Chap. 2
This time around, please remember to review, and also, I'm thinking about
adding the extra character in now, it's a char. I made up, so live with it.
Also, Angel Island is where Knucks lives (Knuckles)
I changed this chapter too; now it fits, :). Good. I hope you like this
better. I'll re-write it completely, later. OH YA!!! I deleated the
original from last chapter, sorry, my bad, (
Knuckles woke up in mid air, falling from Angel Island. "Wha? What's going on here?" Knuckles asked himself. Then he remembered, the mysterious cloaked figure, the chao, Chaos 0, the brick wall.
He immediately linked it all to sonic, because of his fun loving nature, and imagined how hard sonic was laughing now...
"Hahaha, I can't believe Knuckles lost so easily, I mean really, to 1 foot! HA" Knuckles imagined Sonic saying... "Hmm, maybe to punish him, I should toss him over the edge of Angel Island, Ya!"
Then, Knuckles realized that he was still falling, towards solid ground, at a very fast rate. Knuckles tried franticly to stop his decent by gliding, and it worked!!! He managed to only get a few new scrapes and bruises.
"Yo, Knuckles, what's up?" Sonic asked, as he skidded to a screeching halt.
"You know perfectly well what's up, just because you don't have a cloak on, doesn't mean I don't recognize you..."
"Did Robotnic talk to you again?!? I thought we settled this before, Dr. Robotnic, and Dr. Egg Man are evil, even though they have different names, there really the same person. So why did you ask why I was in a cloak?" ----- (This symbolizes a crappy seem together, it means that I deleted stuff before this, but the rest is original, I'll do this if I don't think something fits later on...)
"You know why, bring it on!" Knuckles took a swipe, and missed, out of anger. "Why did you throw me off of Angel Island, it wasn't exactly what I would call funny."
"I still have no idea of what you're talking about" Sonic said as he barely dodged another swipe from Knuckles.
"Don't play dumb, just because you were hooded doesn't mean I didn't know who you –"
Slosh... Thump! (Author's note: I had a different editors note, but it was too offbeat, so this really is just space filler). "Hu, what was that?" Knuckles asked.
"No, no, no... Not again"
"Tikital?"
"Yes Knuckles, but hurry we have to stop Chaos 5!"
"How did he get 5 emeralds so soon?" Interrupted Sonic.
"I woke up on the outside of the emerald, on Angle Island, and Chaos 5 was already heading towards the edge of the cliff! I barely caught up with him before he jumped! Now hurry! He's getting away!" Soon, Sonic, Knuckles, and Tikital, were running after Chaos 5, but, before they made it, the hooded figure sped up to Chaos 5 and gave him 2 more emeralds, suddenly, it didn't seem like such a good idea to run after him. So every one started running in the opposite direction. Before they could make it out of firing range of Perfect Chaos, Sonic once again heard a faint "chaos control!" and suddenly was thrown off of his feet and taken to safety by a mysterious figure that was, once again, gone without a trace. (If you're wondering, how whatever used chaos control without any chaos emeralds is a secret, wait.)
Egg Man Fortress
"SHADOW! What took you so long, I needed those..." Egg Man started, but a motor boat sped past and started several alarms. "What was that? Shadow, do you know anything about that?"
"No, why do you think I do?"
"Because you were gone for so long, meaning that you had a lot of time to set up a anything to set off the alarms, conveniently distracting me so that you can take the rest of-"Egg Man started to say again, but the alarms went off yet again. "BLASTED THINGS!!! Shadow, go turn them off!"
"Fine, unless you don't want me to because you think I'll tamper with the –,"Shadow to was cut off yet again, by the alarm.
Just outside of the base
"Foolish doctor, thinking that the best place to put an off switch is OUT side the base,"
"Ah yes, Shadow, the supposed ultimate life form, unfortunately, now that I'm here, that title's not true any more." The same cloaked figure said.
"Who are you, and why are you saying that you're the ultimate life form, if I can beat the real ultimate life form."
"Because that was the prototype, and it wasn't any good. Me? I'm just the end result of the research, the true ultimate life form, the Fire Lizard!" (Yet another author's note: I know the name is crappy, but I couldn't think of anything better, also, he isn't as weenie as he sounds.)"I was just encapsulated, and now I've been released, thanks to Sonic, and Knuckles..."
I personally think the story is getting better, but that's just me, and again please tell me what you think of this page.
Also, Angel Island is where Knucks lives (Knuckles)
I changed this chapter too; now it fits, :). Good. I hope you like this
better. I'll re-write it completely, later. OH YA!!! I deleated the
original from last chapter, sorry, my bad, (
Knuckles woke up in mid air, falling from Angel Island. "Wha? What's going on here?" Knuckles asked himself. Then he remembered, the mysterious cloaked figure, the chao, Chaos 0, the brick wall.
He immediately linked it all to sonic, because of his fun loving nature, and imagined how hard sonic was laughing now...
"Hahaha, I can't believe Knuckles lost so easily, I mean really, to 1 foot! HA" Knuckles imagined Sonic saying... "Hmm, maybe to punish him, I should toss him over the edge of Angel Island, Ya!"
Then, Knuckles realized that he was still falling, towards solid ground, at a very fast rate. Knuckles tried franticly to stop his decent by gliding, and it worked!!! He managed to only get a few new scrapes and bruises.
"Yo, Knuckles, what's up?" Sonic asked, as he skidded to a screeching halt.
"You know perfectly well what's up, just because you don't have a cloak on, doesn't mean I don't recognize you..."
"Did Robotnic talk to you again?!? I thought we settled this before, Dr. Robotnic, and Dr. Egg Man are evil, even though they have different names, there really the same person. So why did you ask why I was in a cloak?" ----- (This symbolizes a crappy seem together, it means that I deleted stuff before this, but the rest is original, I'll do this if I don't think something fits later on...)
"You know why, bring it on!" Knuckles took a swipe, and missed, out of anger. "Why did you throw me off of Angel Island, it wasn't exactly what I would call funny."
"I still have no idea of what you're talking about" Sonic said as he barely dodged another swipe from Knuckles.
"Don't play dumb, just because you were hooded doesn't mean I didn't know who you –"
Slosh... Thump! (Author's note: I had a different editors note, but it was too offbeat, so this really is just space filler). "Hu, what was that?" Knuckles asked.
"No, no, no... Not again"
"Tikital?"
"Yes Knuckles, but hurry we have to stop Chaos 5!"
"How did he get 5 emeralds so soon?" Interrupted Sonic.
"I woke up on the outside of the emerald, on Angle Island, and Chaos 5 was already heading towards the edge of the cliff! I barely caught up with him before he jumped! Now hurry! He's getting away!" Soon, Sonic, Knuckles, and Tikital, were running after Chaos 5, but, before they made it, the hooded figure sped up to Chaos 5 and gave him 2 more emeralds, suddenly, it didn't seem like such a good idea to run after him. So every one started running in the opposite direction. Before they could make it out of firing range of Perfect Chaos, Sonic once again heard a faint "chaos control!" and suddenly was thrown off of his feet and taken to safety by a mysterious figure that was, once again, gone without a trace. (If you're wondering, how whatever used chaos control without any chaos emeralds is a secret, wait.)
Egg Man Fortress
"SHADOW! What took you so long, I needed those..." Egg Man started, but a motor boat sped past and started several alarms. "What was that? Shadow, do you know anything about that?"
"No, why do you think I do?"
"Because you were gone for so long, meaning that you had a lot of time to set up a anything to set off the alarms, conveniently distracting me so that you can take the rest of-"Egg Man started to say again, but the alarms went off yet again. "BLASTED THINGS!!! Shadow, go turn them off!"
"Fine, unless you don't want me to because you think I'll tamper with the –,"Shadow to was cut off yet again, by the alarm.
Just outside of the base
"Foolish doctor, thinking that the best place to put an off switch is OUT side the base,"
"Ah yes, Shadow, the supposed ultimate life form, unfortunately, now that I'm here, that title's not true any more." The same cloaked figure said.
"Who are you, and why are you saying that you're the ultimate life form, if I can beat the real ultimate life form."
"Because that was the prototype, and it wasn't any good. Me? I'm just the end result of the research, the true ultimate life form, the Fire Lizard!" (Yet another author's note: I know the name is crappy, but I couldn't think of anything better, also, he isn't as weenie as he sounds.)"I was just encapsulated, and now I've been released, thanks to Sonic, and Knuckles..."
I personally think the story is getting better, but that's just me, and again please tell me what you think of this page.