Hey Guys~
This is a totally new chapter to you who've read my original fanfic. I had to clean out a whole bunch of crap from the first few chapters to make it sound ok. Enjoy! Ren117
*******The City*********
"Let's stop here." Tawny pointed to a street parking place infront of the library.
Louis parked and held out his hand.
"Here, get out through my door." Tawny raised an eyebrow.
"Why?"
"'Cause I don't want you to get hit by a car."
Tawny shrugged and grabbed his hand even though there were no cars in sight.
"So does this mean we're back on?" he helped her out of the car.
She smiled. "Hm.....I dunno. I think I might need it to be sealed with a kiss."
He leaned in. She pushed him away and laughed.
"Not yet!"
He gave her the puppy dog look. "When then?"
"I dunno. Sometime."
"Hey wait, I already kissed you!" he protested.
"Na, that didn't count. It was only a peck."
Louis pouted. Tawny laughed. "Hey, that's not gonna get you anywhere."
He tried to look hurt. She punched him on the shoulder.
"Come on." She took his hand and they walked along the street.
*
They reached the park. The street lamps were on, and no people were on the street. The stars shining brightly on them.
Louis put his arm around her. She gave him the look.
"What? It's getting scary."
They sat down on the swings.
"So have I earned my kiss yet?"
"Nope." She grinned.
"What if I do this?" He picked her up off the swings.
"No, let go!" She laughed, kicking and screaming.
"Oh no, not until I get my kiss." He set her down and pinned her to the grass. She laughed and tried to get away.
He tightened his grip. She finally gave up, laughing and panting. She stopped and looked into his eyes. He was lying directly on her. Eye to eye, chest to chest.
"You can let go of me now." She couldn't help but blush.
"Not until I get my kiss."
He grinned mischievously. He could feel her heart beating, her chest rising and falling with his.
Finally he released his hold. Just as he was getting up, Tawny pulled him back down. A spark ran down his spine as their lips touched. He pulled her closer to bring her into a real kiss.
Something rustled in the bushes. Tawny ignored it and wrapped her arms around Louis.
^CLICK^ ^FLASH^.
Louis popped his head up just in time to see Beans running away with a camera in his hands.
"BEANS!!! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!!!!!!" He got up and ran after him
Tawny laughed, still on the ground.
"This is so typical."
******* Hey~ I hope you liked this chapter. I thought it made a little more sense adding more to Tawny and Louis's relationship. Well R&R!
Ren117
This is a totally new chapter to you who've read my original fanfic. I had to clean out a whole bunch of crap from the first few chapters to make it sound ok. Enjoy! Ren117
*******The City*********
"Let's stop here." Tawny pointed to a street parking place infront of the library.
Louis parked and held out his hand.
"Here, get out through my door." Tawny raised an eyebrow.
"Why?"
"'Cause I don't want you to get hit by a car."
Tawny shrugged and grabbed his hand even though there were no cars in sight.
"So does this mean we're back on?" he helped her out of the car.
She smiled. "Hm.....I dunno. I think I might need it to be sealed with a kiss."
He leaned in. She pushed him away and laughed.
"Not yet!"
He gave her the puppy dog look. "When then?"
"I dunno. Sometime."
"Hey wait, I already kissed you!" he protested.
"Na, that didn't count. It was only a peck."
Louis pouted. Tawny laughed. "Hey, that's not gonna get you anywhere."
He tried to look hurt. She punched him on the shoulder.
"Come on." She took his hand and they walked along the street.
*
They reached the park. The street lamps were on, and no people were on the street. The stars shining brightly on them.
Louis put his arm around her. She gave him the look.
"What? It's getting scary."
They sat down on the swings.
"So have I earned my kiss yet?"
"Nope." She grinned.
"What if I do this?" He picked her up off the swings.
"No, let go!" She laughed, kicking and screaming.
"Oh no, not until I get my kiss." He set her down and pinned her to the grass. She laughed and tried to get away.
He tightened his grip. She finally gave up, laughing and panting. She stopped and looked into his eyes. He was lying directly on her. Eye to eye, chest to chest.
"You can let go of me now." She couldn't help but blush.
"Not until I get my kiss."
He grinned mischievously. He could feel her heart beating, her chest rising and falling with his.
Finally he released his hold. Just as he was getting up, Tawny pulled him back down. A spark ran down his spine as their lips touched. He pulled her closer to bring her into a real kiss.
Something rustled in the bushes. Tawny ignored it and wrapped her arms around Louis.
^CLICK^ ^FLASH^.
Louis popped his head up just in time to see Beans running away with a camera in his hands.
"BEANS!!! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!!!!!!" He got up and ran after him
Tawny laughed, still on the ground.
"This is so typical."
******* Hey~ I hope you liked this chapter. I thought it made a little more sense adding more to Tawny and Louis's relationship. Well R&R!
Ren117