Reviews-
Thanks to everyone who reviewed, I really appreciated it! I got some that were a little rude but that was to be expected. Along with the rude ones I got several good ones urging me to continue, I've tried but I'm just not getting anything I truly like out of it! I know it's really, really short but hey at least you didn't need an hour to read it, and I like where it ends, there's a lot of mystery there!
THANKS,
inupotter