Ok, this time, I'm going to stop writing if I don't get a review from some
one else, I mean, come on, there has to be someone else reading besides
Magic Pickle Fairy, If you choose to review, I'll enter you into a drawing
to be the 1 of 10 people that get the coolest sonic song so far! So READ
AND REVIEW! Notice that, also, I'm putting up a new chapter every day, so
there's no excuse for flaming me because of cliffhangers.
Just to torture you, I'm going to put the conclusion to the last chapter's cliffhanger at the end of the page. Evil laugh! And watch the first chapter, I'm going to make it better, and I'm going to change the name of this to sonic 4, just to catch more people's attention, and start anew on this story.
Station Square
"Rwaaaaaarwa!" Perfect Chaos (now called PC till the end of the chapter) cried.
"Wow, pe-pe-Perfect Chaos,"(author's note: I didn't call him PC because it was in dialog, duh)" I thought that you became nice again!" Amy whispered in a scared voice.
PC started firing those weird tornados's at any building he saw, completely destroying any and everything in his way, first went the toy store, then the glue factory, and the resort. The military came soon after the attack started. Even though the city was all rubble and smoke, they fought until death. Even though they know that there weapons were really only a petty annoyance.
It was almost pathetic, PC didn't even flinch as the military wasted 100's of missiles and bombshells, and nothing did any good. After the fight was over, there were only 1 or 2 building that were still standing. And Amy noticed the faded and cracked sign on one of them
MILLER'S FIRE WORKS
OPEN 5AM-5PM EVERY DAY
Although the last part didn't really matter, the FIRE WORKS part triggered a thought in Amy's head. What if I made Perfect Chaos shoot his laser at the fire works shop, wouldn't it send a tiny barrage of fire works out of the building and maybe, because of the delayed reaction, be able to reach his brain with out exploding? (Author's note: PC's only weak point is his brain, other wise, every other place is invincible.) Amy thought for a second, then rushed through the wooden door.
Even though it was after 6 at night, the wood was weak enough from all of the explosions taking place around it, that it was weak enough to be able to break with Amy's Piko Piko hammer.
She rushed in, and started turning every rocket towards PC. Then, she ran out side, gathered the seven colorless emeralds, and used them to turn into Super Amy.
Even though I may not be as fast as Super Sonic, Super Amy thought, I could still get him to fire towards the fireworks building. Super Amy ran as fast as she could towards PC, making sure that she was going in a straight line from the fireworks shop, and rammed straight into PC. Obviously this didn't go unnoticed by PC, considering that Super Amy was fast enough to just barely hit PC's brain. He howled in pain, and dribbled towards the other end of the high way he was on. The same high way that was on DX.
Amy didn't think that PC would do that, so she decided to hit him again. This time, she wasn't fast enough to hit PC's brain, but she didn't care, she was only rings away to turning back to her vunderable form, so she needed to act fast. She ran towards where she figured PC would turn up, but just before she made it, she made a V cut towards the shop, and into it. PC obviously couldn't read, so he fired anyway. Which was his biggest mistake, because 50 mini missiles sped in a direct course towards PC, hit right where Super Amy (by now just plain Amy) had intended, PC's brain.
Just for a change of pace, I decided to skip the line that tells you where the setting is now and just put it in the story.
Now we change our scene to Angel island (naaa, I didn't really like it either, sorry) where Sonic and Knuckles found them selves facing the foe the thought they managed to beat, the Bio Lizard.
"But, but, but... How," Knuckles stuttered.
"I don't know, I thought we beat him"
"RAAAAAAAOUGH" Shadow screamed (for those of you who don't remember, Shadow is the Bio Lizard too.) the battle began immediately, Shadow started right away with his anti-gravity attack with the bubbles. He wasn't making any mistakes this time; a shrimpy hedgehog wouldn't beat him again, this time...
Next issue, either the spiced up version of chapter 1, the dead enemies revenge, or both (I might change the name though.)
Just to torture you, I'm going to put the conclusion to the last chapter's cliffhanger at the end of the page. Evil laugh! And watch the first chapter, I'm going to make it better, and I'm going to change the name of this to sonic 4, just to catch more people's attention, and start anew on this story.
Station Square
"Rwaaaaaarwa!" Perfect Chaos (now called PC till the end of the chapter) cried.
"Wow, pe-pe-Perfect Chaos,"(author's note: I didn't call him PC because it was in dialog, duh)" I thought that you became nice again!" Amy whispered in a scared voice.
PC started firing those weird tornados's at any building he saw, completely destroying any and everything in his way, first went the toy store, then the glue factory, and the resort. The military came soon after the attack started. Even though the city was all rubble and smoke, they fought until death. Even though they know that there weapons were really only a petty annoyance.
It was almost pathetic, PC didn't even flinch as the military wasted 100's of missiles and bombshells, and nothing did any good. After the fight was over, there were only 1 or 2 building that were still standing. And Amy noticed the faded and cracked sign on one of them
MILLER'S FIRE WORKS
OPEN 5AM-5PM EVERY DAY
Although the last part didn't really matter, the FIRE WORKS part triggered a thought in Amy's head. What if I made Perfect Chaos shoot his laser at the fire works shop, wouldn't it send a tiny barrage of fire works out of the building and maybe, because of the delayed reaction, be able to reach his brain with out exploding? (Author's note: PC's only weak point is his brain, other wise, every other place is invincible.) Amy thought for a second, then rushed through the wooden door.
Even though it was after 6 at night, the wood was weak enough from all of the explosions taking place around it, that it was weak enough to be able to break with Amy's Piko Piko hammer.
She rushed in, and started turning every rocket towards PC. Then, she ran out side, gathered the seven colorless emeralds, and used them to turn into Super Amy.
Even though I may not be as fast as Super Sonic, Super Amy thought, I could still get him to fire towards the fireworks building. Super Amy ran as fast as she could towards PC, making sure that she was going in a straight line from the fireworks shop, and rammed straight into PC. Obviously this didn't go unnoticed by PC, considering that Super Amy was fast enough to just barely hit PC's brain. He howled in pain, and dribbled towards the other end of the high way he was on. The same high way that was on DX.
Amy didn't think that PC would do that, so she decided to hit him again. This time, she wasn't fast enough to hit PC's brain, but she didn't care, she was only rings away to turning back to her vunderable form, so she needed to act fast. She ran towards where she figured PC would turn up, but just before she made it, she made a V cut towards the shop, and into it. PC obviously couldn't read, so he fired anyway. Which was his biggest mistake, because 50 mini missiles sped in a direct course towards PC, hit right where Super Amy (by now just plain Amy) had intended, PC's brain.
Just for a change of pace, I decided to skip the line that tells you where the setting is now and just put it in the story.
Now we change our scene to Angel island (naaa, I didn't really like it either, sorry) where Sonic and Knuckles found them selves facing the foe the thought they managed to beat, the Bio Lizard.
"But, but, but... How," Knuckles stuttered.
"I don't know, I thought we beat him"
"RAAAAAAAOUGH" Shadow screamed (for those of you who don't remember, Shadow is the Bio Lizard too.) the battle began immediately, Shadow started right away with his anti-gravity attack with the bubbles. He wasn't making any mistakes this time; a shrimpy hedgehog wouldn't beat him again, this time...
Next issue, either the spiced up version of chapter 1, the dead enemies revenge, or both (I might change the name though.)