Haha! I m baaaack! Ok, so Cad wasn't expecting to get so many characters in the few hours that her story was up, she took it down as soon as she had like 8 but you couldn't see that it had been closed until I has like 13! And I, cad, would feel so guilty at turning down characters(believe me I would, ask ne of my friend, I hate making people no like me, it makes my stummy(yes I said stummy, its my cross between tummy and stomach) hurt a ton.) so I just decided to except them all. Therefore, since I have so many they will probably not develop as well as they should-sorry! But that is the price you will have 2 pay! 4 seeing yur characters in this story. The pick of boys went in order of who sent their bio in first(that was the only way I could think of to make it fair) so I put girls with guys the best that I could, some against my better judgement, and I hope everything is alright. Ok, shoutouts are really long this time because I just have so much to say, in the future I will try and make my chappie longer than the shoutouts! Since some of you didn't give me as much info as others, I will be forced to make some stuff up for the sake of the story-sorry if I get anything way off! I am going away 4 a couple of weeks (2 camp for a week and then to my grandparents) so there wont be an update for while-sorry! But keep checking either around the 4th (ill be home between my 2 trips) or the 11th and there after I will continue with this- so don't give up on me! Ill be back!
Shout outs!
NadaZimri- ah darling, you are so wonderful! Even when im is stupid and I dont email you when Im supposed to you still give me characters! Maverick is awesome, and I luv the history-very creative! Lets see, maverick is with... Blink
Ccat- Cat sounds like some people I know! The spelling was fine (I wouldn't know if it were wrong or not cause I cant spell either (spell check is my savior)). Cat has been paired with-Race, a perfect match
Thumbsucker Snitch- Lute is such a cool name and I think its cool that you made her friends of the newsies, but not a newsie! Unfortunately I had to give you snitch, I m so terribly sorry, I know he was the last on ur list, but when you review third...
Serena Conlon: is serena ur real name? One of my best friend's name is Serena! I luv it! Empress is also and awesome name! I think that is so cool! Well, you called dibs first, so you do get spot.
Strawberri Shake- Annie O'Malley, when I read that it reminded me of this song I know that is called Molly O'Malley's but I forgot that it was Molly and I was singing it w/Annie instead until my bro yelled me and said it was molly, neways, yeah. Hornet, a cool name and my only girl w/ glasses! Go glasses! And I am sorry but some one called spot first so the two kids with glasses will have to stick together. Hornet gets specs.
Written Sparks- I luv yur penname! It is so cool! And I really like Eli's newsie name! Nova! That's awesome! Yes, you can have skittery!
Lady of Tir Na Nog- where is Tir Na Nog from? It sounds so familiar and I know I know it from some where, but I cant remember where! Please tell me! I wants to know! NO matter where it came from its really cool! I will try and write an irish accent, but I don't know that much about it so bear with me! Lets see, who is Irish with, ah, it has to be Bumlets.
Trolley- I luv the name trolley! Its so cool! Is it because of her red hair and blue eyes? Im really sorry but all of the guys on ur list were already taken so I'm going ta getcha a guy eventually, but you'll just have to be patient. Ok? Sorry!
Dimonah Tralon- bookworm reminds me a lot of myself! It was kinda weird ta read it and go woah, that's like me down to long brwn hair and blue eyes and all the personality stuff you wrote. That's so sad about her house burning down! And all her family gone! Ah darling, yur dear bookworm shall be with jack!
Emotions-Alright gurl! You win the award for the longest bio! Even half of urs was longer than neone else's! but that's ok! I enjoyed reading it and seeing the depth that you gave to ur characters-I hope I can keep that up! Emotions and Wolf-awsome!
Piratechic- and then there was Ser, who didn't even really bother to fill it out so I suppose I shall have to punish you for that, what facts were left out of yur bio are now at my disposal to be what ever I choose! Hahaha! Revenge is sweet! Unfortunately for my revenge scheme, mush was left so I am going to give him to you- but you may be sorry in the end! (I can see the face you get and then you gogasp "Is that a threat" and you look so astonished so id just like to say -yes, that is a threat)
Cerridwen4-Ah, you are my first person to review without entering the casting call, I know you reviewed too late for that and I do feel bad about it, but I am so glad that I do have at least one non-self centered reviewer-all the rest of them reviewed cause they wanted to see their character in the story so... kuddos 2 you! Where is Cerridwen from? Its really cool, iknow I really like Gwen 2! If it weren't so old fashioned I might want to name my hopeful daughter that, I still might. Thanx 4 the spelling stuff! I know I am really bad, and the rood/rude thing, yeah. It was really late and I looked it and thought it looked wrong, but I was too tired to figure it out-sorry, but it has been fixed!
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The group of about 2 dozen newsies saw Jack and came over to see what he was doing.
"Whatcha got there Jack?" Spot questioned as he stumbled over, when he saw Gwen he stopped and just gawked. "Ah, she's a pretty little wench ain't she?" This produced a smack on the back of Spot's head from his girlfriend Empress and a disgusted noise from Gwen. Empress was a little shorter (AN: honestly I have no idea how tall Spot is, but lets just say hes about 5' 5' or 5'6" ok?) than Spot with hair that shimmered and changed from black to deep red every time she moved. Her hazel eyes darkened a shade as she saw Spot staring at this new girl.
"Excuse you! I am not a... a..." Gwen started and then looked uncomfortable.
"Wench?" Spot offered.
"Yes... that, and I don't appreciate being called one!"
"Oh, Hoity Toity, too!" Spot again insulted her with.
Another girl stepped out of the crowd. "Now Spot! Don't be so mean! Can't you see that you're insulting the poor dear!" She pushed past Spot and went to sit down next to the girl. "My name is Lute, I'm sorry for him. Are you alright?" Lute took an astonished and then disgusted Gwen into a sisterly hug. Gwen quickly pulled away and scooted as far down to the other side of the bench away from Lute as she could. Lute's green eyes widened in surprise.
"Good job Lute, now you've made everything all better!" came a voice from the crowd and then Gwen saw the source of the sarcastic words. A girl with wild red hair in a braid down her back emerged and sized up Gwen. "Can't you see she's just a goily goil who lost her way on the way home from a ball! The goil is obviously not going to like any of us, we're too far below her. Da name's Hornet, not that you would care."
"You're absolutely right I wouldn't care. I really don't care who any of you are. You are all absolutely abominable acting, looking... and smelling. Now please remove your self's from my presence before I am forced to take drastic actions."
Laughter erupted from the crowd and over it you could hear Hornet speaking in her already too familiar sarcastic tone. "Do ya heah that? She might be forced ta take derastic actions!"
"Ugh. I do not appreciate your crude manners. I do not wish to be seen in company such as your self's, you have no idea what my friends and suitors would say if they saw me now. So quick before anyone sees, leave."
A slender girl of about 5'5" stepped forward out of the crowd with a genuine friendly smile on her face. "Don't mind them Miss, they just had a few too many drinks at Medda's," a soft voice with a British accent came from this girl. Gwen looked up and smiled weakly at finding at least one friendly face among this group of barbarians.
Most of the newsies had stopped laughing loudly, all except one. Gwen stared wide eyed at this girl who seemed to have no control what so ever. "Maverick! Shuddup!" yelled an annoyed Hornet.
This apparent, Maverick, tried to talk between giggles. "I'm...sorry... I...just can't...help...it...its...just...so...funny!" Then before she could get anymore out Maverick burst into another violent fit of giggles.
"Yeah, everythings funny when yer punch drunk Maverick. Come on, we better get you back to the lodging house before you do anything rash (AN2 Ser! Teehee he said rash!)," her boyfriend Blink half suggested half ordered.
More giggles from Maverick, "But you wouldn't mind if I did anything rash to you would you?" And then much to Gwen's dismay they proceeded to make out.
"Ah! That's disgusting! Get a room!" said an equally disgusted Hornet.
"Hornet, you don't think it's so disgusting when it's you and Specs!" a random voice called from the midst of the crowd. Hornet turned pink and backed into the crowd and settled next to Specs hiding her face in his shirt. Everyone laughed and then turned their attention back to Gwen who was even more grossed out than before.
"Yes, well, if you all will not leave then, I will. I simply cannot stand to be in such company a minute longer," Gwen stated then leaned over to untangle the hem of her dress from her shoes. When she did this the low neck of her dress moved until every person standing around could see plenty of cleavage. Gwen of course, did no realize this and unfortunately stayed like that for quite some time.
The Brooklyn newsie Emotions was the first of the girls to notice that her guy, Wolf, was not minding this "show." She quickly said, with so much hatred in her voice, "If that dress were any lower, or tighter, you could pass as a hussy my dear."
Gwen quickly sat up, turning a deep shade of red and to everyone's surprise started to cry. When she realized she was crying in front of all these people she picked up her skirts and fled back down the street that she had come. Now everyone mostly shrugged it off, everyone except an irish girl named Trolley. Trolley's big blue eyes glassed over as she remembered her first few times around this group and how hard it was for her. She quickly ran after Gwen. Finally she spotted the puffy eyed girl breathing hard and holding her side and she slowed to a walk. When Gwen heard footsteps behind her she turned around to see who it was, when she realized it was one of those terrible street urchins she quickened her pace. Trolley caught up with the girl, which wasn't very hard considering Gwen was wearing a corset, heels, a puffy dress, and had never needed to run before in her whole life.
"What?" said Gwen angrily and she whipped around to face Trolley. "Have you come here to make fun of me and call me more names? Well, you know what, I simply do not wish to hear it. Thank you very much."
AN3 sorry to you all who were not mentioned in this chappie, but eventually everyone will be there, i hope.
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