Feuer Frei
I don't own Beyblade, nor do I own Rammstein's song, 'Feuer Frei'. (Which I learned meant 'open fire', and even thought 'fire free' could work; I'm using 'open fire'. It makes more sense in that song, anyway.) I am using the English version of the song, but if you want to see the german version, go to ', which is where I found the english version too.
Review Replies
Kodoku Wolf
Actually, just a major case of writers block. (which playing the new game I got for graduation (The Legend of Zelda, the WindWaker) WAY too much could have caused. (it's such a good game it's scary. O.O) This fic seems really popular...why? What makes it so good? BTW thanks for putting me on your favorites list!
Mrs.Sumpter
Why do you think this fic is amazing? I thought there would be another fic like this out there.
Bonnie/max/rei
You are just gonna have to wait just like everybody else to find out what happens! I'll just say that Voltaire SERIOUSLY gets his ass kicked by Kai. (And burned) .
Devlinn Reiko-sama
I liked the idea of the scars too . (What do you think Kai's look like? Oops, I think I gave away
something...)
Kai opened the door of the limo and helped Rei out, the limo driving off;
who still had his eyes covered by Kai's silk scarf. "Okay Rei. You have
convinced me that you can have a peek of where we are. But it goes right
back on after. Alright?" "Yes!" Uniting the knot, he let it slide down,
revealing to Rei a glimpse of where they were. All Rei saw were walls of
shrubbery, {'a maze?'} He thought {'why would Kai bring me to a maze?'}
before the scarf blocked his vision again. He pouted. "Don't worry, Kitten.
Everything will be revealed to you shortly." Kai then took him by his waist,
leading him through the maze. When Kai wasn't looking, he quickly
reached into his sash, to see if a small black velvet box was still there. {I
hope he likes it...} Feeling better when he did, he allowed Kai to once more
lead him. After what seemed to be an hour of walking, full of twists and
turns, which was actually only five minutes, Kai stopped, reaching into his
pocket to see if he still had a small white velvet box in it. Reassured that he
did, he took the scarf away from Rei's eyes, holding it in his hand. {I hope
Rei likes it...} he thought, biting his lip. Rei, upon seeing Kai's gift, gasped,
his hands coming up to cover his mouth. They were in the center of the
maze, a small circular area that had a diameter of 50 feet, surrounded by
grassy walls 20 feet high. There was a waterfall curving around the west
side, going all around the area. Cherry blossom trees surrounded the
clearing with their sweet smell, their pink and white blossoms gently
floating down around them. A small open walled building, surrounded by
water stood in the center, with a white marble base and pillars, with a blue
marble ceiling, which when Rei looked under it, was studded with yellow
diamonds to form constellations, which changed just like the real sky.
Grinning, Rei launched himself at his lover, wrapping his arms around the
surprised phoenix, kissing him. When they broke apart, Kai smirked,
placing his arms around Rei's waist. "I'm guessing you like it then?" "Like
it? I love it! But there is one thing I need to do..." Twisting around, Kai's
arms still around his waist, he flung small orbs of light in the air,
illuminating the night. "There we go. Now come on, I want to show you
something..." Grabbing the red scarf, he tied it around Kai's neck, giving
him a quick but loving kiss, then jumped, gliding with his wings, to the
marble building landing neatly on the white base. Turning around hands on
his hips, wings fluttering, he extended one of his hands, beckoning Kai to
him with a sly look on his face. A small smile tugging at the corner of his
mouth, Kai did the same, tackling Rei to the ground, making Rei mew in
surprise. Sitting up, bringing his koi to sit in his lap, Kai brought out the
little white box, opening it in front of Rei's nose. Inside, there was a pure
silver ring worked into the shape of an encircling feather, with a heart of
moonstone. Rei could only gape in amazement as Kai slid the ring on,
kissing his hand after. "Kai... it beautiful! But, why?" "Rei, You are the
light to my darkness. You have made me so happy over the years, more
than I deserve to be. Rei, will you be with me for the rest of my life?" Rei
smiled, bringing up a hand to stroke Kai's cheek, than brought out a little
black box, opening it. "Yes, if you will stay will me." Inside the box was a
ring made of 24 karat gold, shaped into a flowing flame, set with a heart of
sunstone. He placed his ring on Kai's finger, kissing him deeply. A large
black fireball flew towards them, aimed at Kai. Rei saw what was coming
and pushed Kai down, taking the hit on his left shoulder, crying out in pain
as he stumbled down the marble steps, the hand he held to it dripping with
blood. "REI!" Kai ran over to his love, jumping to narrowly avoid another
black fireball. When he reached him, he growled as an evil laugh sounded
from the shadows. A figure dressed in a black cloak raised a twin serpent
headed staff, black laser beams shooting from its eyes straight at Rei. Rei
dodged it and took a white feather from each wing, holding them together
by their bottoms, one pointing up, the other down. A bright light erupted
from his locket as he transformed. His wings turned silver, and his floor
length hair was bound in a white and silver binding with opal clips, along
with a matching bandana, allowing his now chest length silver bangs to stay
out of his eyes, which were now bright gold. He wore a short sleeved white
Chinese shirt that went to his knees, covering his white straight leg pants
that had a slight flare at the bottom, with silver thread embroidered into
mystic patterns on the bottom of the pants and the cuffs, neckline, and hem
of the shirt, with a silver sash on his hips, matching his silver slippers. He
also had a silver circlet on his head, just like an angel's halo, resting above
pointed ears. He also had a tail, white with black stripes. In his hand, he
held a large silver bow, which looked like two sweeping wings, and was
strung with silver threads. He rose up the bow, his wrist protected by a
silver wrist guard, inch long fangs bared in a growl. Pulling back the string,
a silver arrow formed out of light. Letting the arrow go, it shot so fast and
true that it would have gone through Voltaire's head had he not predicted
the move and ducked, the arrow fading. As the figure zigzagged towards
them, Kai stood in front of Rei, his claws and fangs bared, knowing full
well who it was. "Grandfather." The figure lowered its hood. "Kai."
Voltaire wore a dark purple robe with black trim, two thin purple lines
under each eye. "Kai, I told you that you should not have gotten together
with that boy. An angel, nonetheless. You should have listened to me. I
warned you. Now he made you weak." "Rei did not make me weak! He
made me truly happy for the first time in my life. And you are not going to
take that away from me!" Kai's locket started to burn with a red light. Soon
he was dressed in straight-legged black leather pants that went over calf
length black boots accented with gold ankle chains, the pants buckled with a
gold chain belt. He didn't have a shirt, as his jacket was now a skin-tight
sleeveless black leather coat lined with crimson silk, embroidered at the
collar, cuffs and hem with gold flames. It had a high collar, also flaring at
the waist. He wore gold flame-shaped arm and wrist-bands, with his
shoulder length dark and slate blue hair put into a ponytail with a ruby clip,
gold bangs curving towards his (top) black and (bottom) red triangles. His
wings having turned into wings that were made of Hellfire, along with his
phoenix tail. Eyes burned a swirling pattern of black and red (Think of
embers) as sharp talons and inch and a quarter long fangs were bared in a
smirk, his glaive's blade burning with black flames. "Now, I suggest you
get your big fat ass out of here old man, before I burn it back to whichever
sludge pit you managed to crawl back out from." Voltaire growled and
brought up his staff, shooting black arrows at Kai, who blocked them with
his glaive. Kai flew towards his grandfather, staff and glaive colliding. They
sparred, All of them knowing that they had to resolve this once and for all.
[Whoever knows pain becomes criticized]
Kai fought hard, but Voltaire was fast and skilled for an old man though,
[From the fire that burned up the skin]
and slammed Kai to the ground, knocking the glaive out of his hands.
[I throw a light in my face]
Seeing his grandfather hurling towards him, he flew out of the way quickly.
[A hot cry]
But Voltaire is one not to lose. In a flash he flung chains of dark energy at
[Open fire!]
Kai, bounding his arms together to a marble pillar. He struggled, but he
[Bang Bang!]
could not move. Voltaire summoned a huge energy ball, full of dark
[Bang Bang!]
nightmares and pain. He shoot it at Rei, who was soon bound quickly the
[Whoever knows pain is raised]
same way, his bow dropping out of his hands, disappearing as
[From the fire that burns in desire]
the chains burned his wrists. He sent a glance to Kai, who eyes widened.
[A hard thrust (that gives off sparks) into her womb]
"I love you, Kai..." He heard Rei whisper mentally, just as the ball engulfed
[A hot cry]
him in dark light. "NO!" Kai yelled, hearing Rei's screams and cries from
[Open fire!]
within the orb. "I told you Kai! Now you will pay the price for your
[Bang Bang!]
disobedience!" Voltaire raised his staff, causing the orb to get darker,
[Bang Bang!]
causing more screams to erupt from the orb. "THAT'S ENOUGH!" yelled
[Open fire!]
Kai as he broke the chains, what remained of them hanging from his wrists.
[Bang Bang!]
Fire gathered in his hand, but in his rage he missed. Voltaire cackled,
[Bang Bang!]
disappearing into the air, his orb disappearing, revealing Rei, who was lying
[Open fire!]
on the ground, burnt and unmoving. "Rei!?" he ran over to his kitten,
[Whoever knows pain is dangerous]
gathering his head in his lap. Silver blood was pouring out of Rei's mouth
[From the fire that burns the soul]
as he spoke in a soft voice. "Kai...please listen. I'm not going to make it..."
[Bang Bang!]
"Rei, don't talk like that! Please, stay with me! You said you would..."
[The burned child is dangerous]
Tears were filling Kai's eyes, threatening to fall as he spoke. "The darkness
[With fire that separates from the life]
was too much. Please forgive me...I love you. Nothing can ever change
[A hot cry]
that, either in this world or the next. Goodbye, Kai..." Rei said softly, his
[Open fire!]
hand caressing Kai's cheek, before he suddenly went still, his hand falling
[Bang Bang!]
down, his blood running in silver streams down his chin as dull golden eyes
[Bang Bang!]
closed for the last time. Kai held his head over Rei, his crystal tears falling
[Open fire!]
on the Neko-Angel's burnt body. "I can't bring you back, but at least I can
[Bang Bang!]
heal you..." He whispered, watching the burns and any other injuries
[Bang Bang!]
heal instantly. He picked up his glaive, strapping it to his back, and then he
[Open fire!]
picked up Rei's body bridal style as he stood. Kai threw his head back and a
[Bang Bang!]
loud shriek filled the air, as if it came from a wounded bird, calling as rain
[Bang Bang!]
fell from the sky, so that all of Heaven, Earth and Hell would mourn the
[Open fire!]
death of an Angel, the lover of a Demon, who, as tears fell from his burning
[Bang bang!]
eyes, knew what he had to do. And by Hellfire and Brimstone, he was going
to do it mercilessly.
Y.Y sniffs That was so sweet and said, I almost cried when I wrote this! sniffs Tissues available to reviewers! So? Did you guys like it? Well, you better, cause I am not updating till I get a lot more reviews, Savvy? (dodges various items)
I don't own Beyblade, nor do I own Rammstein's song, 'Feuer Frei'. (Which I learned meant 'open fire', and even thought 'fire free' could work; I'm using 'open fire'. It makes more sense in that song, anyway.) I am using the English version of the song, but if you want to see the german version, go to ', which is where I found the english version too.
Review Replies
Kodoku Wolf
Actually, just a major case of writers block. (which playing the new game I got for graduation (The Legend of Zelda, the WindWaker) WAY too much could have caused. (it's such a good game it's scary. O.O) This fic seems really popular...why? What makes it so good? BTW thanks for putting me on your favorites list!
Mrs.Sumpter
Why do you think this fic is amazing? I thought there would be another fic like this out there.
Bonnie/max/rei
You are just gonna have to wait just like everybody else to find out what happens! I'll just say that Voltaire SERIOUSLY gets his ass kicked by Kai. (And burned) .
Devlinn Reiko-sama
I liked the idea of the scars too . (What do you think Kai's look like? Oops, I think I gave away
something...)
Kai opened the door of the limo and helped Rei out, the limo driving off;
who still had his eyes covered by Kai's silk scarf. "Okay Rei. You have
convinced me that you can have a peek of where we are. But it goes right
back on after. Alright?" "Yes!" Uniting the knot, he let it slide down,
revealing to Rei a glimpse of where they were. All Rei saw were walls of
shrubbery, {'a maze?'} He thought {'why would Kai bring me to a maze?'}
before the scarf blocked his vision again. He pouted. "Don't worry, Kitten.
Everything will be revealed to you shortly." Kai then took him by his waist,
leading him through the maze. When Kai wasn't looking, he quickly
reached into his sash, to see if a small black velvet box was still there. {I
hope he likes it...} Feeling better when he did, he allowed Kai to once more
lead him. After what seemed to be an hour of walking, full of twists and
turns, which was actually only five minutes, Kai stopped, reaching into his
pocket to see if he still had a small white velvet box in it. Reassured that he
did, he took the scarf away from Rei's eyes, holding it in his hand. {I hope
Rei likes it...} he thought, biting his lip. Rei, upon seeing Kai's gift, gasped,
his hands coming up to cover his mouth. They were in the center of the
maze, a small circular area that had a diameter of 50 feet, surrounded by
grassy walls 20 feet high. There was a waterfall curving around the west
side, going all around the area. Cherry blossom trees surrounded the
clearing with their sweet smell, their pink and white blossoms gently
floating down around them. A small open walled building, surrounded by
water stood in the center, with a white marble base and pillars, with a blue
marble ceiling, which when Rei looked under it, was studded with yellow
diamonds to form constellations, which changed just like the real sky.
Grinning, Rei launched himself at his lover, wrapping his arms around the
surprised phoenix, kissing him. When they broke apart, Kai smirked,
placing his arms around Rei's waist. "I'm guessing you like it then?" "Like
it? I love it! But there is one thing I need to do..." Twisting around, Kai's
arms still around his waist, he flung small orbs of light in the air,
illuminating the night. "There we go. Now come on, I want to show you
something..." Grabbing the red scarf, he tied it around Kai's neck, giving
him a quick but loving kiss, then jumped, gliding with his wings, to the
marble building landing neatly on the white base. Turning around hands on
his hips, wings fluttering, he extended one of his hands, beckoning Kai to
him with a sly look on his face. A small smile tugging at the corner of his
mouth, Kai did the same, tackling Rei to the ground, making Rei mew in
surprise. Sitting up, bringing his koi to sit in his lap, Kai brought out the
little white box, opening it in front of Rei's nose. Inside, there was a pure
silver ring worked into the shape of an encircling feather, with a heart of
moonstone. Rei could only gape in amazement as Kai slid the ring on,
kissing his hand after. "Kai... it beautiful! But, why?" "Rei, You are the
light to my darkness. You have made me so happy over the years, more
than I deserve to be. Rei, will you be with me for the rest of my life?" Rei
smiled, bringing up a hand to stroke Kai's cheek, than brought out a little
black box, opening it. "Yes, if you will stay will me." Inside the box was a
ring made of 24 karat gold, shaped into a flowing flame, set with a heart of
sunstone. He placed his ring on Kai's finger, kissing him deeply. A large
black fireball flew towards them, aimed at Kai. Rei saw what was coming
and pushed Kai down, taking the hit on his left shoulder, crying out in pain
as he stumbled down the marble steps, the hand he held to it dripping with
blood. "REI!" Kai ran over to his love, jumping to narrowly avoid another
black fireball. When he reached him, he growled as an evil laugh sounded
from the shadows. A figure dressed in a black cloak raised a twin serpent
headed staff, black laser beams shooting from its eyes straight at Rei. Rei
dodged it and took a white feather from each wing, holding them together
by their bottoms, one pointing up, the other down. A bright light erupted
from his locket as he transformed. His wings turned silver, and his floor
length hair was bound in a white and silver binding with opal clips, along
with a matching bandana, allowing his now chest length silver bangs to stay
out of his eyes, which were now bright gold. He wore a short sleeved white
Chinese shirt that went to his knees, covering his white straight leg pants
that had a slight flare at the bottom, with silver thread embroidered into
mystic patterns on the bottom of the pants and the cuffs, neckline, and hem
of the shirt, with a silver sash on his hips, matching his silver slippers. He
also had a silver circlet on his head, just like an angel's halo, resting above
pointed ears. He also had a tail, white with black stripes. In his hand, he
held a large silver bow, which looked like two sweeping wings, and was
strung with silver threads. He rose up the bow, his wrist protected by a
silver wrist guard, inch long fangs bared in a growl. Pulling back the string,
a silver arrow formed out of light. Letting the arrow go, it shot so fast and
true that it would have gone through Voltaire's head had he not predicted
the move and ducked, the arrow fading. As the figure zigzagged towards
them, Kai stood in front of Rei, his claws and fangs bared, knowing full
well who it was. "Grandfather." The figure lowered its hood. "Kai."
Voltaire wore a dark purple robe with black trim, two thin purple lines
under each eye. "Kai, I told you that you should not have gotten together
with that boy. An angel, nonetheless. You should have listened to me. I
warned you. Now he made you weak." "Rei did not make me weak! He
made me truly happy for the first time in my life. And you are not going to
take that away from me!" Kai's locket started to burn with a red light. Soon
he was dressed in straight-legged black leather pants that went over calf
length black boots accented with gold ankle chains, the pants buckled with a
gold chain belt. He didn't have a shirt, as his jacket was now a skin-tight
sleeveless black leather coat lined with crimson silk, embroidered at the
collar, cuffs and hem with gold flames. It had a high collar, also flaring at
the waist. He wore gold flame-shaped arm and wrist-bands, with his
shoulder length dark and slate blue hair put into a ponytail with a ruby clip,
gold bangs curving towards his (top) black and (bottom) red triangles. His
wings having turned into wings that were made of Hellfire, along with his
phoenix tail. Eyes burned a swirling pattern of black and red (Think of
embers) as sharp talons and inch and a quarter long fangs were bared in a
smirk, his glaive's blade burning with black flames. "Now, I suggest you
get your big fat ass out of here old man, before I burn it back to whichever
sludge pit you managed to crawl back out from." Voltaire growled and
brought up his staff, shooting black arrows at Kai, who blocked them with
his glaive. Kai flew towards his grandfather, staff and glaive colliding. They
sparred, All of them knowing that they had to resolve this once and for all.
[Whoever knows pain becomes criticized]
Kai fought hard, but Voltaire was fast and skilled for an old man though,
[From the fire that burned up the skin]
and slammed Kai to the ground, knocking the glaive out of his hands.
[I throw a light in my face]
Seeing his grandfather hurling towards him, he flew out of the way quickly.
[A hot cry]
But Voltaire is one not to lose. In a flash he flung chains of dark energy at
[Open fire!]
Kai, bounding his arms together to a marble pillar. He struggled, but he
[Bang Bang!]
could not move. Voltaire summoned a huge energy ball, full of dark
[Bang Bang!]
nightmares and pain. He shoot it at Rei, who was soon bound quickly the
[Whoever knows pain is raised]
same way, his bow dropping out of his hands, disappearing as
[From the fire that burns in desire]
the chains burned his wrists. He sent a glance to Kai, who eyes widened.
[A hard thrust (that gives off sparks) into her womb]
"I love you, Kai..." He heard Rei whisper mentally, just as the ball engulfed
[A hot cry]
him in dark light. "NO!" Kai yelled, hearing Rei's screams and cries from
[Open fire!]
within the orb. "I told you Kai! Now you will pay the price for your
[Bang Bang!]
disobedience!" Voltaire raised his staff, causing the orb to get darker,
[Bang Bang!]
causing more screams to erupt from the orb. "THAT'S ENOUGH!" yelled
[Open fire!]
Kai as he broke the chains, what remained of them hanging from his wrists.
[Bang Bang!]
Fire gathered in his hand, but in his rage he missed. Voltaire cackled,
[Bang Bang!]
disappearing into the air, his orb disappearing, revealing Rei, who was lying
[Open fire!]
on the ground, burnt and unmoving. "Rei!?" he ran over to his kitten,
[Whoever knows pain is dangerous]
gathering his head in his lap. Silver blood was pouring out of Rei's mouth
[From the fire that burns the soul]
as he spoke in a soft voice. "Kai...please listen. I'm not going to make it..."
[Bang Bang!]
"Rei, don't talk like that! Please, stay with me! You said you would..."
[The burned child is dangerous]
Tears were filling Kai's eyes, threatening to fall as he spoke. "The darkness
[With fire that separates from the life]
was too much. Please forgive me...I love you. Nothing can ever change
[A hot cry]
that, either in this world or the next. Goodbye, Kai..." Rei said softly, his
[Open fire!]
hand caressing Kai's cheek, before he suddenly went still, his hand falling
[Bang Bang!]
down, his blood running in silver streams down his chin as dull golden eyes
[Bang Bang!]
closed for the last time. Kai held his head over Rei, his crystal tears falling
[Open fire!]
on the Neko-Angel's burnt body. "I can't bring you back, but at least I can
[Bang Bang!]
heal you..." He whispered, watching the burns and any other injuries
[Bang Bang!]
heal instantly. He picked up his glaive, strapping it to his back, and then he
[Open fire!]
picked up Rei's body bridal style as he stood. Kai threw his head back and a
[Bang Bang!]
loud shriek filled the air, as if it came from a wounded bird, calling as rain
[Bang Bang!]
fell from the sky, so that all of Heaven, Earth and Hell would mourn the
[Open fire!]
death of an Angel, the lover of a Demon, who, as tears fell from his burning
[Bang bang!]
eyes, knew what he had to do. And by Hellfire and Brimstone, he was going
to do it mercilessly.
Y.Y sniffs That was so sweet and said, I almost cried when I wrote this! sniffs Tissues available to reviewers! So? Did you guys like it? Well, you better, cause I am not updating till I get a lot more reviews, Savvy? (dodges various items)