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To FFML TIM thank you for being the first person to review my first chapter. Thank you, I really appreciate the comments so I went back and fixed the mistakes. Thank you for your honesty.
Love Hina: Continues
Chapter 2: Can He Stay?
After the shock of having another boy living in Hinata-sou, the girls and Keitaro decided to head to the war room/attic. It was more like the girls wanted to go and dragged poor Keitaro with them for a little talk about having another guy living in the dormitory. Being the maddest out of the girls and Keitaro's fiancé, Naru was the first to speak up. "What is the meaning of this Keitaro-kun?" Ready to run and with a look of nervousness on his face, (in fact he would have run if Motoko and Kitsune were not blocking his only escape routes,) Keitaro said, "Well Naru-chan, he's a new friend of mine from school, ah... I am his tutor in Japanese, ah..... he needs a place to sleep, and oh he could not find an apartment." "He spoke perfect Japanese before Urashima-kun," said Motoko. Yeah I should ask Steve about that, thought Keitaro.
Meanwhile, in the lobby, Steve got hungry and started to roam around the dormitory until he found his goal, the kitchen. I wonder what should I cook, oh I know, thought Steve.
Back at the attic, the discussion to let Steve stay was swaying more to Steve's side then Naru's side. "Well Keitaro-kun, what are you going to do?" asked Kitsune. "How about if we let him stay a month, until he finds an apartment?" said Keitaro. "I just don't know," said Naru. "Come on Naru-sempai, it is only a month," said Shinobu. "Yeah he also looks like he could be a fun new playmate," said Su. Everybody, especially Keitaro, gave a sweat drop knowing what Su means about playmate, (playmate in Su case means to play with the person which causes the person to have their body to be crunched, smashed, or totally destroyed.) I might have some fun with him plus he is cute, thought Kistune. "He is at least a real Tokyo U student not like when Urashima-kun first came here," said Motoko. "Fine, he can stay," said an angry and frustrated Naru.
After the little meeting in the attic Keitaro and the girls came down stairs to tell Steve the good news only to find that Steve was not in the lobby. "Where has that male gone to now?" said an angry Motoko. "See he was up to no good, he is probably a thief and (turning to face Keitaro) Keitaro-kun this is entirely your fault," said an angry Naru. "Please Naru-chan, Motoko-chan wait I... didn't... please stop... no," screamed Keitaro before Naru and Motoko sent Keitaro flying.
"Hey what's going on in here," said Steve who is now dressed like a chef. With fire in her eyes Naru said, "Where have you been?" "Who me, I kind of got hungry so I went and found the kitchen and made dinner for everybody," said Steve "It is also my way to show thanks for letting me stay, even if it is just for the couple of hours I have been here, (just then notice Keitaro was missing) where is Keitaro-san? I want to say I am sorry but I can't stay."
Just getting back to the lobby Keitaro said, "Why?" "Well when I was exploring for the kitchen I came across the outdoor bath, well I didn't know about you Keitaro-san but I rather not have any girls come in while I am taking a bath," said Steve. "Oh, don't worry about that I have a bath upstairs, you and me can make up times when we can take our bathrooms," said Keitaro. "Well that's settled, how about we eat?" asked Kitsune."
With everybody gathered at the table Steve brings out two huge pots and Tama brought out one regular pot. "Thank you my little flying friend," said Steve. "Myuh," said Tama after receiving a little turtle treat from Steve. "Ok everybody eat and enjoy my family spaghetti recipe and if feel you can handle my special spaghetti sauce it is in....(Steve then notice that Su was pouring his special spaghetti sauce on to her spaghetti noodles) oh wait don't it is too spicy," yelled Steve! But it was too late. Su had already started to eat her spaghetti. What surprised Steve was that Su finished the entire pot and still ask for more. "W-what but h-how could you eat all that, my special spicy spaghetti sauce that I thought I was only person able to eat it, and asked for more food?" asked a very surprised and stunned Steve. "Well, Steve-san I am very energetic so I need to consume more food then a normal human and for your sauce that is not spicy at all," said Su. She then whips out a bottle of her own royal family spaghetti sauce and said, "Here try some of my family sauce." "What do yo.. blaaghhh!", said Steve before being force fed some of the spaghetti with Su's spaghetti sauce.
People walking past the steps that lead to Hinata-sou suddenly heard a man screaming HOT!!!!!
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Author Notes:
Sorry everybody for taking so long to update. I had a major writers block and also sorry for having chapter 2 so short. I will have chapter 3 done and ready to go by this week I hope.