Wow? Okay...that was kinda cool...Actually that was WAY cool. 15 reviews in one or two days last i checked? what in the?
Three days ago, i was running with the usual crowd of reviewers, and now this? Way cool.
Okay, you guys have probably read my profile by now, right? well, today i'm going to demonstrate one of those qualities...
Inu plushies to everyone who reviewed!
And Kagome and Inu Kitty kissing plushies to anyone who reviews to this one with something helpful or encouraging, or downright Flaming. Flaming is good. Just make sense about it.
I'm sure you are sick of my psyco babble and want to get to the story so i guess..
i'll
let
you
get
to
the
story.
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Kagome watched as a flock of birds flew into the air in the forrest below them, and the trees began to shake.
She sensed a powerful demon growing closer.
And she knew it had to be Sesshomaru. Inuyasha's older Half-brother.
Suddenly there was white blocking her view of the valley below and her eyes narrowed in annoyance.
"Would you move, i am trying to watch the sunrise here." she said without looking up.
"I heard that a powerful deamon was in this land, but i never thought it would be you, Higurashi." he said
She looked up and found that it wasn't Sesshie at all, but Naraku who stood in front of her, his stupid Baboon pelt concealing his normal form.
"Naraku, two words, Fuck. Off." She stated, gathering a small amount of energy in the hand in her hair, and conjured up a black rose.
"I don't belive i will." he said reaching for her.
A feral growl stopped him and her at the same time.
Inuyasha's eyes were bleading red and a gutteral growl was erupting from his chest as he bared his teeth.
"Get away from her you freak!" Inuyasha ground out between clenched teeth.
Naraku laughed and reached for kagome again.
"I belive my brother said to get away from her." came an icy voice from behind him, and Kagome saw Sesshomaru.
Naraku visibly shrunk, and slunk away.
"Thanks, I'm Kagome." Kagome held out her hand, not daring to rise for her energies had been forced to strain themselves.
"Lord Sesshomaru of the western lands." He said, kissing her hand.
Kagome looked at Inuyasha and found that his eyes were still red-ish and she put a hand on his shoulder, making his eyes go back to gold.
"So, it is true." Sesshomaru said. "I heard that a woman had found the powers to control my half brother's demon side, and now i see that it is true."
He turned and began walking back toward the forrest.
"Sesshomaru?"
"Hm?" he turned slightly.
"Thanks."
"dont thank me yet." he said with a slight grin and walked into the forrest to dissappear again.
After awhile, Inuyasha was curious.
"Kagome?"
"Hmm?" she asked, watching a butterfly fluttering lazily from flower to flower.
"Why don't you want to live?"
She looked at him in surprise, then she guarded her eyes, and told him an answer that was only part of the problem.
"I have noone left. Noone in my family to love, noone in my life to talk to. I am alone." she said, forcing back ters that threatened to overcome her at any moment.
"You can talk to me. i am alone here as well." He said, laying his head on her knee.
Suddenly an ideal struck him and he hopped up.
"Stay right there! I have something that i want to show you, but i have to get it, okay!" he said excitedly, then dissappeared in a burst of wind.
"Well, it's not like I can go anywhere anyways." she said glumly
She was mad at herself for her own weakness.
Suddenly he was back and handing something out to her.
It was a string of prayer beads.
"This was my mother's and i want you to have it, if you will stay..." he let his words trail off.
"I have nowhere else to go." she said, taking the beads in her hand.
"Thanks." she said slipping the beads over her head.
Inuyasha was happy. He felt like a pup again, but this time it was better, he had someone to talk to.
"Are you hungry?" he asked, hearing her stomach growl.
At her laugh, he picked her up and jumped high into the air, to land on kaede's rooftop a little ways away.
Kagome saw the woman from her stories, the one that was so kind to inuyasha. She was suddenly grateful.
"Lady Kaede?" she asked.
"Aye Child?" Kaede arched a brow.
"Thank you."
"What for, child?" she asked, genuine confusion on her face.
""For taking care of Inuyasha." Kagome said, then turned toward the open doorway to find Inuyasha coming back in with something on his shoulder.
Suddenly it jumped and landed right on kagome's lap.
When she saw what it was, she squealed in delight.
In her lap was the little fox demon from her stories.
"HI!" he all but chirped.
"Hi. My name is Kagome, What's your's?"
"I'm shippou." he said, looking up at her with his large brown eyes.
Suddenly he reached toward her face and she had to repress a desire to recoil.
Shippou looked at the tall, black haired Miko. She had ears like Inuyasha, but she was prettier. Her ears twitched, and he couldn't help but to reach out and touch one.
He scratched it, then tugged at it, then blew at it and watched as it twitched.
Kagome laughed as Shippou played with her ear, then when he finally finished, she used one clawed finger to scratch underneath the young Youkai's chin.
He purred.
"Are you done clowning around yet?" a female voice asked from the doorway.
Kagome looked up, Instantly on guard.
Inuyasha's had was suddenly on her shoulder, holding her in place, not that she could have gone anywhere anyways.
"This is Sango." He said, nodding toward the young demon slayer.
"She don't look like much." came another voice, one that she hadn't expected.
It was a man with long, curly black hair. He stood almost taller than Inuyasha.
"And that's Onigumo." Inuyasha said.
(Should i leave it off here?, Nah..)
Kagome narrowed her eyes at the young man. She sensed an evil about this Onigumo.
"When did he become part of the group?" she asked.
"Just before I met you." Inuyasha said.
"We saved him from a centipede demon." Shippou added, helpfully.
Kagome suddenly felt that her energy was being tapped and drained, and her blood sugar level was too low for her to have any reserves.
She closed her eyes in an attempt to stop the world from spinning, and it only made it worse. And suddenly there was only blackness as she was swallowed up by Unconsiousness.
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Okay, yall that's it for this chappie.
Oh, and btw, anybody complaining about spelling and grammar on reviews, although i live for your flames, will not be taken verry seriously. And, thank you for the suggestion on the free internet spellcheck download, that would be verry cool...
EXCEPT THAT I DON'T HAVE A C DRIVE, MUCH LESS INTERNET! I ONCE AGAIN REPEAT: I HAVE A DOL COMPUTER!
THAT MEANS NO TOWER, NO SOUND, NO HOPES OF UPDATING.
Whew, that was relaxing to let off steam like that.
Sorry for anyone who was offended, and i truly appretiate the support, I do, i just get verry annoyed at having to repeat myself on various stories a million times about the spellcheck thing.
If you have any VIABLE arguments, OPINIONS or POINTERS or SUGGESTIONS even, then e-mail them to me at or just click the review button, i do accept annonamous reviews...
Plus, i used purple for her backpack because mine's purple and huge, and i thought it would be a funny contrast between kick ass kagome and her giant purple backpack. See?
Your psyco with a cause..
Night.
Ps: You all just had to love the one i had writer's block with didn't ya... Plot ideals would be helpful if you dont want the story discontinued until a later time...
Three days ago, i was running with the usual crowd of reviewers, and now this? Way cool.
Okay, you guys have probably read my profile by now, right? well, today i'm going to demonstrate one of those qualities...
Inu plushies to everyone who reviewed!
And Kagome and Inu Kitty kissing plushies to anyone who reviews to this one with something helpful or encouraging, or downright Flaming. Flaming is good. Just make sense about it.
I'm sure you are sick of my psyco babble and want to get to the story so i guess..
i'll
let
you
get
to
the
story.
---------------------
Kagome watched as a flock of birds flew into the air in the forrest below them, and the trees began to shake.
She sensed a powerful demon growing closer.
And she knew it had to be Sesshomaru. Inuyasha's older Half-brother.
Suddenly there was white blocking her view of the valley below and her eyes narrowed in annoyance.
"Would you move, i am trying to watch the sunrise here." she said without looking up.
"I heard that a powerful deamon was in this land, but i never thought it would be you, Higurashi." he said
She looked up and found that it wasn't Sesshie at all, but Naraku who stood in front of her, his stupid Baboon pelt concealing his normal form.
"Naraku, two words, Fuck. Off." She stated, gathering a small amount of energy in the hand in her hair, and conjured up a black rose.
"I don't belive i will." he said reaching for her.
A feral growl stopped him and her at the same time.
Inuyasha's eyes were bleading red and a gutteral growl was erupting from his chest as he bared his teeth.
"Get away from her you freak!" Inuyasha ground out between clenched teeth.
Naraku laughed and reached for kagome again.
"I belive my brother said to get away from her." came an icy voice from behind him, and Kagome saw Sesshomaru.
Naraku visibly shrunk, and slunk away.
"Thanks, I'm Kagome." Kagome held out her hand, not daring to rise for her energies had been forced to strain themselves.
"Lord Sesshomaru of the western lands." He said, kissing her hand.
Kagome looked at Inuyasha and found that his eyes were still red-ish and she put a hand on his shoulder, making his eyes go back to gold.
"So, it is true." Sesshomaru said. "I heard that a woman had found the powers to control my half brother's demon side, and now i see that it is true."
He turned and began walking back toward the forrest.
"Sesshomaru?"
"Hm?" he turned slightly.
"Thanks."
"dont thank me yet." he said with a slight grin and walked into the forrest to dissappear again.
After awhile, Inuyasha was curious.
"Kagome?"
"Hmm?" she asked, watching a butterfly fluttering lazily from flower to flower.
"Why don't you want to live?"
She looked at him in surprise, then she guarded her eyes, and told him an answer that was only part of the problem.
"I have noone left. Noone in my family to love, noone in my life to talk to. I am alone." she said, forcing back ters that threatened to overcome her at any moment.
"You can talk to me. i am alone here as well." He said, laying his head on her knee.
Suddenly an ideal struck him and he hopped up.
"Stay right there! I have something that i want to show you, but i have to get it, okay!" he said excitedly, then dissappeared in a burst of wind.
"Well, it's not like I can go anywhere anyways." she said glumly
She was mad at herself for her own weakness.
Suddenly he was back and handing something out to her.
It was a string of prayer beads.
"This was my mother's and i want you to have it, if you will stay..." he let his words trail off.
"I have nowhere else to go." she said, taking the beads in her hand.
"Thanks." she said slipping the beads over her head.
Inuyasha was happy. He felt like a pup again, but this time it was better, he had someone to talk to.
"Are you hungry?" he asked, hearing her stomach growl.
At her laugh, he picked her up and jumped high into the air, to land on kaede's rooftop a little ways away.
Kagome saw the woman from her stories, the one that was so kind to inuyasha. She was suddenly grateful.
"Lady Kaede?" she asked.
"Aye Child?" Kaede arched a brow.
"Thank you."
"What for, child?" she asked, genuine confusion on her face.
""For taking care of Inuyasha." Kagome said, then turned toward the open doorway to find Inuyasha coming back in with something on his shoulder.
Suddenly it jumped and landed right on kagome's lap.
When she saw what it was, she squealed in delight.
In her lap was the little fox demon from her stories.
"HI!" he all but chirped.
"Hi. My name is Kagome, What's your's?"
"I'm shippou." he said, looking up at her with his large brown eyes.
Suddenly he reached toward her face and she had to repress a desire to recoil.
Shippou looked at the tall, black haired Miko. She had ears like Inuyasha, but she was prettier. Her ears twitched, and he couldn't help but to reach out and touch one.
He scratched it, then tugged at it, then blew at it and watched as it twitched.
Kagome laughed as Shippou played with her ear, then when he finally finished, she used one clawed finger to scratch underneath the young Youkai's chin.
He purred.
"Are you done clowning around yet?" a female voice asked from the doorway.
Kagome looked up, Instantly on guard.
Inuyasha's had was suddenly on her shoulder, holding her in place, not that she could have gone anywhere anyways.
"This is Sango." He said, nodding toward the young demon slayer.
"She don't look like much." came another voice, one that she hadn't expected.
It was a man with long, curly black hair. He stood almost taller than Inuyasha.
"And that's Onigumo." Inuyasha said.
(Should i leave it off here?, Nah..)
Kagome narrowed her eyes at the young man. She sensed an evil about this Onigumo.
"When did he become part of the group?" she asked.
"Just before I met you." Inuyasha said.
"We saved him from a centipede demon." Shippou added, helpfully.
Kagome suddenly felt that her energy was being tapped and drained, and her blood sugar level was too low for her to have any reserves.
She closed her eyes in an attempt to stop the world from spinning, and it only made it worse. And suddenly there was only blackness as she was swallowed up by Unconsiousness.
--------------------------------------
Okay, yall that's it for this chappie.
Oh, and btw, anybody complaining about spelling and grammar on reviews, although i live for your flames, will not be taken verry seriously. And, thank you for the suggestion on the free internet spellcheck download, that would be verry cool...
EXCEPT THAT I DON'T HAVE A C DRIVE, MUCH LESS INTERNET! I ONCE AGAIN REPEAT: I HAVE A DOL COMPUTER!
THAT MEANS NO TOWER, NO SOUND, NO HOPES OF UPDATING.
Whew, that was relaxing to let off steam like that.
Sorry for anyone who was offended, and i truly appretiate the support, I do, i just get verry annoyed at having to repeat myself on various stories a million times about the spellcheck thing.
If you have any VIABLE arguments, OPINIONS or POINTERS or SUGGESTIONS even, then e-mail them to me at or just click the review button, i do accept annonamous reviews...
Plus, i used purple for her backpack because mine's purple and huge, and i thought it would be a funny contrast between kick ass kagome and her giant purple backpack. See?
Your psyco with a cause..
Night.
Ps: You all just had to love the one i had writer's block with didn't ya... Plot ideals would be helpful if you dont want the story discontinued until a later time...