Wow, 12 reviews, holy shit, that's inhuman for me Oo, no seriously. Anywhoo here you go, on with the story.

Hexus: that's it, holy crap that was quick.

Xx: yeah whatever...lets continue... it's almost been all summer...

Hexus: wait a sec, there's something wrong... what's wrong?

Xx: ...I have no social life...

Hexus: that's all?

Xx: No, there's more I have no friends, the INTIRE summer I did nothing but read fanfics, and online comics, the only good thing was the game designing course I got to go to, but I was once again shunned because I was the only FEMALE there, now I'm back home, and I found out my cat just died...he was my only friends for 9 years of my life.

Hexus: oooooooook, well lets continue with the fic!

First Impressions

Tala turned around to come face to face with something he'd never expect. He didn't know whether to be amazed... or scared. She stood not to far from where Tala stood a curious look on her face. She was definatly different, from her baggy clothes, hiding her frail body, to her black/fuchsia dreads and long pointed fennec-like ears, littered with piercing (a/n: I'm not going to explain what she looks like again, so if you forgot check out the intro, I'll get a pic of her soon).

'Holy shit, she's weird looking.' He thought to himself.

'Wow, your quick to judge.' A female voice echoed in his mind. Tala blinked in amazement as he locked eyes with the girl, who wore a smirk on her face.

'You can read my mind?' he asked

'Standard Demon abilities...'

"Miss Hexus, your late." The demoness' stern tone broke the girl's concentration, "and because of that you get last pick." The demoness crossed her arms, looking pleased that she made her point.

"Fine by me." She huffed, glancing at Tala 'my friends must have had bad taste.' She thought to herself.

"Fine, fine whatever, just leave already, I need my coffee." The demoness said dryly, messaging her temples.

"Ok, then lets go." Hexus smiled grabbing Tala's arm and pulling him into the portal the demoness had made.

Walking through that portal was like being put in a pot full of boiling water, and then locked in a freezer, but it was over quick, leaving them to what seemed to be a street corner, a normal street corner.

Tala didn't get it, where were the suffering souls? The bottomless fire pits of doom? The massive slave masters and their wipes? WHERE WAS SATAIN?!

Hexus looked at him with a sly expression, "What's wrong, not what you expected?"

Tala suddenly realized she was still here, and as he looked down noticing she was still holding on to him, making him blush a little.

Hexus remembered too and tore her hand away, and looked slightly embarrassed. "Yes well, I should show you around and stuff, yes that would be good and all." She babbled on not making eye contact, while they walked down the street.

They walked in silence till something caught Tala's eye, he looked up at the towering statue of what looked like a cloaked figure that was just ahead.

Hexus looked at him with a smile then also looking at the building, "This is it."

Tala looked at her puzzled, "You mean..."

"Welcome to my home." She said walking forward, as the large metal gates screeched open, exposing a black mansion at the base of the statue-like building.

Tala was stunned, were all the demons here this rich and well off, or was he just lucky.

Hexus giggled, "This is Grim manor, and behind that Death inc., my father's company."

"You mean to tell me your dad is the Grim Reaper?" Tala final was able to speak.

"Yuppers, in fact I'm one of his best Wraiths," Hexus replied with pride.

"Like the thing that pulled me out of my grave?" Tala seemed to be more confused.

"No, that's not my slice of pie, I'm the kind of wraith that goes to earth and guides the unwilling souls to their destination." Hexus explained.

"So, go around in a black cloak carrying a scythe, telling people that it's there time." Tala was finally starting to understand.

"You got it." Hexus said, extending her hands forward, Tala gazed at her palms as a black scythe began to appear. "This is my scythe, Dark Oblivion."

"You named your weapon." Tala looked at Hexus.

"Don't you...maybe because I feel a certain bond with it." Hexus said cuddling the scythe.

Tala looked down at his gun, all rusted and worn. Hexus noticed what the old piece of metal in his hand, and grunted, "Well no wonder you never felt a connection with your weapon, its 'mortalized', but don't worry we can fix that." She said reassuring him, as she turned a walked towards the mansion. "I'll get Flare to synthesize it."

"Synthesize?" Tala wondered, putting his gun back and following Hexus.

Hexus led him through the maze-like corridors until they reached what seemed to be the basement, an old gothic style room littered with every type of vehicle you could think of, from motorcycles, to tanks, and even jets. Hexus walked over to a nearby silver fighter jet, where a pear of kick boxing boots stuck out from under it.

"Hey Jakal, you know where your girlfriend is, I have a little job for her." Hexus said, pulling the foot towards her, as a boy rolled from under the jet.

He sat up removing the goggles he was wearing, exposing his golden eyes. He had a long thin face and pointed ears, and two blonde dreaded mow hawks on either side; his dreaded bangs hide his left eye. He seemed to be about the same age as Tala, and was covered in tattoos, and his right arm was completely mechanical!

"Yeah she's in the back working on the weapon system for this baby." He said patting the side of the haul.

"Kay, thanks." Hexus replied walking towards the back, leaving Tala there who was still staring at Jakal's arm.

Finally he noticed someone was staring at him and stood, being about the same height as Tala, "What are you looking at...mortal." He hissed, showing his sharp canine-like teeth.

Tala was about to say something in return when Hexus called out, "Now no fighting boys were all friends here."

Tala turned to Hexus to see another girl standing beside her. Tala's eyes widen it was like looking at the female version of himself. The girl had winged tipped hair like his, only it was orange, with bangs covering her right eye, and a bread on the other side. Her eyes a soft indigo (bluish purple), and had no pupils.

"Heyo, I'm Flare." She grinned extending a hand; Tala shook it as Jakal began to glare.

"Tala show Flare you gun." Hexus Commanded.

He pulled out the old gun giving it to the orange haired girl; she looked at it closely, and then looked up at Hexus with a smile. "Yup, I can fix it."

"That's good, I'll see you two later then." Hexus said, pushing Tala towards the exit.

Flare looked at the two, then at Jakal, "I'm glad Hexus finally found someone."

"Why? Because she's been such a guy repellant all her life." Jakal said.

Flare punched his human arm, "No, because maybe he's...the one."

Jakal looked at her still rubbing his arm, "but he's a mortal."

"You and I both no that can change." Flare said looking off in to space.

Jakal wrapped his arms around her and lightly kissed her neck. "Don't worry about it."

He reassured her turning her around and kissing her, as she hugged his neck, and deepened the kiss.

Xx: Yay, 3rd chapter done, hope you like it. I decided to add some of my original 'shadow destined' (Comic I made) characters in there, there will probably more, and I'll try and get their profiles up.

Hexus: I'm finally in this story, took long enough.

Xx: I told you that you were going to be in it.

Sabeth: hey, what about me.

Xx:...not likely....

Sabeth: please please please

Xx: I'll think about it. Oooookies so anyways I need your guy's opinion, who should the next chapter be on;

The easily angered lupin, Ryn and her mute slave, Brian.

The cute and energetic bunny demon, Bamm and her talkative rival Ian.

A llama with an annoying British accent eat biscuits and tea (just kidding)

So those are you choices (- the 3rd one), I'm not doing the next chapter till I get some reviews. Yes it is all apart of my evil plan to TAKE OVER THE WORLD... (cough, cough), I mean get more reviews.