean and Smeas who were sitting on the floor at the left door and Puss and Hannah who were sitting at the right door.

"Oww" yelped Hannah. Someone had opened the door on her and was now pushing her against the wall. Puss stood up and rushed to the door. Who was ignoring her plea? Puss didn't care. She walked up and punched the person in the nose. They yelped. It was Charley.

'What was that for' he yelled and then walked in.

'You were closing Hannah in the door' yelled Ron.

Hannah stood up, 'No he wasn't (Tonks (Nymphadora) had walked in too) Malfoy was, he stopped him".

"Oh" said Puss, "Sorry, no offence".

"None taken," said Charley.

Tonks (Nymphadora) was laughing. Her short red hair, purple eyes and violet robes showed that Tonks (Nymphadora) wasn't any old witch, that she could change her appearance.

"What's so funny" said Charley indignantly.

"Nothing" said Tonks (Nymphadora), "Its just that giggle first you are stared at by your teenage students, who clearly like you". Hannah and Puss were already laughing.

"You haven't even heard the best part" said Tonks (Nymphadora), "Then he gets attached by girls with cameras". Puss, Hannah, Dean, Ginny and Smeas were all laughing, Ron was fighting the urge to bring out HIS camera.

"Then he walks into a wall and then tripped then punched in the nose!" Puss and Hannah were trying to hold each other up. Dean was rolling on the floor, Smeas was laughing and pointing at Charley, Ron was taking pictures, Harry was leaning on Ginny for support and Hermione and Neville were reading. It wasn't really all that happened that was funny, it was also the face Charley was making and it was one of those times where when one person starts to laugh everyone does because it looks so ridiculous. Hannah and Puss were crying cause of how hard they were laughing.

And who of all people comes in? Hagrid! "Ye alreda makin den cry!" Everyone stopped laughing then Puss and Hannah looked up and then laughed even worse making everyone laugh. When they had finally calmed down Hagrid, Tonks (Nymphadora) and Charley had left and Malfoy had come in.

"What a sight" muttered Malfoy, 'Tisk tisk tisk".

"Shut up Malfoy" said Dean.

"How about, NO"

Smeas was holding Dean back.

"Oh, mudbload, He hasn't come to get you yet"

Smeas let go of Dean but they were caught by Hannah and Puss, who were yelling for help. Ginny and Neville obliged.

"Well" said Malfoy, "Harry Potter has come, want to be beat up don't you".

"No" said Harry flatly.

"But you do" said Malfoy, "Other wise you wouldn't have come; I told you I would get you back".

'For what" said Ron, "For sending your father to Azkaban?"

"Why you" started Malfoy turning to him.

"And he's never coming back" finished Dean for Ron. Malfoy attached but Hannah and Puss did a reflecting spell shooting him out of the room, being the only ones who had taken a break from holding people back.

People from the hall way looked into the compartment to see what was up. "Malfoys coming back" yelled a new student from a compartment. Puss shut and locked the door in Malfoys face. The group sat there and talked until they got to Hogwarts...

Ya, a bit shorter than usual, but it was good, right?, Right, RIGHT???

Megafreak

First; It's Voldemort, not Valdimort or anything. V-o-l-d-e-m-o-r-t. Might be kind of embarrasing to spell the Dark Lord's name wrong ;) Plus, it's Hogsmeade (don't forget the e on the end). I am only mentioning this because those words seem to appear frequently in your story.
It's spelled McGonagall as well. Trelawny (I think).
Another thing I noticed as well is that it says Prongs a lot of times in the story... In situations where I think it shouldn't, seeing as Prongs is James Potter, a.k.a. Harry's dead father; I'd guess you are talking about Tonks? And in that case; Tonks is her last name, her first name is Nymphadora. So; Nymphadora Tonks.
Smeas? Um... Seamus, maybe?
Hannah Bones? Wasn't she Susan Bones; or has she got a sister or something?

6 feet 2 inches is around 185 cm... That is VERY long for being a wand, I believe...

And... There's actually VERY MANY grammatical mistakes, spelling mistakes etc. May I suggest proof-reading it a little more carefully?

We have homemade bread to. Yay!

Are you a quarter Polish? Me too! Or well, half, actually.

But I still think that your story is very creative; the plot is very good (although I sadly haven't got any plot suggestions, I'll try though...) and; well... If you'd just fix your grammatics and spelling, then I think this could become a great story.

And you got me in. Yay! I'm in a story! ::dances around in the room::

This has to be the longest review I've ever written. Hope I was any help

Pussin Boots: Tanks! I new something was wrong... Did you see any mistakes? I do prophread, but I am such a lousy speller... Well, forgive me for any misspellings. I think that was just one grim look on face. But, I never said I was perfect smiles broadly. Or did i?questioning face then sweat drop. I am having too much fun! grins viscously.