AN: Heh while I was writing my story this poem slowly started forming and it's the one poem that I'm truly proud of…but sadly I don't like the beginning that much. If anyone could make a lovely suggestion on what I should fix I would truly appreciate it. But I want some positive input to or…no more poems from me! :D Please read my story if you get the chance!
Just Cry
There are many reasons to cry,
but you shouldn't waist a tear on something
pointless…
Don't cry when you lose sight of your family,
cry when you know they're gone…
Don't cry when your best friend betrays you,
cry when you know she doesn't care…
Don't cry when she leaves you with heartache,
cry when you know her heart is taken…
Don't cry when you lose everything,
cry when you know you've lost everything that's important…
Don't cry when the world changes around you,
cry when you can't tell who you are…
Don't cry when the most important person in your life is gone,
cry when you can't seem to find her…
Don't hold back the tears when you want to be strong,
simply show that your human and not some
killing machine…
Sometimes even the strongest fighters
who bring fear to all…
Need to Just Cry
Ending notes: This was my first poem about Kenshin and Tomoe…and I really never thought I'd ever end up writing anything about them. But please no flames because I tried really hard on this.
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