Red Rose here, back for chappie three, and seriously, just 2 reviews.... I know it might not be that exciting in the beginning, but I have many great ideas ...Oh great now I probably sound like a bitch (huddles in a corner and repeats inaudible words)

Shaedowe- Thank you sooo much for the review! I am so happy you like my writing, here's your update!

Black Rose- wow! I'm back, I thought I was gone forever! Oh, lil' miss mountain dew is upset? Figures! Well now I am in control. And I will be the one writing this fic. This is gonna be they way I want it. And violence is going to be a key factor. If you are not acquainted with me, I am Red Rose's evil half, in a separate body...that's all you need to know. I guess I'll be doing the disclaimer then

Disclaimer- We do not own beyblade or any of the characters or jello but we do own the cruise ship, I forgot its name, and Jack Wiley, I don't even know if he'll be in this chapter yet, got that?

Lets go

Now I'm gonna say a little something to start the fic, I used to say "On With The Ficc-y" with Red Rose, but I want my own one now, got that?

SHUT UP AND PREPARE FOR THE RIDE!

That's good


Kai was already at the pool and was setting down the stuff he brought on a table. The sun was high and there were no clouds for miles, the sky was a bright, light blue and the ocean was a beautiful dark blue. The Arienne Sia was the only thing on those waters for miles. He was about to put on his sunglasses when something hit him really hard in the back and caused him to fall into the pool with something heavy holding him down.

The weight got off him and he swam to the surface to find Max embarrassedly smiling at him. Kai spat out some water and glared at Max, who let out a little laugh.

"What the hell was that for?" Kai commanded.

"Well I was running after you, but then I waited for Tyson to get up and then I ran and I came up here and I slipped and I'm sorry and..." Max realized his name had been called from somewhere and he turned around to wave at them. He saw a little girl surrounded by black and Max couldn't take his eyes off her.

Kai looked over to see what Max was staring at and saw another child, a boy. He could make anything out except that the kid was a boy and dressed in all black, surrounded by black. The boy quickly disappeared in a second's time and the girl disappeared to Max the same.

The rest of the group came to find Max and Kai both in the pool, staring away from them. They watched as Kai slowly broke out of his trance, then Max.

"Ummm Kai? Did you just see that" Max asked, still looking at the spot where the girl he saw disappeared.

"I don't know, probably the heat." Kai turned away.

"It's not that hot...and that girl...she just disappeared...poof..."

"Girl? I saw a boy" he looked back at max

"What are you two talking about? You see something out there?" Hillary said from the side of the pool.

"Yeah! It was weird, I saw a girl...she was in the dark...or something like that...and she just disappeared!" Max turned around and told her.

"I saw the same thing, I think, but I saw a boy." Kai swam over to the steps and got out of the pool. He grabbed a white towel and started to dry his hair off with it.

"Meh. You two were just hallucinating...OWWW what d'ya do that for???" Tyson rubbed his rear end in pain from Kai whipping him with the towel.

"Why the hell would I be hallucinating?" Kai glared at Tyson.

"I don't know, it is a little hot..."

"Why don't we just forget this and go swim..." Ray said, heading for the steps in the pool.

"Right." Hillary walked over to an empty lounge chair, put her towel over it and laid down.

Tyson cannonballed into the pool and started playing shark with Max, who was the fish trying not to get tagged by Tyson. Ray was swiftly swimming back and fourth, occasionally dunking Max and Tyson's heads underwater for fun, and dear Kai was just sitting at an underwater seat in the deep end of the pool with his sunglasses on, innocently reading a book until...

"Ummm excuse me, but you were talking about some weird sightings earlier, right?" A girl in a dark green and black camouflage bikini and board shorts asked Kai. She had bright red hair and blue eyes, with a silver lip piercing and a tattoo of a dragon surrounded by fire on the right side of her hip.

"Yeah, so?" Kai didn't look up from his book.

"Well I want to know what happened because I know this ship is dark and my friend over here wont believe me..." she pointed to another girl behind her who had a black one piece on with a white towel around her waist.

"Well of course I don't believe you, you're insane, now don't bother the guy, Mars, you'll only scare him...I'm sorry, for my friend here, she was dropped repetitively on her head as a baby...and toddler...throughout her whole life..." the girl behind Mars said.

"Funny I don't remember that...Hey! Well you suck, Tessa!" Mars turned around and stuck her tongue out.

"No, I doubt she can scare me, now, tell me, what do you mean this ship is dark?" Kai turned around and crossed his arms on the side of the pool.

"Well," Mars sat down on the pavement right in front of Kai "this ship was christened on the very day, very hour that the battleship Bluten Sia went down, taking the whole crew down with her...do you think it's just a coincidence that there is a picture of the Bluten in every room? I think that the crew, and maybe even the Bluten herself don't like this ship much."

"And of course that's from the person who thinks that the people who make the T.V. guide are part of some huge conspiracy!" Tessa said

"Well they are!" Mars shot back.

"That's and interesting story, really, I'll have to keep that in mind." Kai said sarcastically.

"Why doesn't anyone believe me???" Mars whined.

"Because you're insane!" Tessa said in the same tone of voice

"Not entirely!...no...dammit I need some mountain dew!" Mars stormed off.

"Don't believe anything she says, she doesn't know what she's talking about half the time...don't drink too much! Remember, no one's gonna help you if the jello bowl attacks you again!" Tessa finished yelling at Mars and walked away.

"Weird" Kai said as he settled back down with his book.

"Kai! So you've got some girlfriends?" Tyson flashed a toothy smiled before Kai, who was still occupied by his book, shoved his head under water.

Tyson managed to squirm away and pop back up "Jeez you could look when you try to kill me" he dived back under to escape another one of Kai's attacks.

"So what was that about Kai?" Ray asked, swimming up to sit next to him.

"Some crazy chick thinks this ship is haunted...something like that." Kai answered.

Max was looked over to where Kai, Ray and Tyson were "I wonder what they're talking about...guess I'm gonna haf'ta go find out!" he thought and dove underwater. He was just about in front of them and he started talking "Hey guys what are you talking abou-." Max's eyes suddenly went blank and he stopped moving, he looked like his soul had just disappeared.

"Maxie? Max are you OK? Max???" Tyson looked straight into Max's lifeless eyes "Dudes, something's wrong with- MAX!" Max suddenly started sinking and his whole head was underwater while Tyson screamed his name. Tyson immediately dove under and grabbed onto Max's hands and tried to pull him up, but to no avail. Max just kept on sinking, like something was pulling him down, something wanted him.

Tyson popped up for air and Ray and Kai both jumped in with Tyson and swam towards Max while Hillary called for help from the side of the pool, looking worriedly down. Tyson and Ray both grabbed a hold of Max's hands and Kai swam around and wrapped his arms around his waist. The three swam with all their might to the surface, putting in every ounce of their energy to save their friend.

"What the hell is going on here? Dammit!" Kai thought as he kicked his legs, ignoring how much his lungs screamed at him for air. "Not right, not right, not right!" Ray thought as he kicked and waved his arms, desperately trying to bring his friend to the surface. "Come on Max! Don't go one me now! You can make it!" Tyson wasn't aware of anything, all he knew was that he had to save Max and his body instinctively answered.

Suddenly Tyson and Ray realized someone had grabbed their hands and they were being pulled out of the water and soon enough, they were all breathing in the precious air as Max was suddenly snatched away from them all and they were helped onto the cement.

A crowd was forming in a circle around Max and a lifeguard that quickly started pressing on Max's chest and breathing the desperately needed air into the dying boy. There was ghastly silence in the air, half expecting his soul to be lost right then. Kai stared and held his breath, his teeth clenched tightly, trying to keep the tears in his eyes from spilling out. Ray watched in horror biting his fist and silently repeating Max's name to himself, wondering how a vacation could go so bad. Hillary grabbed on to Kenny, who had just returned from the bathroom, and she was looking away with her eyes tightly shut, shaking in her worry for Max. Kenny tightly shut his eyes wondering about what went wrong what could make Max just drown out of no where.

But Tyson was affected most of all, he was on his knees next to Max letting his tears flow down his face, and broke the silence by telling Max to hang on and that he could make it through this. He immediately shut up when Max started violently coughing and the crowd let out a sigh of relief that the blond had pulled through.

Tyson grabbed the nearest thing to him, which was Ray, and started crying his heard out as Ray hugged him, smiling wide with teary eyes. Kai brushed away a tear with his finger and smiled too. Hillary jumping up and down, hugging Kenny the whole way while Kenny was smiling and laughing with her.

Max, still unconscious was put onto a stretcher to be examined by the ship's doctor while the group of five teens promptly followed.


Blackrose- I was gonna stop while they were all still drowning in the water, but red rose forced me to go on...anyhoo if anyone wants this fic to go on, I demand a total of 10 reviews, only 8 more to go people

Red rose- don't be so mean about it...

Black rose- Shut up you!

Red rose- well pleeaaasseeeee review and I promise it will get much, much better!

Black rose- you heard the lady, and flames are accepted, then used to burn down our neighbor's house

Red rose- but she's oolllddd you can't burn down an old lady's house

Black rose- just watch me! See Ya, Suckers!

Red rose- BYE-S ALL!!!