This is just an author's note, typed up from the public library. For those of you who don't know, my computer's dead, so really until I get a new one, this story will be on hold. I'll try as hard as I can to get the next chapter up, but I've lost everything. Thanks to everyone who reviewed, and I'd like to take this time (exactly 5 minutes left on the computer =( ) to answer one really great review personally.
Les Rooktiles- Thank you so much for your constructive criticism, it has helped. But I do have to say, if you don't like how the story is written, no one is sitting their forcing you to read it. I did say that this was my first ever Underworld fanfic, so I'm sorry for any plot holes and whatnot. And as for detail, I try as hard as I can, but I don't have much time on my home computer, and writer's block sets in a lot when I try to use more description, but yes, I see your point there. One last thing to touch on, Brenna is the main character. Emphasis on main. This is her story. Again, thank you for your ideas, and I'll try to keep these things in mind for my next chapter.
To everyone who's reading- I'm so sorry that this is taking so long, I have about half of the chapter handwritten, and my computer may be fixed enough so that I can at least type and post. Thanks to everyone who's stuck with this!
Les Rooktiles- Thank you so much for your constructive criticism, it has helped. But I do have to say, if you don't like how the story is written, no one is sitting their forcing you to read it. I did say that this was my first ever Underworld fanfic, so I'm sorry for any plot holes and whatnot. And as for detail, I try as hard as I can, but I don't have much time on my home computer, and writer's block sets in a lot when I try to use more description, but yes, I see your point there. One last thing to touch on, Brenna is the main character. Emphasis on main. This is her story. Again, thank you for your ideas, and I'll try to keep these things in mind for my next chapter.
To everyone who's reading- I'm so sorry that this is taking so long, I have about half of the chapter handwritten, and my computer may be fixed enough so that I can at least type and post. Thanks to everyone who's stuck with this!