THIS IS AN A/N PEOPLE
There are some things I would like to discuss.
First of all: my character is NOT a Mary-Sue as people seem to want to believe. I try extremely hard to keep my character from being a Mary-Sue because I DESPISE Mary-Sues. They can go to hell.
If you think my character IS a Mary-Sue, then please, by all means, ENLIGHTEN me as to how I can shape up my character and I promise I will.
Second of all: THERE ARE 12 CHAPTERS IN 'CHAPTER' 1!! I'm assuming that you already know that because you wouldn't have skipped 2 chapters to get to chapter 3…if you did…well then get some help. But that's your choice to skip, not mine.
Third: I need some input… for chapter 15 I was thinking of doing it in Arty's PoV… tell me, dear reviewers, if that would please you.
FOURTH AT PROBABLY THE MOST IMPORTANT FIC-WISE: That night when Artemis and Amalia kissed and said 'I Love You', I admit that was so damn lame it's unbelievable, but pay no attention to that line. It was merely a ploy in the story to get it spinning. Amalia now hates him. She basically discovers that she was just caught up in the moment. You'll find out about Artemis if I do the Fowl PoV.
Fifth: One reviewer said that fencing was a sport not a match to the death. Good point. I know nowadays you kill people with guns and all the works, not swords, but this is a fanFICTION. Besides, Amalia is an assassin who's in it basically for the good pay because there's no one else to support her. She's gonna kill Artemis in any way possible; she doesn't care how, as long as she gets paid and Miss Magnoliana stops bugging her. She basically wants the pay so she can 'retire' I guess, and stop working at the agency.
And apologies to all: I am terribly sorry that I didn't update sooner.