All right, I got 11 reviews in the space to nine hours, while my other
story got four reviews in what nine days? Some one who read this story
went and read my other story also! How does that work? Oh well, Thank you
for all of them every single one! I love you all. You guy's really know
how to make some ones day! Thank you so much!
Important A/N: at the end of the first chapy, I made a mistake that some one help me come to terms with. At the end Kagome said: 'You me, wolf boy'. Right? Well, what she was supposed to say was: 'You owe me, wolf boy'. O.k.? Well that's, that. Enjoy!
-Llamachick
##$$##$ Kagome's POV $##$$##
I woke to someone calling out 'Mom', I didn't want to wake up just yet so I moaned and turned over. The cries became louder, it sounded early (Is that right? my spelling checker sucks) like Souta. "Souta go talk to mom not me" I mumbled. Then I slowly opened my eyes to see two blurry green eyes. I blinked a few times, as my eyes readjusted. "Shippo?" I asked. "Mommy's awake!" Shippo called to someone somewhere. "Where are we?" I yawned. Feeling the furs I was laying on. Shippo smiled. "In some cave near Kaede-baba's village" Shippo sang. I gasped as I remembered the events of yesterday. I looked around the fairly well lit cave. I looked to the cave entrance. It must have been about six in the afternoon. My eyes darted to the sleeping body next to me, Kouga. He was bandaged rather clumsily, I could still see his multiple gashes on his legs and chest. He seemed to be healing which was good but his comrades healing technique left much to be desired. "Mom-ma, who is Souta?" Shippo asked as he pounced on to my lap. "Souta is my younger brother," I said while examining Kouga. "What does he look like?" Shippo asked. "Well," I started turning to Shippo. "He's about this tall," I put my hand above the ground showing how tall he is. "He has short black hair, and brown eyes. And he turned nine years old about a month ago." Shippo's eyes widened. "This tall," he followed my motion. "At nine years old?" "Yes, demons age differently from humans. How old are you Shippo?" I questioned. Shippo looked thoughtful. "About thirty." "Well, to me you look like your five years old. That's not an insult either. That just means almost in the middle of your childhood." Shippo's mouth formed an O, then turned and pointed at Kouga. "How old do you think he looks?" "Hmm, about nineteen." I said after a moment of thought. I heard a snort and a small laugh. I looked over at Ginta and Hakkaku, who apparently were listening to your conversation. "How old is he then?" I asked this question was directed to the to laughing wolfs in the corner. "I don't know, but he's been leading our pack for over a hundred years!" Ginta laughed. "How old do I look to you?" I asked. The laughing stopped when I said this. They both scooted closer. "Maybe, a hundred and fifty" Hakkaku estimated, I smiled softly. "Wanna know how old I am?" they both nodded. "I'm seventeen" They both gasped and I laughed. "Hey, how far from the village are we?" I asked changing the subject. "A few miles" "I was hoping to get some supplies to fix him up properly," I said nodding to Kouga. "I'll take you" Ginta offered and stood. I smiled and follow and suit. He picked me up and ran out of the cave. We arrived with in moments and he put me down. I gestured for him to come in and he did so.
##$$##$ In the Hut (no ones POV) $##$$##
They entered the he to a scream of 'Pervert!' and a large crash. Kagome ran in to see a Miroku size hole in the ground, with an angry Sango standing over it, boomerang in hand. Kagome let out a sigh, while Ginta looked at the seen in amusement. Kagome shook her head then retreated to her big yellow backpack. She gazed in and started pulling out things she would need, such as, ramen, cooking supplies, rope (never know when you'll need some rope!), a few blankets, and her first-aid-kit. She stuffed her needs in to a smaller backpack. I turned back to Sango who was still beating the poor monk senseless. "Sango, hate to rain on your pride but if you continue to strangle Miroku, he will die. I know how much you love him, but this is a little over the top." Kagome smirked, at the glare she was retrieving from the other girl. She reluctantly let him go, or threw him in to the wall. Either way he wasn't going to die today. "Good girl! Sango, I'm going to be stayin' with Kouga and his peeps for awhile, don't tell Inu-yasha. Kay?" She nodded. "And no killing Miroku while I'm gone." "Fine," Sango growled. "I can beat him if he touches me though, right?" "Oh yah, send the sucker to hell." Kagome said smiling evilly, Sango copied her evil smile. "Have fun!" Sango said sweetly. "You too" Kagome replied as she walked out the door followed by the sacred wolf demon. "Have fun?" Ginta asked. "Sure, I'm the only reason Miroku still exists. So me being gone gives Sango full and complete power over Miroku's fate. Ah, love such an odd thing" Kagome explained. "Are you sure she loves him?" "Oh yes, definitely! Unfortunately, Miroku doesn't know how to show his feelings. So he does what he thinks is right." Kagome said with a sigh. "And you can guess what he thinks is right, eh?" He nodded, wondering where Kagome was taking him to. They came to a river were Kagome grabbed her backpack off looking for a kettle she pulled it out, filled it with water then put it back. "Lets go" Kagome said picking herself up and looking at Ginta. "Right" he said scooping her up and dashing back to the cave.
##$$##$ Cave $##$$##
Shippo looked up as his mother came in to the cave. "Mom-ma" Shippo cried, when he jumped on to her shoulder. "What took you so long, did you bring food?" "It took me so long, because I brought food" Kagome sang. Shippo cheered and Kagome smiled. "Get off so I can make it" "Yes, mommy" Shippo said, jumping back off. Kagome pulled out her water boiler (work with me people -.-) and placed the kettle on top. She then went over to Kouga pulling out her first-aid-kit in the process. She worked quickly, unwrapping his wounds then cleaning them out. After she used all manner of herbs and medicines, she wrapped his legs and chest with a new cloth, then was done. "Done" She murmured. Then turned back to see Shippo trying to explain how the boiler worked to the too curious wolfs. Kagome laughed, walking back to her bag and got her instead ramen. "Mommy, the waters boiling"
"Thanks" Kagome said walking over next to Shippo taking the kettle and slowly poured the water into the five-ramen bowls. Then poof, all done. She handed one of them to Shippo, who dug right in. Then there was a moan from the other side of the cave where Kouga was sleeping. Everyone turned to see Kouga slowly waking. Kagome picked up two of the four remaining bowls and walk to his side. Everyone's eyes followed her movements.
"Feelin' better?" Kagome asked. Kouga opened his eyes and looked at her.
"Kagome?" He asked.
"The one and only" She replied smiling warmly. "Kouga, I want you to open your mouth" He looked at her as if she were crazy, but he propped him self up and slowly opened his mouth. Kagome took a pair of chopsticks and took some noodles then stuffed it in his mouth. "Eat" Kagome said, giving him his food. Kouga was caught of guard by what Kagome did and swallowed all the delicious food with out thinking about it. "Demons got to eat too you know" she said nodding to Ginta and Hakkaku. Who after seeing their leader being forced to eat made them feel the need to listen to Kagome. They started to eat slowly but once their taste buds kicked in they were all over it (or rather it was all over them). Kouga followed suit gobbling down the wonderful food. Kagome seemed to be the only one pacing herself, but finished with ever one else. As Kouga finished slurping down his soup he started to get tired and dizzy.
"Kagome, why am I so tired?" Kouga asked swaying slightly. Kagome put down her food and walked behind Kouga, catching him as he fell backwards.
"It's alright Kouga, It's just your body is trying to heal it's self." Kagome said letting Kouga lean against her.
"I've been hurt before and never fell asleep" He yawned.
"The herbs I used helped a bit," Kagome said smiling softly. Kouga nodded slowly as sleep took him and he fell in to dreamland.
O.k., how was that? I had a friend over yesterday who reads my story's. She said that if I ask one question for people to review on then I'll get over Five reviews! Crazy huh? I told her that's not how it works and you rarely get many review's for the second one. Well she likes my story so we made a bet. If I'm right then I get to call her and strut all day! But if I lose then I have to make another chapter ASAP. So here's the question!
Question: Guess how old I am based on my wrighting. Am I four years old because of my horrible spelling and punc? Or am I fourteen because of my wonderful ideas? Guess and I'll tell you if your right! No cheating and looking on my id because I lied, the number on there is not true!
Thank you again all my reviewer's
-Llamachick
Important A/N: at the end of the first chapy, I made a mistake that some one help me come to terms with. At the end Kagome said: 'You me, wolf boy'. Right? Well, what she was supposed to say was: 'You owe me, wolf boy'. O.k.? Well that's, that. Enjoy!
-Llamachick
##$$##$ Kagome's POV $##$$##
I woke to someone calling out 'Mom', I didn't want to wake up just yet so I moaned and turned over. The cries became louder, it sounded early (Is that right? my spelling checker sucks) like Souta. "Souta go talk to mom not me" I mumbled. Then I slowly opened my eyes to see two blurry green eyes. I blinked a few times, as my eyes readjusted. "Shippo?" I asked. "Mommy's awake!" Shippo called to someone somewhere. "Where are we?" I yawned. Feeling the furs I was laying on. Shippo smiled. "In some cave near Kaede-baba's village" Shippo sang. I gasped as I remembered the events of yesterday. I looked around the fairly well lit cave. I looked to the cave entrance. It must have been about six in the afternoon. My eyes darted to the sleeping body next to me, Kouga. He was bandaged rather clumsily, I could still see his multiple gashes on his legs and chest. He seemed to be healing which was good but his comrades healing technique left much to be desired. "Mom-ma, who is Souta?" Shippo asked as he pounced on to my lap. "Souta is my younger brother," I said while examining Kouga. "What does he look like?" Shippo asked. "Well," I started turning to Shippo. "He's about this tall," I put my hand above the ground showing how tall he is. "He has short black hair, and brown eyes. And he turned nine years old about a month ago." Shippo's eyes widened. "This tall," he followed my motion. "At nine years old?" "Yes, demons age differently from humans. How old are you Shippo?" I questioned. Shippo looked thoughtful. "About thirty." "Well, to me you look like your five years old. That's not an insult either. That just means almost in the middle of your childhood." Shippo's mouth formed an O, then turned and pointed at Kouga. "How old do you think he looks?" "Hmm, about nineteen." I said after a moment of thought. I heard a snort and a small laugh. I looked over at Ginta and Hakkaku, who apparently were listening to your conversation. "How old is he then?" I asked this question was directed to the to laughing wolfs in the corner. "I don't know, but he's been leading our pack for over a hundred years!" Ginta laughed. "How old do I look to you?" I asked. The laughing stopped when I said this. They both scooted closer. "Maybe, a hundred and fifty" Hakkaku estimated, I smiled softly. "Wanna know how old I am?" they both nodded. "I'm seventeen" They both gasped and I laughed. "Hey, how far from the village are we?" I asked changing the subject. "A few miles" "I was hoping to get some supplies to fix him up properly," I said nodding to Kouga. "I'll take you" Ginta offered and stood. I smiled and follow and suit. He picked me up and ran out of the cave. We arrived with in moments and he put me down. I gestured for him to come in and he did so.
##$$##$ In the Hut (no ones POV) $##$$##
They entered the he to a scream of 'Pervert!' and a large crash. Kagome ran in to see a Miroku size hole in the ground, with an angry Sango standing over it, boomerang in hand. Kagome let out a sigh, while Ginta looked at the seen in amusement. Kagome shook her head then retreated to her big yellow backpack. She gazed in and started pulling out things she would need, such as, ramen, cooking supplies, rope (never know when you'll need some rope!), a few blankets, and her first-aid-kit. She stuffed her needs in to a smaller backpack. I turned back to Sango who was still beating the poor monk senseless. "Sango, hate to rain on your pride but if you continue to strangle Miroku, he will die. I know how much you love him, but this is a little over the top." Kagome smirked, at the glare she was retrieving from the other girl. She reluctantly let him go, or threw him in to the wall. Either way he wasn't going to die today. "Good girl! Sango, I'm going to be stayin' with Kouga and his peeps for awhile, don't tell Inu-yasha. Kay?" She nodded. "And no killing Miroku while I'm gone." "Fine," Sango growled. "I can beat him if he touches me though, right?" "Oh yah, send the sucker to hell." Kagome said smiling evilly, Sango copied her evil smile. "Have fun!" Sango said sweetly. "You too" Kagome replied as she walked out the door followed by the sacred wolf demon. "Have fun?" Ginta asked. "Sure, I'm the only reason Miroku still exists. So me being gone gives Sango full and complete power over Miroku's fate. Ah, love such an odd thing" Kagome explained. "Are you sure she loves him?" "Oh yes, definitely! Unfortunately, Miroku doesn't know how to show his feelings. So he does what he thinks is right." Kagome said with a sigh. "And you can guess what he thinks is right, eh?" He nodded, wondering where Kagome was taking him to. They came to a river were Kagome grabbed her backpack off looking for a kettle she pulled it out, filled it with water then put it back. "Lets go" Kagome said picking herself up and looking at Ginta. "Right" he said scooping her up and dashing back to the cave.
##$$##$ Cave $##$$##
Shippo looked up as his mother came in to the cave. "Mom-ma" Shippo cried, when he jumped on to her shoulder. "What took you so long, did you bring food?" "It took me so long, because I brought food" Kagome sang. Shippo cheered and Kagome smiled. "Get off so I can make it" "Yes, mommy" Shippo said, jumping back off. Kagome pulled out her water boiler (work with me people -.-) and placed the kettle on top. She then went over to Kouga pulling out her first-aid-kit in the process. She worked quickly, unwrapping his wounds then cleaning them out. After she used all manner of herbs and medicines, she wrapped his legs and chest with a new cloth, then was done. "Done" She murmured. Then turned back to see Shippo trying to explain how the boiler worked to the too curious wolfs. Kagome laughed, walking back to her bag and got her instead ramen. "Mommy, the waters boiling"
"Thanks" Kagome said walking over next to Shippo taking the kettle and slowly poured the water into the five-ramen bowls. Then poof, all done. She handed one of them to Shippo, who dug right in. Then there was a moan from the other side of the cave where Kouga was sleeping. Everyone turned to see Kouga slowly waking. Kagome picked up two of the four remaining bowls and walk to his side. Everyone's eyes followed her movements.
"Feelin' better?" Kagome asked. Kouga opened his eyes and looked at her.
"Kagome?" He asked.
"The one and only" She replied smiling warmly. "Kouga, I want you to open your mouth" He looked at her as if she were crazy, but he propped him self up and slowly opened his mouth. Kagome took a pair of chopsticks and took some noodles then stuffed it in his mouth. "Eat" Kagome said, giving him his food. Kouga was caught of guard by what Kagome did and swallowed all the delicious food with out thinking about it. "Demons got to eat too you know" she said nodding to Ginta and Hakkaku. Who after seeing their leader being forced to eat made them feel the need to listen to Kagome. They started to eat slowly but once their taste buds kicked in they were all over it (or rather it was all over them). Kouga followed suit gobbling down the wonderful food. Kagome seemed to be the only one pacing herself, but finished with ever one else. As Kouga finished slurping down his soup he started to get tired and dizzy.
"Kagome, why am I so tired?" Kouga asked swaying slightly. Kagome put down her food and walked behind Kouga, catching him as he fell backwards.
"It's alright Kouga, It's just your body is trying to heal it's self." Kagome said letting Kouga lean against her.
"I've been hurt before and never fell asleep" He yawned.
"The herbs I used helped a bit," Kagome said smiling softly. Kouga nodded slowly as sleep took him and he fell in to dreamland.
O.k., how was that? I had a friend over yesterday who reads my story's. She said that if I ask one question for people to review on then I'll get over Five reviews! Crazy huh? I told her that's not how it works and you rarely get many review's for the second one. Well she likes my story so we made a bet. If I'm right then I get to call her and strut all day! But if I lose then I have to make another chapter ASAP. So here's the question!
Question: Guess how old I am based on my wrighting. Am I four years old because of my horrible spelling and punc? Or am I fourteen because of my wonderful ideas? Guess and I'll tell you if your right! No cheating and looking on my id because I lied, the number on there is not true!
Thank you again all my reviewer's
-Llamachick