Feuer Frei
-Reviewer Replies- -Mrs.Sumpter- How is this fic original?
-alexgirl12-
Only a few more chapters left!
-Devlinn Reiko-sama-
I like describing stuff!
-Shiroi-Tenshi-Tsubasa- Nice review! It was very funny!
-Bonnie/max/rei- Yes, Kai will kick Voltaire's sorry ass. (Go Kai! Whoohoo!)
-KeiraX- Hello you, (lol) my fellow Rammstein-liker. (You might want to listen to their song 'Sonne', as it fits in this story so good, (you'll see how later...don't those lyrics SO go with Kai in this fic?) I'm putting it in my story.) Thanks for reviewing my German translation. It took awhile...=.=;; Yes, poor Rei and Kai, and Yes, Voltaire is really evil. (DIE VOLTAIRE! DIE!) Btw- your English is great!
-Did anybody actually get what I meant with the ring scene? And if you want to know what Kai is saying, review and I will decode it and tell you.-
O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O Kai knew he had to get revenge for Rei's murder, but he had to properly
take care of the Angel's body first. Still carrying Rei, he opened a portal,
stepped through, and closed it behind him. He stood at a huge metal gate,
the sign above it reading, in curly writing, 'Specter Graveyard'. "S'luos
latrommi eseht emoclew ot setag eht nepo" He spoke, causing the gates to
shimmer and open, the metal creaking slightly. Kai walked to a large
opening in the graveyard's center, then gently laid his koi down in front of
him. Rising his arms, he placed his hands slightly away yet facing each
other, a gold orb forming between them. "S'luos latrommi eseht esuoh llahs
ytinrete ni taht sllaw eht esiar" The orb flew into the air, and then started to
glow brightly. The edges of a square of ground the size of half a football
field started glow as well, the area inside the square changed into a black
vortex. Loud rumbling filled the air as a large building floated out of the
vortex, filling in the ground. The building's walls and roof were made of
white and black swirled marble, with the walls having a emerald studded
silver border on top, and a ruby studded gold border on the bottom. A gray
stone pathway ran from Kai's feet the door, going through the black metal
gate that opened the black metal fence that ran around the tomb. It had two
large stained glass windows on each side, one depicting a crouching tiger,
the other a phoenix with outstretched wings. A huge platinum door etched
with a wing on each side, the left side was an angel wing, its outline being
inlaid with opal. The other's outline, being a phoenix demon wing, was
inlaid with onyx and ruby. Picking up Rei, he walked down the path
through the gate. Stopping near the large doors, he gently set Rei down
again and took a silver beyblade out of his sash with his right hand. With
his left, he took a golden beyblade out of his pocket. Holding them up, a red
beam shone from the golden beyblade, forming a giant phoenix statue to his
left, made of black marble (no it is not dark Dranzer it just had to be black
to go with the theme.) with large glinting garnet eyes, and on its
outstretched wings were gold and ruby feathers. The beam from the
beyblade to the right formed a into a statue of a crouching white marble
tiger, with shining amber eyes and emerald strips. Coming alive, they
turned to face the one that had awoken them. "Guard this tomb well. Let no
soul who is not I or the one in my arms ever cross the other side of this
door. You know what then even he and I must say, and when he or I
come, we will say it." These creatures then bowed to their Master, silver
claws and golden talons outstretched. Kai then picked up Rei again gently,
and resumed walking to the huge doors that automatically opened by
themselves when he came near, closing by themselves when he passed
through. When he walked in, it was dark. "Feuer Frei." In an instant,
hundreds of lit white, dark green, crimson, and black candles were floating
around, shedding light on the tombs large interior. To the center left, was a
black and crimson swirled marble box, with gold edges inlaid with ruby
flames. To its right, was a white and dark green marble box, edged with
silver inlaid with emerald feathers. Walking over to the box on his right, he
laid Rei in it, on a cushion of light. He placed Rei's bound hair on his left
shoulder, and changed his wrist guards to white bandages, from his wrists to
his elbow. He placed a hand slightly above Rei, then ran it down his body,
his hand still slightly above his lover. He took in everything, from his raven
hair to his embroidered white outfit, to his white slippers. Kai crossed Rei's
arms over his chest, placing on his heart a silver beyblade with a very sharp
attack ring, its jagged edges accented with diamond chips to increase
damage. Its bit glowed a dark green when it was placed on Rei's heart.
Bringing his hand back, he leaned down and kissed Rei's lips one last time,
placing a hand on Rei's forehead. "Yllanrete mrof siht ni niamer" he spoke,
removing his hand as a shimmering piece of glass formed over Rei. "Don't
worry, I will get you your revenge..." he murmured, running a hand along
the glass. "So I will be gone for a little bit, but I will be back later, alright?
So sleep well, my Kitten, as we will soon be together again, this time for all
eternity." He walked to an alter at the north of the coffins, where two small
boxes stood, one gold, the other silver. Opening the golden one, he brought
out two twin pistols made of black gunmetal, with golden flame details and
blood stained triggers, depicted golden phoenixes, their fiery garnet eyes
aiming, golden beaks open to fire deadly bullets. He then walked out of the
tomb. Kai, once he was out, as he put one of the guns each into holsters on
his upper thighs, put on his black glasses, and adjusted his jacket, smirked
evilly. "Well, like I always say, nothing accents the leather trench coat like
automatic weaponry." He then grinned, fangs showing. "And it's now time
for me to go grill me some Voltass!"
-----------------------------------END-FLASHBACK-------------- ----------------
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????
Well? You like? I don't think this came out the way I meant it. And yes, I know something's are different from the first chapter's description, but bear with me here. The first chapter's description was just to give you a basic idea. And the flashback is now over, so the Voltaire torture will soon begin!
-Reviewer Replies- -Mrs.Sumpter- How is this fic original?
-alexgirl12-
Only a few more chapters left!
-Devlinn Reiko-sama-
I like describing stuff!
-Shiroi-Tenshi-Tsubasa- Nice review! It was very funny!
-Bonnie/max/rei- Yes, Kai will kick Voltaire's sorry ass. (Go Kai! Whoohoo!)
-KeiraX- Hello you, (lol) my fellow Rammstein-liker. (You might want to listen to their song 'Sonne', as it fits in this story so good, (you'll see how later...don't those lyrics SO go with Kai in this fic?) I'm putting it in my story.) Thanks for reviewing my German translation. It took awhile...=.=;; Yes, poor Rei and Kai, and Yes, Voltaire is really evil. (DIE VOLTAIRE! DIE!) Btw- your English is great!
-Did anybody actually get what I meant with the ring scene? And if you want to know what Kai is saying, review and I will decode it and tell you.-
O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O=O Kai knew he had to get revenge for Rei's murder, but he had to properly
take care of the Angel's body first. Still carrying Rei, he opened a portal,
stepped through, and closed it behind him. He stood at a huge metal gate,
the sign above it reading, in curly writing, 'Specter Graveyard'. "S'luos
latrommi eseht emoclew ot setag eht nepo" He spoke, causing the gates to
shimmer and open, the metal creaking slightly. Kai walked to a large
opening in the graveyard's center, then gently laid his koi down in front of
him. Rising his arms, he placed his hands slightly away yet facing each
other, a gold orb forming between them. "S'luos latrommi eseht esuoh llahs
ytinrete ni taht sllaw eht esiar" The orb flew into the air, and then started to
glow brightly. The edges of a square of ground the size of half a football
field started glow as well, the area inside the square changed into a black
vortex. Loud rumbling filled the air as a large building floated out of the
vortex, filling in the ground. The building's walls and roof were made of
white and black swirled marble, with the walls having a emerald studded
silver border on top, and a ruby studded gold border on the bottom. A gray
stone pathway ran from Kai's feet the door, going through the black metal
gate that opened the black metal fence that ran around the tomb. It had two
large stained glass windows on each side, one depicting a crouching tiger,
the other a phoenix with outstretched wings. A huge platinum door etched
with a wing on each side, the left side was an angel wing, its outline being
inlaid with opal. The other's outline, being a phoenix demon wing, was
inlaid with onyx and ruby. Picking up Rei, he walked down the path
through the gate. Stopping near the large doors, he gently set Rei down
again and took a silver beyblade out of his sash with his right hand. With
his left, he took a golden beyblade out of his pocket. Holding them up, a red
beam shone from the golden beyblade, forming a giant phoenix statue to his
left, made of black marble (no it is not dark Dranzer it just had to be black
to go with the theme.) with large glinting garnet eyes, and on its
outstretched wings were gold and ruby feathers. The beam from the
beyblade to the right formed a into a statue of a crouching white marble
tiger, with shining amber eyes and emerald strips. Coming alive, they
turned to face the one that had awoken them. "Guard this tomb well. Let no
soul who is not I or the one in my arms ever cross the other side of this
door. You know what then even he and I must say, and when he or I
come, we will say it." These creatures then bowed to their Master, silver
claws and golden talons outstretched. Kai then picked up Rei again gently,
and resumed walking to the huge doors that automatically opened by
themselves when he came near, closing by themselves when he passed
through. When he walked in, it was dark. "Feuer Frei." In an instant,
hundreds of lit white, dark green, crimson, and black candles were floating
around, shedding light on the tombs large interior. To the center left, was a
black and crimson swirled marble box, with gold edges inlaid with ruby
flames. To its right, was a white and dark green marble box, edged with
silver inlaid with emerald feathers. Walking over to the box on his right, he
laid Rei in it, on a cushion of light. He placed Rei's bound hair on his left
shoulder, and changed his wrist guards to white bandages, from his wrists to
his elbow. He placed a hand slightly above Rei, then ran it down his body,
his hand still slightly above his lover. He took in everything, from his raven
hair to his embroidered white outfit, to his white slippers. Kai crossed Rei's
arms over his chest, placing on his heart a silver beyblade with a very sharp
attack ring, its jagged edges accented with diamond chips to increase
damage. Its bit glowed a dark green when it was placed on Rei's heart.
Bringing his hand back, he leaned down and kissed Rei's lips one last time,
placing a hand on Rei's forehead. "Yllanrete mrof siht ni niamer" he spoke,
removing his hand as a shimmering piece of glass formed over Rei. "Don't
worry, I will get you your revenge..." he murmured, running a hand along
the glass. "So I will be gone for a little bit, but I will be back later, alright?
So sleep well, my Kitten, as we will soon be together again, this time for all
eternity." He walked to an alter at the north of the coffins, where two small
boxes stood, one gold, the other silver. Opening the golden one, he brought
out two twin pistols made of black gunmetal, with golden flame details and
blood stained triggers, depicted golden phoenixes, their fiery garnet eyes
aiming, golden beaks open to fire deadly bullets. He then walked out of the
tomb. Kai, once he was out, as he put one of the guns each into holsters on
his upper thighs, put on his black glasses, and adjusted his jacket, smirked
evilly. "Well, like I always say, nothing accents the leather trench coat like
automatic weaponry." He then grinned, fangs showing. "And it's now time
for me to go grill me some Voltass!"
-----------------------------------END-FLASHBACK-------------- ----------------
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????
Well? You like? I don't think this came out the way I meant it. And yes, I know something's are different from the first chapter's description, but bear with me here. The first chapter's description was just to give you a basic idea. And the flashback is now over, so the Voltaire torture will soon begin!