Okay. Sorry for the long updates but I have an announcement. I've decided to take a break on this story for awhile; in fact I'm going to stop writing it for now. I'll come back and possibly revise it. But for now, I'm working on other things. I appreciate the reviews. In the future look for a new story, starring the same characters, but a lot better and closer to the world of Final Fantasy VIII, "The Forgotten Son". Sorry for the inconvenience.