Xx: Yay, my first review, thank you Phantom-girl294 for your great review,
and yes I will strive to keep this story going as long as I get means to do
so cough morereviews cough, if my A.D.D. doesn't kick in aswell...sees a
butterfly ooooooo runs away trying to catch it
Sabeth: ooooo, god slaps forhead
Hexus: could you be anymore obvious, you're just trying to boost your confidence because your nothing but a LOSER.
Xx: ...
Hexus: just kidding buddy
Xx: ...
Hexus: buddy...?
Xx: ... WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!... you're so mean, why did I even create you, all you do is make fun of me hides in corner clutching Sabeth her gloomy bear and sucking her thumb
Hexus: I'm sooo sorry Lex I didn't know goes to huge Lex
Xx: grins evily MOOHAHAHAHAHA YOU HAVE FALLEN INTO MY TRAP!!!
Hexus: Wha... CUNK ( The sound of a frying pan hitting one's scull
Xx: let us continue...
Chapter 2 this is hell?
Tala turned to find a small boy with dark purple hair running towards him, yelling "TALA BUDDY WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN?!" (A/N: ack he sounds like Tyson eye twitches as Lex stabs pins in to a 'Tyson voo doo doll')
"Ian is that you..?" Tala was still suspicious of this place, it seemed a little too 'happy' for it to be hell.
"The one and only, honestly who else would be this good looking other then myself," Ian gloated, pointing his odd nose in the air, attempting to make himself taller.
"No, it's because your so damn short, garden gnome." A violet haired boy appeared from the shadows of the near by corner, a smirk plastered on his face.
"Bryan you're here too, where is Spencer?" Tala asked.
"You mean he's not with you?" Ian asked.
"Soul 2F47NN8JI9, or Spencer as you know him, has been already assigned to a demon." A sharp voice was heard coming for the old building.
"It's always like Spencer, to get things done before the rest of us get started." sneered Brian.
"Ahem" A voice suddenly caught their attention, they turned to see a tall and thin demon, in a business suit, her face was long, bony and blue tinted with completely black eyes, 2 horns just above her pointed eyebrows. "If you don't mind I'd like to get this over with, so I can finally go on my coffee break." She spoke in a dry tone.
With that the blue demoness turned and strutted towards the great doors, of the building she came from, expecting that she wanted them to follow, they walked closely behind her.
Once they entered the old monument, they stopped dead in their tracks. The place was booming with demons and what seemed to be humans like themselves, being led into many different hallways by business demoness. Tala observed the area in amusement, the place seemed much bigger than what the outside appearance would have you believe. It seemed to have about 20 floors many doors on each level.
'I wonder where they all lead to?' he asked himself, as he felt a someone pushing him to go forward, losing his train of thought. "Hey, what's the big..." he turned around to see a large lizard-like demon looking down on him.
"If youzzzzzzzzzzzz don't mindzzzzzzzzzzz movvvvvvvvvvvvvvving, I havvvvvvvvve placezzzzzzzzz to go and demonzzzzzzzzzzzz to seeeeeeeeee." The demon hissed, slithering past him.
"Cool." Ian gasped, Snakes were his favorite animal.
Brian just kept on walking, not fazed at all by the encounter with the large snake, but then again... it was Brian, nothing ever fazed him.(-- so true, it could be the end of the world and he wouldn't give a rat's ass)
Tala caught up with the demoness, who was guiding them through a large tunnel marked 'northern 64'. She looked beside her to see Tala still trying to get over the shock of what he just saw. She smirked, "I see you met Zalgara, he's our supervisor of labour distribution."
"You mean that giant snake thing, has a job?" Tala asked, even more shocked now.
The demoness gave him a stern look, "He's not a Snake thing, he is known as a Naga."
"Hey, that was really a Naga, holy shit I read about those, I can't believe I just saw one, for real." Ian yelled in excitement, jumping around like a 5 year old who just found out he was going to Disney land.
"Stop being an idiot." Brian snarled grabbing the sugar high teen and dragging him along as they continued.
Finally they got to the end of the tunnel to find a small room, that kind of looked like a old style living room, the place was littered with old pictures of what seemed to be demons and beast and in the center of the room 6 old tattered chairs were placed in a circle. Tala noticed 2 of them were occupied, but their backs were turned so he could not see them that well, mainly because the light was dim around them.
"Well this is it," the demoness spoke clapping her hands, catching the attention of the 2 who were seated.(not really Bamm though whispers he has selective hearing, Bamm: I heard that punches Lex)
"Took long enough," the taller one sneered, standing up and facing the group, slowly walking towards the teens and in to the light. Her silver eyes flashed in the light as she scanned over the three boys. "They better be worth it, if you made me wait this long"
"I assure you, they are all top grade specimens, Miss Ryn." chirped the demoness.
The silver eyed girl seemed unamussed with her selection until her shining eyes met a pair of pale violet ones. A smirk appeared on her face as she walked closer to the owner on the light violet eyes, until she was looking up at them.
Brian felt a little bit uncomfortable with a girl this close to him, but he didn't let it show. He just stared down at her emotionless.
"Not much of a talker now is he?" questioned the Ryn.
"His name is Brian and you'd be lucky if you got him to say a whole sentence, that isn't threatening of course." Ian spoke up. "Is that right there buddy." Ian nudged his tall silent friend.
"And why is that, cats got you tongue?" Ryn teased, stepping up on her tippy toes, almost coming face to face with her mute teen.
Brian just smirked.
Ryn smiled back and turned to the demoness "I'll take this one, it will be fun to break him." Then her face once again turned into an angered impatient expression. "Hurry the hell up Bamm, I've got important shit to do." She turned to the other person still in their seat.
A large ear perked up and the Bunny-like creature turned and faced them, resting her head on the back of the chair. "ok, ok Ryn, jeez, do you enjoy having a stick up your ass 24/7?" She laughed as she jumped out of the chair doing a perfect front flip and landing beside her pissed off friend. She looked at the 3 boys and began walking over to Tala.
Tala couldn't help but laugh at the fact that she was barely passed his hips.
Bamm looked up at redhead who was snickering and scowled, "What's so funny ?"
"Like you don't know" chirped Ian who was standing beside Tala, and feeling a little more confident, to see that he was even taller then her, but only by a few inches.
Bamm turned her attention to the purple haired boy. "O yeah, you're the one to talk." She stuck out her tongue.
"I'm taller than you." Ian gloated
"Why you..." she was about to strangle him when a angered voice rang out.
"Bamm just pick already for christ' sake." Boomed Ryn
She turned to the demoness and smirked, "I'll take 'shorty' over here." She said pointing behind her, to Ian who looked like he was going to pounce.
"Then it's settled, you may leave now, thank you for you time." Replied the demoness as she snapped her fingers and a portal appeared.
Both girls grabbed their new slaves and headed for the portal, leaving Tala and the demoness.
Once the portal had vanished the demoness was about to leave, when she saw Tala. "hmmmmm... that's weird, there's one more mortal." She said, pulling out her clip board and checking down the list. "somebody didn't show, I guess we'll just assign you to the 'Doom-mines'"
Tala gulped 'the Doom-mines, gee that sounds just delightful.' He thought as the demoness walked passed him, motioning to follow when a voice rang out.
"WAIT!!!!!!"
Xx: another cliffy, I love cliffies.
Hexus: glares
Xx: what? Hexus: WHEN THE HELL AM I COMING IN?!
Xx: soon, next chapter I promise . Anywhoooo just want to remind you to review, please, if so I shall give you a cookie dangles cookie. And I'd like to say to IceArchergirl, you story kicks ass, and you inspired me to continue this story. Oh, and I changed the descriptions of my characters, so you can check that out too.
Well cya, and read and review.
Sabeth: ooooo, god slaps forhead
Hexus: could you be anymore obvious, you're just trying to boost your confidence because your nothing but a LOSER.
Xx: ...
Hexus: just kidding buddy
Xx: ...
Hexus: buddy...?
Xx: ... WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!... you're so mean, why did I even create you, all you do is make fun of me hides in corner clutching Sabeth her gloomy bear and sucking her thumb
Hexus: I'm sooo sorry Lex I didn't know goes to huge Lex
Xx: grins evily MOOHAHAHAHAHA YOU HAVE FALLEN INTO MY TRAP!!!
Hexus: Wha... CUNK ( The sound of a frying pan hitting one's scull
Xx: let us continue...
Chapter 2 this is hell?
Tala turned to find a small boy with dark purple hair running towards him, yelling "TALA BUDDY WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN?!" (A/N: ack he sounds like Tyson eye twitches as Lex stabs pins in to a 'Tyson voo doo doll')
"Ian is that you..?" Tala was still suspicious of this place, it seemed a little too 'happy' for it to be hell.
"The one and only, honestly who else would be this good looking other then myself," Ian gloated, pointing his odd nose in the air, attempting to make himself taller.
"No, it's because your so damn short, garden gnome." A violet haired boy appeared from the shadows of the near by corner, a smirk plastered on his face.
"Bryan you're here too, where is Spencer?" Tala asked.
"You mean he's not with you?" Ian asked.
"Soul 2F47NN8JI9, or Spencer as you know him, has been already assigned to a demon." A sharp voice was heard coming for the old building.
"It's always like Spencer, to get things done before the rest of us get started." sneered Brian.
"Ahem" A voice suddenly caught their attention, they turned to see a tall and thin demon, in a business suit, her face was long, bony and blue tinted with completely black eyes, 2 horns just above her pointed eyebrows. "If you don't mind I'd like to get this over with, so I can finally go on my coffee break." She spoke in a dry tone.
With that the blue demoness turned and strutted towards the great doors, of the building she came from, expecting that she wanted them to follow, they walked closely behind her.
Once they entered the old monument, they stopped dead in their tracks. The place was booming with demons and what seemed to be humans like themselves, being led into many different hallways by business demoness. Tala observed the area in amusement, the place seemed much bigger than what the outside appearance would have you believe. It seemed to have about 20 floors many doors on each level.
'I wonder where they all lead to?' he asked himself, as he felt a someone pushing him to go forward, losing his train of thought. "Hey, what's the big..." he turned around to see a large lizard-like demon looking down on him.
"If youzzzzzzzzzzzz don't mindzzzzzzzzzzz movvvvvvvvvvvvvvving, I havvvvvvvvve placezzzzzzzzz to go and demonzzzzzzzzzzzz to seeeeeeeeee." The demon hissed, slithering past him.
"Cool." Ian gasped, Snakes were his favorite animal.
Brian just kept on walking, not fazed at all by the encounter with the large snake, but then again... it was Brian, nothing ever fazed him.(-- so true, it could be the end of the world and he wouldn't give a rat's ass)
Tala caught up with the demoness, who was guiding them through a large tunnel marked 'northern 64'. She looked beside her to see Tala still trying to get over the shock of what he just saw. She smirked, "I see you met Zalgara, he's our supervisor of labour distribution."
"You mean that giant snake thing, has a job?" Tala asked, even more shocked now.
The demoness gave him a stern look, "He's not a Snake thing, he is known as a Naga."
"Hey, that was really a Naga, holy shit I read about those, I can't believe I just saw one, for real." Ian yelled in excitement, jumping around like a 5 year old who just found out he was going to Disney land.
"Stop being an idiot." Brian snarled grabbing the sugar high teen and dragging him along as they continued.
Finally they got to the end of the tunnel to find a small room, that kind of looked like a old style living room, the place was littered with old pictures of what seemed to be demons and beast and in the center of the room 6 old tattered chairs were placed in a circle. Tala noticed 2 of them were occupied, but their backs were turned so he could not see them that well, mainly because the light was dim around them.
"Well this is it," the demoness spoke clapping her hands, catching the attention of the 2 who were seated.(not really Bamm though whispers he has selective hearing, Bamm: I heard that punches Lex)
"Took long enough," the taller one sneered, standing up and facing the group, slowly walking towards the teens and in to the light. Her silver eyes flashed in the light as she scanned over the three boys. "They better be worth it, if you made me wait this long"
"I assure you, they are all top grade specimens, Miss Ryn." chirped the demoness.
The silver eyed girl seemed unamussed with her selection until her shining eyes met a pair of pale violet ones. A smirk appeared on her face as she walked closer to the owner on the light violet eyes, until she was looking up at them.
Brian felt a little bit uncomfortable with a girl this close to him, but he didn't let it show. He just stared down at her emotionless.
"Not much of a talker now is he?" questioned the Ryn.
"His name is Brian and you'd be lucky if you got him to say a whole sentence, that isn't threatening of course." Ian spoke up. "Is that right there buddy." Ian nudged his tall silent friend.
"And why is that, cats got you tongue?" Ryn teased, stepping up on her tippy toes, almost coming face to face with her mute teen.
Brian just smirked.
Ryn smiled back and turned to the demoness "I'll take this one, it will be fun to break him." Then her face once again turned into an angered impatient expression. "Hurry the hell up Bamm, I've got important shit to do." She turned to the other person still in their seat.
A large ear perked up and the Bunny-like creature turned and faced them, resting her head on the back of the chair. "ok, ok Ryn, jeez, do you enjoy having a stick up your ass 24/7?" She laughed as she jumped out of the chair doing a perfect front flip and landing beside her pissed off friend. She looked at the 3 boys and began walking over to Tala.
Tala couldn't help but laugh at the fact that she was barely passed his hips.
Bamm looked up at redhead who was snickering and scowled, "What's so funny ?"
"Like you don't know" chirped Ian who was standing beside Tala, and feeling a little more confident, to see that he was even taller then her, but only by a few inches.
Bamm turned her attention to the purple haired boy. "O yeah, you're the one to talk." She stuck out her tongue.
"I'm taller than you." Ian gloated
"Why you..." she was about to strangle him when a angered voice rang out.
"Bamm just pick already for christ' sake." Boomed Ryn
She turned to the demoness and smirked, "I'll take 'shorty' over here." She said pointing behind her, to Ian who looked like he was going to pounce.
"Then it's settled, you may leave now, thank you for you time." Replied the demoness as she snapped her fingers and a portal appeared.
Both girls grabbed their new slaves and headed for the portal, leaving Tala and the demoness.
Once the portal had vanished the demoness was about to leave, when she saw Tala. "hmmmmm... that's weird, there's one more mortal." She said, pulling out her clip board and checking down the list. "somebody didn't show, I guess we'll just assign you to the 'Doom-mines'"
Tala gulped 'the Doom-mines, gee that sounds just delightful.' He thought as the demoness walked passed him, motioning to follow when a voice rang out.
"WAIT!!!!!!"
Xx: another cliffy, I love cliffies.
Hexus: glares
Xx: what? Hexus: WHEN THE HELL AM I COMING IN?!
Xx: soon, next chapter I promise . Anywhoooo just want to remind you to review, please, if so I shall give you a cookie dangles cookie. And I'd like to say to IceArchergirl, you story kicks ass, and you inspired me to continue this story. Oh, and I changed the descriptions of my characters, so you can check that out too.
Well cya, and read and review.