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Away". These Items are the belongings of Hayoa Miyazaki and is produced by
Gibli Films. The only thing I do and ever will relatively own of this is a
story line I make, using the characters and settings, and/or adding a new
character to my story line that I am using.
Authors Beginning Note: Okay, now the last we left off Rin and Chihiro were beginning to make their way to Zeniiba's in like, waist high water (of course that was just Rin's guess) and in a huge storm without any train tickets. Their solution.paddle an old boat in a huge storm, with what's bound to be huge waves, hard wind, and difficult steering in a seemingly suicidal attempt of getting to Zeniiba's house. WOW! Now there is a chapter worth reading, maybe you should go back and read it.or stick with this chapter and find out what the heck happens. Your choice either way.I hope you enjoy!
Chapter 11
Hopeless Attempt
"No, no, no!" yelled Rin loudly over the wind. Her voice reached my ears as barely a whisper. "Jin, if you don't keep this boat balanced, we'll go over board!" Rin was doing all of the hard work. She was rowing the same boat she had carried me in to the train station six years ago. It was old.and rickety. It squeaked and groaned. I was afraid that it would fall apart. While Rin steered and paddled, I was to sit and make sure the boat was balanced, like the middle person in a canoe. I looked at Rin. She was tired and wet, and if anything like me, she was worried and cold too. Right now she seems to have her complete concentration on making sure the boat doesn't go completely out of control, which is very difficult in this kind of boat. A huge wave was coming. Before we had started Rin told me to lean into the waves to a certain degree so as to keep the boat form tipping. If you ask me, it's a lot like surfing in a way, or at least what I had seen on T.V. I did as she had said. I looked ahead only to have a wave of cold- water splash into my face. I shook my head and looked again. A shard of lightning pierced the sky lighting up a post of sorts and a platform.
"Rin! The second stop is coming up! It's not too far ahead." I yelled excitedly. Rin looked up and nodded. Her hair had come undone and was being blown in the wind.
"Jin, .back." Yelled Rin. I looked at her.
"What!" I yelled. I had only heard part of what she had said.
"We.should..turn.back!" Rin yelled like she was talking to a deaf person.
"But we came this far!"
"It won't work! I'm tired, my hands are sore, we won't make it! We should turn back now, while we can!" she yelled above the wind. I could barely make out some of her words but I got the idea.
"We can't give up now! We have to! It's my only hope!" I yelled. My hand had been throbbing the whole time. Rin looked at me and then ahead of us. Her face unreadable. I could tell she was exhausted and had already gone past her limitations. If she kept it up.she would die herself.
"Rin, Let me steer. I'm not as tired as you are. I'm strong. You can take over when I get tired." I yelled. Rin stared at me for a moment and looked at my hand. Then looked up at me. If she was crying, I couldn't tell because of all of the water everywhere, but she looked like she was about to at least.
"When we get to the second stop." She yelled and kept paddling. I watched the waves; trying to figure out how much weight I'd need to lean to one side depending on the size of the wave. My voice is sore and feels like it has been ripped to shreds, form all of the yelling above the wind. My ears are ringing from all of the loud thunder which feels like a gong is being banged right next to my ear; the lightning always following the thunder, streaking through the sky with it's rapid wrath. I looked out into the distanced.
"What the." I said, my words being swept away from the wind, not ever even reaching my ears.
"Rin! Look at that! What can we do?!" I yelled. Her head snapped up looking into the direction I was pointing at. It looked like a giant ball coming towards us. It wasn't any ball though.this was a wave. Not a wave, a Tsunami. I stared at in fear. Rin stared at it too, fear in her eyes, but her face expressionless as she kept rowing.
"Better hold on Chihiro! I don't think we can make it!" She yelled. I leaned in as the wave struck. AIR! I thought over and over.
Haku.I keep remembering something that I think might help you. I remember... It was your little pink shoe that fell into my river.I think you're the Kohaku River. Your name is the Kohaku River. I remember Chihiro.
"Haku!" I screamed using the last bit of my air. I swam towards the surface.or at least I think it's the surface.or am I swimming deeper. I could feel my lungs ripping apart.screaming for air!
"Air!" I yelled as I surfaced and I breathed in. Just then another wave came at me from behind and I went under again, only to come back up.
"RIN! RIN! Rin, Where are you!" yelling frantically I looked around my but couldn't see Rin. Oh, no, please don't be dead. Taking a deep breath I went under and looked for Rin. Where is Rin! I went back up to the surface, my chest begging for air. I repeated this until I got dizzy. I went under one last time. Wait.what is that.could that be. I swam towards a dark figure in the water ignoring the need for air. Grabbing Rin around the waist, I pulled her above water. I looked around me, trying to keep both Rin and I above water. Where is the station? We aren't too far out are we? We didn't drift away did we? I thought as a wave lifted me and Rin up. Making sure I had a tight grip on Rin, I took a deep breath as we were hurled into a tumult of water.
"Ouch." I said as I sputtered water. We were on something hard. I looked up and saw a post. The third stop??? But we weren't anywhere near.I looked at Rin ignoring some of the questions in my head. She wasn't moving. Her chest wasn't moving. Oh, no.please no.I said, my eyes stinging, but unable to make nay tears. I started doing CPR. One.Two.Three. I thought as I counted how many times I pressed, and then tried to fill her mouth with air. I ignored my wet hair whipping my face and arms; the cold; the stiffness; my bruises; and my cut hand. I kept doing CPR on Rin but still nothing.
"Rin! You can't die on me! Please!" I yelled, not caring that nobody heard me. I stopped giving CPR. The wind started to die down slowly, and the water quite splashing onto the platform. I stared down at the lifeless from of Rin. Her hair was spread out everywhere, her clothes clung tightly to her glamorous figured body; and her chest was still.still. I sat back on my feet and yelled into the dyeing storm.
"Are you happy! Are you happy now! She's dead! Are you happy now!" I screamed. The thunder rumbled and lightning flashed, but the were weak and still fading. I sat there and cried. Not even bothering to look at the hopeless form lying on the ground besides me.
Authors Ending Note: Ahhh, this ending truly is sad. Poor Rin. Now what will Chihiro do? She has no boat, no tickets, surrounded by water, and her only traveling companion is dead. Sorry that this ending isn't a happy one, but I guarantee you'll want to read the next chapter, it will make up fro this chapters sad and sucky ending---I promise!
Authors Beginning Note: Okay, now the last we left off Rin and Chihiro were beginning to make their way to Zeniiba's in like, waist high water (of course that was just Rin's guess) and in a huge storm without any train tickets. Their solution.paddle an old boat in a huge storm, with what's bound to be huge waves, hard wind, and difficult steering in a seemingly suicidal attempt of getting to Zeniiba's house. WOW! Now there is a chapter worth reading, maybe you should go back and read it.or stick with this chapter and find out what the heck happens. Your choice either way.I hope you enjoy!
Chapter 11
Hopeless Attempt
"No, no, no!" yelled Rin loudly over the wind. Her voice reached my ears as barely a whisper. "Jin, if you don't keep this boat balanced, we'll go over board!" Rin was doing all of the hard work. She was rowing the same boat she had carried me in to the train station six years ago. It was old.and rickety. It squeaked and groaned. I was afraid that it would fall apart. While Rin steered and paddled, I was to sit and make sure the boat was balanced, like the middle person in a canoe. I looked at Rin. She was tired and wet, and if anything like me, she was worried and cold too. Right now she seems to have her complete concentration on making sure the boat doesn't go completely out of control, which is very difficult in this kind of boat. A huge wave was coming. Before we had started Rin told me to lean into the waves to a certain degree so as to keep the boat form tipping. If you ask me, it's a lot like surfing in a way, or at least what I had seen on T.V. I did as she had said. I looked ahead only to have a wave of cold- water splash into my face. I shook my head and looked again. A shard of lightning pierced the sky lighting up a post of sorts and a platform.
"Rin! The second stop is coming up! It's not too far ahead." I yelled excitedly. Rin looked up and nodded. Her hair had come undone and was being blown in the wind.
"Jin, .back." Yelled Rin. I looked at her.
"What!" I yelled. I had only heard part of what she had said.
"We.should..turn.back!" Rin yelled like she was talking to a deaf person.
"But we came this far!"
"It won't work! I'm tired, my hands are sore, we won't make it! We should turn back now, while we can!" she yelled above the wind. I could barely make out some of her words but I got the idea.
"We can't give up now! We have to! It's my only hope!" I yelled. My hand had been throbbing the whole time. Rin looked at me and then ahead of us. Her face unreadable. I could tell she was exhausted and had already gone past her limitations. If she kept it up.she would die herself.
"Rin, Let me steer. I'm not as tired as you are. I'm strong. You can take over when I get tired." I yelled. Rin stared at me for a moment and looked at my hand. Then looked up at me. If she was crying, I couldn't tell because of all of the water everywhere, but she looked like she was about to at least.
"When we get to the second stop." She yelled and kept paddling. I watched the waves; trying to figure out how much weight I'd need to lean to one side depending on the size of the wave. My voice is sore and feels like it has been ripped to shreds, form all of the yelling above the wind. My ears are ringing from all of the loud thunder which feels like a gong is being banged right next to my ear; the lightning always following the thunder, streaking through the sky with it's rapid wrath. I looked out into the distanced.
"What the." I said, my words being swept away from the wind, not ever even reaching my ears.
"Rin! Look at that! What can we do?!" I yelled. Her head snapped up looking into the direction I was pointing at. It looked like a giant ball coming towards us. It wasn't any ball though.this was a wave. Not a wave, a Tsunami. I stared at in fear. Rin stared at it too, fear in her eyes, but her face expressionless as she kept rowing.
"Better hold on Chihiro! I don't think we can make it!" She yelled. I leaned in as the wave struck. AIR! I thought over and over.
Haku.I keep remembering something that I think might help you. I remember... It was your little pink shoe that fell into my river.I think you're the Kohaku River. Your name is the Kohaku River. I remember Chihiro.
"Haku!" I screamed using the last bit of my air. I swam towards the surface.or at least I think it's the surface.or am I swimming deeper. I could feel my lungs ripping apart.screaming for air!
"Air!" I yelled as I surfaced and I breathed in. Just then another wave came at me from behind and I went under again, only to come back up.
"RIN! RIN! Rin, Where are you!" yelling frantically I looked around my but couldn't see Rin. Oh, no, please don't be dead. Taking a deep breath I went under and looked for Rin. Where is Rin! I went back up to the surface, my chest begging for air. I repeated this until I got dizzy. I went under one last time. Wait.what is that.could that be. I swam towards a dark figure in the water ignoring the need for air. Grabbing Rin around the waist, I pulled her above water. I looked around me, trying to keep both Rin and I above water. Where is the station? We aren't too far out are we? We didn't drift away did we? I thought as a wave lifted me and Rin up. Making sure I had a tight grip on Rin, I took a deep breath as we were hurled into a tumult of water.
"Ouch." I said as I sputtered water. We were on something hard. I looked up and saw a post. The third stop??? But we weren't anywhere near.I looked at Rin ignoring some of the questions in my head. She wasn't moving. Her chest wasn't moving. Oh, no.please no.I said, my eyes stinging, but unable to make nay tears. I started doing CPR. One.Two.Three. I thought as I counted how many times I pressed, and then tried to fill her mouth with air. I ignored my wet hair whipping my face and arms; the cold; the stiffness; my bruises; and my cut hand. I kept doing CPR on Rin but still nothing.
"Rin! You can't die on me! Please!" I yelled, not caring that nobody heard me. I stopped giving CPR. The wind started to die down slowly, and the water quite splashing onto the platform. I stared down at the lifeless from of Rin. Her hair was spread out everywhere, her clothes clung tightly to her glamorous figured body; and her chest was still.still. I sat back on my feet and yelled into the dyeing storm.
"Are you happy! Are you happy now! She's dead! Are you happy now!" I screamed. The thunder rumbled and lightning flashed, but the were weak and still fading. I sat there and cried. Not even bothering to look at the hopeless form lying on the ground besides me.
Authors Ending Note: Ahhh, this ending truly is sad. Poor Rin. Now what will Chihiro do? She has no boat, no tickets, surrounded by water, and her only traveling companion is dead. Sorry that this ending isn't a happy one, but I guarantee you'll want to read the next chapter, it will make up fro this chapters sad and sucky ending---I promise!