In the future
I'll be responding to questions and comments at the bottom of each new
installment. I've also decided to use (this) instead of –this- to represent thoughtspeak, because it's less disruptive and I tend to
overuse hyphens anyway. Enjoy.
As always, this is KA Applegate's marvelous world and I'm just borrowing it.
The door of
our escape pod slid open with a muted hiss. There was no time to think or be
afraid, and so I took the first steps out into this forest of planet Earth with
deliberate confidence. Feiranel took a bit longer.
She was strapping two massive shredders to her back, and secreting other
weapons and knives about her body. I took nothing. My most powerful weapon
flowed through my very veins.
I guess you could say that Feiranel was attractive,
by Andalite standards. I had always been put off by
her toughness. You know, in ancient times, Andalite
females were not permitted to participate in warfare because of their smaller
stature and weaker tail blades. Times changed, especially as firearms replaced
blade-to-blade combat and it became clear that females were equally capable of
aiming and firing.
Feiranel was more than capable. I have no doubt that
in time she will be able to clash tails with the greatest old warriors of my
people. I had known her when we were younger; when we were arisths
together. She had already been studying combat for several years and was
consistently at the top of the academy. She trained constantly. She was as
strong and quick and fast as any male. She was a quick study in every aspect of
martial technique taught at the academy from marksmanship to amphibious
invasion. Her family was very proud. Feiranel herself
seemed unaware of her excellence, as if all of her achievements had been
effortless.
This was only her second mission as a full Andalite
warrior. But I was glad to have her on my side.
As she left the escape pod, she pressed a button and entered a code in thoughtspeak. Turning to me, she asked, (You will be able
to find our ship?).
I nodded. I had memorized the coordinates of the area where our ruined ship had
come to rest, and I knew the direction and distance we would need to travel to
get there from our present position. Andalites are
rather good at things like that. We just needed to hope that nothing would
drive us too far off course. And that our pursuit would not be too close on our
heels. We had landed in a forest, which would slow our enemy down, but it also
hampered our own movement.
Feiranel watched calmly as the escape pod combusted
with an odd "pupp" sound. Andalite self destruct codes are very efficient, even in
older models. For us this was good; no one searching for us would see or hear
an explosion. I still got shivers up my spine as I watched the tiny vehicle
vanish in a swirl of iridescent particles.
(We're going to have to move fast.) As she said it, she looked disgustedly at
me. I guess you could say that I'm not in the best physical shape for an Andalite. I did not even approach the condition that Feiranel kept herself in. It had
been years since I had left academy, and scouts don't really make an effort to
maintain their physical strength. Well, some of us do. Not me, though. I had
spent the better part of the last year researching humans, and working on the
technique for my new Escafil device. I looked more
like a civilian than a soldier, although I was technically a member of the
military. And I would definitely not be able to keep pace with Feiranel-- in my Andalite form.
(Run ahead! I will be able to track you,) I told her. (I have a morph that is
very quick, and will also help if we are forced to stand our ground. Go that
way,) I indicated with a dip of my head.
Feiranel looked doubtful, and I could tell her mind
was full of questions. I could also tell that she did not want to leave me. It
was her mission to protect me.
(Go!) I shouted. (I am morphing an ungach!)
She actually smiled. She wheeled and ran off quickly in the direction of our ship.
I had already begun the change. An ungach is an
uncomplicated morph for an Andalite. My legs became
thinker and sturdier. I experienced a dry feeling as my digestive tracts
retreated up my legs from the pads in my hooves, but the hooves themselves remained
the same, only broader and larger. The fur that covered my body became thinner
and longer, and turned gray-green in color. My tail sucked into my body,
replaced by a useless stump, which is always disconcerting for an Andalite. But even as I lost the deadly tail blade that is
an Andalites primary mechanism for defense, the horns
of the ungach sprang threatening forward over my
elongating face.
The history of the ungach species is an enthralling
study. They had been grazers, and roamed the vast plains of their planet as the
dominant lifeform. Originally they looked like most
grazers do-- slender legs for quick, fast movement; flat grinding teeth set in
a long muzzle. The most remarkable aspect of the ungach
was their branched horns, which, on a mature male, were a magnificent display
intended to attract a mate. These horns were actually jointed at the base,
which meant that the animal could rotate and move them, but only slightly.
Females possessed an atrophied, but still impressive, rack.
Over time, the ungach slowly became omnivorous,
augmenting their diet of grass with carrion and small prey. However, sometime
in the last millennium, disaster struck their planet. A massive asteroid made
impact along the equatorial line, spewing up billions of tons of dirt, ash, and
gases into the atmosphere. Solar rays struggled to pierce the dense cloud that
now blanketed this unfortunate world. All life was choked, and either adapted
or died off.
The ungach survived. Certain of them had experienced
an evolutionary shift beforehand which left them better equipped for consuming
meat. Their teeth were sharper, and their digestive tracts were modifying
themselves. As darkness descended on the planet, the herbivorous ungach strain disappeared along with the majority of the
plant life. And the omnivorous strain began to change. They began to feed on
the smaller carnivores of the planet. They lost the ability to eat plants
altogether, and learned how to kill.
Naturally, a grazer has very few defenses aside from its speed. The ungach were forced to undergo dramatic changes in order to
survive on their ruined world. Their antler racks, which had always had a
measure of flexibility, gained the movement capacity of an Andalite
wrist. The antler's edges, formerly dull and coated with downy fuzz, became
razor sharp, and pointed at the tips. They gained all the senses and instinct
of a predator. As their world gradually repaired itself, the earth sprouted
trees instead of grass. The ungach planet grew into a
patchwork of field and forest, much like Earth. New life developed. And the
prehistoric ungach ruled it all.
The ungach that exists today still retains some hint
of it's gentle origins. The hooves, the build of it's torso, it's long neck, the swiftness. But you have only
to look at the spears springing from its head, or the sharpness of its toothy
smile, to know that you are looking at a killer.
As I completed the morph, the hunter's instinct kicked in. A whole new world of
sight and smell had eclipsed the still forest I had stood in a few minutes
again. It wasn't difficult to overcome, for despite it's
ancient origins, the ungach never developed advanced
intelligence. Also, learning to control a difficult morph is one of the first
tasks a scout must master. A tool is no good if it cannot be wielded with
control. I scented Feiranel's tracks darting off into
the wilderness, and fell into an easy lope to catch up.
I could smell Ferianel's exertion as she had run. It
was near her full speed, but we had a long distance to travel, and she was
saving her energy. On the other hand, it wasn't exactly as if she were holding
herself back for me. She knew that the ungach could
outrun any Andalite in a forest. Easily.
My powerful legs propelled me through the underbrush a high speed. My horns
were rotated back against my neck, out of the way of low-hanging branches and
entangling vines. I could sense life all around me, strange life, but I forced
myself to focus on the trail. If the nose of the ungach
had not been so adept at tracking I would have lost her. She left almost no
visible evidence of her passing. I would like to think that I had not either,
but with a creature the size of an ungach, my passage
would be difficult to disguise. I was easily three times my normal size. Would
the Yeerks be able to follow it? If they were
tracking us on foot, they had likely brought Hork-Bajir.
Hork-Bajir could move extremely fast through the
treetops, and fairly fast on the forest floor. But their instincts were those
of bark-eating tree-dwellers. I wasn't sure how well they could follow a trail
in Earth's woods.
I soon overtook Feiranel, who was running quite
swiftly. I was glad I had taken the time to change forms, or else I would never
have been able to catch her. We continued our odyssey, her slim legs flashing
like lightning, my massive ones trotting beside her.
I guessed that we were at least ten hours away at this pace from our ship. This
meant that I would need to stop and demorph several
times before our destination. You can only remain in morph for around 125 human
minutes before the change becomes permanent. (Feiranel,
soon I'm going to have to take a break and demorph,)
I told her.
(Do you think we're being followed?)
(Undoubtedly.)
She scowled. (No, I mean, do you think they are far behind?)
(When the wind shifts I can smell them.) She didn't look surprised or worried.
She smelled calm. I admired her fearlessness. (When the time limit is nearly
reached I'll run ahead and return to Andalite form
and then morph to ungach again. I'll wait for you.
You should be able to follow my trail.)
(Scout Alcorec, what do we do when we get to the
ship?)
It was nice of Feiranel to ask me. Usually she just
told me. I attributed her uncertainty to her lack of knowledge about Earth and
humans. It was a valid question.
(It depends on the state of the ship. If we're able to make repairs, we should
try to get her airbourne and contact the fleet. You
know basic engineering?)
(I can try. I may have… forgotten.)
Feiranel was a typical warrior. All Andalites learn certain basic skills by primary school, but
very few maintain that knowledge throughout their life. Warriors in particular
are notorious for their scorn of academics. I grunted at her answer.
(Are you laughing, Scout?)
(Of course not.) We were both silent for a moment.
(We'll figure everything out when we get back to the ship. We'll contact our
Prince. The fleet is on its way here.)
(Alright.)
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The first, second and third demorphings occurred
without incident. By the time I had re-assumed ungach
form, Feiranel would come bounding out of the trees.
Her facial slits fluttered with exertion at this point. She was wearing herself
down. I'm sure she wished she, too, could morph into a larger creature who
could handle the distance and speed with ease.
Feiranel's disdain for morphing technology was more
than the typical warrior contempt. I had heard a rumor once that she was unable
to use the morphing technology. Quite a few Andalites
develop allergies to a particular strand of DNA. A very, very, small number of
them are allergic to the morphing technology itself. The body rejects the
ability to take another form. This is why your first morph is always done with
supervision, so that action can be taken if you are one of the unfortunate few.
Morphing specialists can tell in the first few seconds if something is going
wrong because the body had rejected the biotechnology, and circumvent disaster.
For those with the allegy, the morphing process is
fatal.
It could be true that Feiranel was one such an individual.
She had never said anything to me. It would explain her prickliness on the
subject. Or it could just be the typical warrior pride that tinged her every
action. I knew for a fact she was not morph capable, but whether this was
because of an allergy, or just because she had never acquired the ability was
impossible to guess.
About halfway through our journey, I knew Feiranel
needed a rest. She was probably too proud to admit it, but she had pushed
herself too hard initially.
(Listen, Feiranel, I no longer can scent our
trackers. The wind is blowing from behind us, and I would smell them if they
approached.) I peered with the ungach's eyes into the
forest ahead. (I think I see a clearing. We could stop and eat.)
(Are you hungry, Scout?) Feiranel asked. I wondered
if she was going to insist on continuing.
(Very.)
(We will stop a few minutes.) Even Feiranel could not
disguise the relief in her voice as she said it.
The clearing that I had glimpsed was actually a vast field of green-gold grass.
Heaven for a hungry Andalite.
I had heard that the grass on Earth was quite palatable. I returned to my
native form eagerly and raced through the grass.
Feiranel was moving slower, her body taxed from a
half-day's flight through the forest. I think she was enjoying the moment as
well, but it is always difficult to be sure, with her.
Ahead of us the field experienced a rise in elevation. At the apex of this hill
were a small strand of trees and a small rock formation. It was quite striking,
and reminded me of the deliberate arrangements that we Andalites
were famous for creating on our own world. I fed for a little bit more and
called out to Feiranel, (Isn't this wonderful?)
(It is an interesting world, Alcorec.)
(I will race you to the crest of that hill,) I said, my sudden elation tinging the sound of my voice with happiness. She didn't
respond, but I ran up the slope of the hill anyway.
To be honest, I had expected some sort of panoramic view. As I neared the
strand of trees, I was greeted with a different landscape than I expected.
(Well, Andalite, you took a bit longer than I had
expected.)
I didn't need to see the source of the thoughspeak to
know who the speaker was. I could tell from the evil that permeated his words.
An Andalite stood at the foot of the hill below me, a
Dracon cannon trained to my position. An Andalite-Controller. Visser Three.
Ringing him to either side were aliens—humans—toting massive Dracon beams. As I wheeled away from them, I heard the
metallic sound of these beams being brought to the shoulder and aiming at me.
As if that weren't enough, at the Visser's command, a
troop of around ten Hork-Bajir-Controller warriors
began loping up the hill in their nightmarish bodies.
(Feiranel, we've got company!) As I shouted these
words she began running towards me, eager for battle. But not before the Yeerk Dracon cannon reduced the
tree I had been standing in front of to a shattered, blazing torch.
I thought this
would be a short chapter! Well, this is the style that I'll be writing in. Sorry
if it's too slow for some people. I'll try to get chapters up earlier in the
week, but I've been working on this a lot, trying to get as much down as
possible before the summer ends.
I spent a lot of time describing the ungach because
it's Alcolrec's primary battle morph, for obvious
reasons, and you'll be seeing it again. For those of you
who still can't picture it, imagine a moose. Make it bigger and greenish. Take
the face and make it more wolflike. Take the antlers
and imagine them as being much slimmer and deadlier, and raking forwards. Maybe
it's not the most original alien creature, but I wanted Alcorec
to have something functional and deadly. It always kind of bugged me that Ax
had never acquired any useful alien morphs. It makes more sense that a
morph-capable Andalite would have a full arsenal of
alien morphs for use in various scenarios.
Questions
Brutal2003: Copying animal DNA onto our own DNA could have certain side
effects on the original DNA. However, the intron/exon
thing is biologically proven. Humans only use around 10% of their DNA. So
theoretically you could completely copy the DNA of 9 different other animals
onto our DNA. I'll get in to more about this later. It doesn't play a big part
initially, because Alcorec is reluctant to use
himself or others as a guinea pig for testing his new Escafil
device. However, your question is sound: rewriting human DNA with that of an
animal will ultimately have unintended consequences.
Wraithlord42: I'm assuming this
story will ultimately be rated R for sexuality, drug use, and violence. The
first five chapters or so will really only be an
introduction to the full story. Feel free to contact me with further criticism
if you like. I don't believe I "flamed" River Griffon. Let me just
say that that is the type of feedback I myself would like to receive if it is
merited. I was just being honest, and I tried to provide suggestions so that I
wasn't completely negative.
