A/N: Hey guys this is my first shot at a Lily/James fic except for this
short one that I did, but this one isn't intended to be a short one. So
read and tell me what you think. Im going retype the summary in here
because it didn't all fit. So please r/r and enjoy and tell me if I should
keep going with it. I'm not going start the second chapter unless I have
enough people saying they want more. Ps. half of the first chapter is
James' point of view but then it cuts of so I'll let you guys no when it
cuts off his point of view.
Summary: Lucius is obsessed with Lily. Maybe just a little too much. There a couple but their not the lovable couple everyone thinks they are. James loves Lily and vise versa. But Lucius has Lily right where he wants her. When he tells Lily that she cant speak to James or her friends or their will be severe consequences will she listen to him or follow her heart .Or in Lucius' case will James have to die so Lucius can have Lily all to himself?
Disclaimer: Sadly I own nothing!! ( Everything that has to do with Harry Potter belongs to Jk. Except for Liz!! Haha she's my character that I made up!!!:-P .
Chapter One: How It All Started.
Lily Evans, Arabella Figg and Liz Purr were the three most beautiful 6th year students at Hogwarts School of witchcraft and wizardry. And they were all wanted by the guys. Each one of them had at least two guys after them at a time.
In this years case Arabella had three guys after her. They were so obsessed with her they were ready to hand their lives over just to have one little kiss from her. These guys were Amos Diggory, a 6th year hufflepuff sort of cocky and talked in an annoying rich strong English accent like in the olden day's type of thing. Then there was Damion Flint a 7th year slytherin who was a very dark character as most slytherins were. And then their was my best friend Sirius Black. 6th years Gryffindor like me, and he was very prankster like and popular. Arabella was a pretty hot girl .She had blonde hair a bit past the shoulder with blue eyes.
Then there was Liz. Who as far as I know right now only has 2 guys after her? Tom Riddle, A dark and mysterious 7th year slytherin who likes to keep to himself a lot. Kind of creepy actually. Then their was my other best friend Remus Lupin. He isn't exactly the prankster type like Sirius and I, but he was good looking. He was also a 6th year Gryffindor like Sirius and I.
Then we cannot forget the most beautiful girl in the universe, let alone just Hogwarts. Lily had about shoulder length deep red hair with beautiful green eyes that you could get lost in if you stare at them for to long. Something I got to remind myself not to do so much. So anyways she had her infatuated boyfriend Lucius Malfoy, a 7th year slytherin in touch with all the dark arts and he thinks he's cock shit of the universe. As you can tell were not really the best of friends. More like the best of enemies. Anyways, again moving on to our second guy. Well that would be me of course. James Potter, 6th year Gryffindor, and seeker for the house team, and as most girls say "Hottest guy in the universe. "
So here's my story on how I almost got myself killed for the one I loved. I'll take you through the adventure with my friends Sirius, Arabella, Remus, and Liz and of course Lily and many more. So here we go the night it all started.
A/n: James' point of view is cut off.
OCH!! A very angry James Potter yelled at the dinner table.
"Oh sorry James did that potato hit you? " Sirius said with a mouthful of food.
"Eww that's disgusting Black!" Arabella said to Sirius with a look of disgust on her face.
"Just deal with it Arabella. All men are like that. Especially the guys we hang out with, you should know that ". Liz said sipping her pumpkin juice.
"Ya and it's totally disgusting" She pouted back. "God cant they just learn to grow up?"
"I guess not".
Remus just sat there watching his friends act like total prats. But he was also caught up in looking at his crush, Liz.
"Hey Remy!" Sirius yelled across the table. Were going to start a food fight want to come help get it started? "
"No thanks" Remus replied.
"Oh Common lighten up Remmy!" James called to him.
Just then Sirius threw a pot of potatoes over to the slytherin table right towards Damion Flint. The pot missed his head and smashed on the floor behind him. But however, the potatoes did not miss him.
"Ha just the person I wanted to hit " Sirius yelled with a big grin on his face.
Remus shook his head. He knew exactly what was going happen next.
Slytherin would retaliate and then McGonagall would get involved and by the time that's all over dinner would be over.
And so it happened, just as Remus predicted. Slytherin threw some meatballs over and then McGonagall came into the picture. Each boy who was involved got detention for a week.
Soon the boys were all headed up to their common room.
"Did any of you guys see Lily at dinner?" James asked.
"No" Everyone replied.
"Well I saw her at the beginning of Dinner" Liz said catching James' full attention. "She was at the slytherin table with Lucius and then I saw them get up and they both left". Liz continued ignoring the part where James rolled his eyes.
"She's probably with them then" Sirius said whispering the password to the fat lady. But he was quite wrong.
Lily was sitting in one of the couches in a sweater reading a book.
All of them stopped to look at her.
"Umm Lily?" James said in shock. "Its September bloody twenty degrees out and possibly even more in here, what are you doing with a sweater on?"
Lily looked up from her book.
"I'm sick. I have a cold and so that's why I'm wearing a sweater". She said in a low voice. James noticed she was shaking.
She looked up to see surprised faces.
"What is it?"
"Holy shit big enough bruise on your face?" Sirius yelled to her.
"What happened James asked?"
Lily got nervous and started to shake even more. "I'm fine. I ran into a door. Now excuse me please I'm going to go to bed. And without letting they comment she took off up stairs.
"We'll see what's wrong with her" Arabella said. Then she and Liz took off upstairs after Lily.
James looked really worried.
"Don't worry Mate I'm sure she's fine" Sirius said reassuringly. "Ya" Remus agreed.
"I'm going to go to bed you guys coming?" Sirius asked.
Remus began to walk up the stairs.
"I'll be up in a minute" James told them.
James knew Lily was lying. He knew something was going on and he just had a feeling it was possibly connected to Lucius. He wasn't going to give up until he found out what was wrong with his Lily.
A/n: Ok well there it is. Let me know what you guys think kk? Review Review Review!!! lol. Let me know if I should keep it and go with writing the second chapter.
Summary: Lucius is obsessed with Lily. Maybe just a little too much. There a couple but their not the lovable couple everyone thinks they are. James loves Lily and vise versa. But Lucius has Lily right where he wants her. When he tells Lily that she cant speak to James or her friends or their will be severe consequences will she listen to him or follow her heart .Or in Lucius' case will James have to die so Lucius can have Lily all to himself?
Disclaimer: Sadly I own nothing!! ( Everything that has to do with Harry Potter belongs to Jk. Except for Liz!! Haha she's my character that I made up!!!:-P .
Chapter One: How It All Started.
Lily Evans, Arabella Figg and Liz Purr were the three most beautiful 6th year students at Hogwarts School of witchcraft and wizardry. And they were all wanted by the guys. Each one of them had at least two guys after them at a time.
In this years case Arabella had three guys after her. They were so obsessed with her they were ready to hand their lives over just to have one little kiss from her. These guys were Amos Diggory, a 6th year hufflepuff sort of cocky and talked in an annoying rich strong English accent like in the olden day's type of thing. Then there was Damion Flint a 7th year slytherin who was a very dark character as most slytherins were. And then their was my best friend Sirius Black. 6th years Gryffindor like me, and he was very prankster like and popular. Arabella was a pretty hot girl .She had blonde hair a bit past the shoulder with blue eyes.
Then there was Liz. Who as far as I know right now only has 2 guys after her? Tom Riddle, A dark and mysterious 7th year slytherin who likes to keep to himself a lot. Kind of creepy actually. Then their was my other best friend Remus Lupin. He isn't exactly the prankster type like Sirius and I, but he was good looking. He was also a 6th year Gryffindor like Sirius and I.
Then we cannot forget the most beautiful girl in the universe, let alone just Hogwarts. Lily had about shoulder length deep red hair with beautiful green eyes that you could get lost in if you stare at them for to long. Something I got to remind myself not to do so much. So anyways she had her infatuated boyfriend Lucius Malfoy, a 7th year slytherin in touch with all the dark arts and he thinks he's cock shit of the universe. As you can tell were not really the best of friends. More like the best of enemies. Anyways, again moving on to our second guy. Well that would be me of course. James Potter, 6th year Gryffindor, and seeker for the house team, and as most girls say "Hottest guy in the universe. "
So here's my story on how I almost got myself killed for the one I loved. I'll take you through the adventure with my friends Sirius, Arabella, Remus, and Liz and of course Lily and many more. So here we go the night it all started.
A/n: James' point of view is cut off.
OCH!! A very angry James Potter yelled at the dinner table.
"Oh sorry James did that potato hit you? " Sirius said with a mouthful of food.
"Eww that's disgusting Black!" Arabella said to Sirius with a look of disgust on her face.
"Just deal with it Arabella. All men are like that. Especially the guys we hang out with, you should know that ". Liz said sipping her pumpkin juice.
"Ya and it's totally disgusting" She pouted back. "God cant they just learn to grow up?"
"I guess not".
Remus just sat there watching his friends act like total prats. But he was also caught up in looking at his crush, Liz.
"Hey Remy!" Sirius yelled across the table. Were going to start a food fight want to come help get it started? "
"No thanks" Remus replied.
"Oh Common lighten up Remmy!" James called to him.
Just then Sirius threw a pot of potatoes over to the slytherin table right towards Damion Flint. The pot missed his head and smashed on the floor behind him. But however, the potatoes did not miss him.
"Ha just the person I wanted to hit " Sirius yelled with a big grin on his face.
Remus shook his head. He knew exactly what was going happen next.
Slytherin would retaliate and then McGonagall would get involved and by the time that's all over dinner would be over.
And so it happened, just as Remus predicted. Slytherin threw some meatballs over and then McGonagall came into the picture. Each boy who was involved got detention for a week.
Soon the boys were all headed up to their common room.
"Did any of you guys see Lily at dinner?" James asked.
"No" Everyone replied.
"Well I saw her at the beginning of Dinner" Liz said catching James' full attention. "She was at the slytherin table with Lucius and then I saw them get up and they both left". Liz continued ignoring the part where James rolled his eyes.
"She's probably with them then" Sirius said whispering the password to the fat lady. But he was quite wrong.
Lily was sitting in one of the couches in a sweater reading a book.
All of them stopped to look at her.
"Umm Lily?" James said in shock. "Its September bloody twenty degrees out and possibly even more in here, what are you doing with a sweater on?"
Lily looked up from her book.
"I'm sick. I have a cold and so that's why I'm wearing a sweater". She said in a low voice. James noticed she was shaking.
She looked up to see surprised faces.
"What is it?"
"Holy shit big enough bruise on your face?" Sirius yelled to her.
"What happened James asked?"
Lily got nervous and started to shake even more. "I'm fine. I ran into a door. Now excuse me please I'm going to go to bed. And without letting they comment she took off up stairs.
"We'll see what's wrong with her" Arabella said. Then she and Liz took off upstairs after Lily.
James looked really worried.
"Don't worry Mate I'm sure she's fine" Sirius said reassuringly. "Ya" Remus agreed.
"I'm going to go to bed you guys coming?" Sirius asked.
Remus began to walk up the stairs.
"I'll be up in a minute" James told them.
James knew Lily was lying. He knew something was going on and he just had a feeling it was possibly connected to Lucius. He wasn't going to give up until he found out what was wrong with his Lily.
A/n: Ok well there it is. Let me know what you guys think kk? Review Review Review!!! lol. Let me know if I should keep it and go with writing the second chapter.