This is the last part of my poem. Thanks for the review so far. I'm done with this poem. I'll still write some more poems, but that's all I'm goin' to write for What Went Wrong?, ok?
Now on with poem......
Poem: What Went Wrong? Part Three
Hiei & Kurama's P.O.V.: (Point Of View)
Now that we're friends,
We can have fun beatin',
Each other up with,
Trainin' for the Marshal,
Arts Tournament.
Kurama's P.O.V.: (Point Of View)
Now,
What should I do?
Should I kiss that,
Baka?
I'm so confused!
I don't know what's goin',
On with me these,
Days!
Some times I would,
Catch myself day dreamin',
When I'm trainin',
With Hiei.
And,
When I find myself,
Down on the floor,
He's just sittin',
Down on my chest,
Like he owns it.
And,
Some times,
I wish I could,
Just kiss the beautiful,
Lips of his some times.
So,
All I hear from him is,
This.
"Are you ok, Kurama?"
That's all I hear,
Him say.
And,
In a blink of any eye,
His lips are pressed,
Against mine.
And,
All I feel is his,
Sweet tender body,
Pressed against my,
Slender one with,
His slender one.
His lips taste like,
Sweet strawberries.
They're the sweetest,
Thing,
I've even tasted.
Hiei's P.O.V.: (Point Of View)
I think I'm in heaven,
With these watermelon,
Lips of his.
I think I'm in love,
With this baka.
I feel like,
I'm goin' to just,
Melt in his sweet,
Tender lips,
That baka has.
I just love the,
Way they crest,
Mine.
They're just so,
Sweet.
Kurama's P.O.V.: (Point Of View)
Just as I was,
Beginnin' to enjoy,
His lips against mine,
He just had to take them away.
They were the,
Sweetest thing that,
I have ever tasted.
Hiei's P.O.V.: (Point Of View)
They truly were,
The sweetest lips,
Ever.
So,
If I hadn't pulled,
Away from that kiss.
Wouldn't know if I'll,
Be able to forgive,
Myself.
Hiei & Kurama's P.O.V.: (Point Of View)
Now that was a great,
Kiss we had together,
But,
It was just the best,
To think about how,
To keep it a secret,
From the others.
From: Hiei (The Little Fire Demon) & Kurama (The Sneaky Fox Demon)
Well that's it. I'm with one.
See ya next time with a different poem though..... See ya!! Thanks for the review I've got so far!!! Thanks, Sweety!