Wow, reviews so soon. Well, since you guys liked it, and since I already
have the second chapter written, I guess I'll post it now.
Liliac, the reason you haven't seen a tola is probably because they are only found in one dimension that was created by an unfinished novel that I wrote. The dimension is pretty much hidden, and the novel was doomed, but I liked Cheeseball, so I saved him and brought him to ISPCE. And I probably won't be describing the complex too much, because Jete usually stays in the tech section most of the time.
Huinesoron, thank you. I feel honored. And of course a Legolas angel. What else would it be? She is a fan girl, after all.
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"You can't be here," Jete admonished. "You're a fan girl!"
The teen stood next to the table. She attempted to hide her pink leather skirt and feathered scarf, while at the same time clinging to her Legolas idol for dear life.
"I know," she admitted miserably. "I've tried to quit, honestly, but I'm addicted. My friends don't have any sympathy; they just give me Legolas posters and stuff. They don't see anything wrong with it, but it's ruining my life. Please help me. I didn't know where else to go."
Jete's expression softened a little.
"You think I can make a machine to turn you normal?"
She nodded.
"It doesn't work that way. You have to quit on your own. I'm sorry."
The pink clad fan girl slumped to the floor.
"What am I going to do?" she wailed. "This was my last hope. I looked; there's no Legolas patches or gum, no F-g A, no support groups, not even one other fan girl trying to get clean. I'm doomed!"
Jete glanced helplessly at Cheeseball, who was sniffing at the girl's scarf. She sighed.
"All right, I'll help you kick the habit."
She sniffed and looked up.
"You will?"
"But no one can know you're here! You could endanger the elves, you could endanger agents; you could endanger my job!"
"Right. Nobody will know."
Jete gave her a warning look.
"Just don't make me regret this."
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sorry it's so short. I'll try to make them longer when I figure out what I'm actually writing about. Again, please review, and please help me think of a name for the fan girl.
Liliac, the reason you haven't seen a tola is probably because they are only found in one dimension that was created by an unfinished novel that I wrote. The dimension is pretty much hidden, and the novel was doomed, but I liked Cheeseball, so I saved him and brought him to ISPCE. And I probably won't be describing the complex too much, because Jete usually stays in the tech section most of the time.
Huinesoron, thank you. I feel honored. And of course a Legolas angel. What else would it be? She is a fan girl, after all.
________________________________________________________________________
"You can't be here," Jete admonished. "You're a fan girl!"
The teen stood next to the table. She attempted to hide her pink leather skirt and feathered scarf, while at the same time clinging to her Legolas idol for dear life.
"I know," she admitted miserably. "I've tried to quit, honestly, but I'm addicted. My friends don't have any sympathy; they just give me Legolas posters and stuff. They don't see anything wrong with it, but it's ruining my life. Please help me. I didn't know where else to go."
Jete's expression softened a little.
"You think I can make a machine to turn you normal?"
She nodded.
"It doesn't work that way. You have to quit on your own. I'm sorry."
The pink clad fan girl slumped to the floor.
"What am I going to do?" she wailed. "This was my last hope. I looked; there's no Legolas patches or gum, no F-g A, no support groups, not even one other fan girl trying to get clean. I'm doomed!"
Jete glanced helplessly at Cheeseball, who was sniffing at the girl's scarf. She sighed.
"All right, I'll help you kick the habit."
She sniffed and looked up.
"You will?"
"But no one can know you're here! You could endanger the elves, you could endanger agents; you could endanger my job!"
"Right. Nobody will know."
Jete gave her a warning look.
"Just don't make me regret this."
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sorry it's so short. I'll try to make them longer when I figure out what I'm actually writing about. Again, please review, and please help me think of a name for the fan girl.