Hey there, Yuzuki back. Well, first of all, I'd like to thank all of you who reviewed my fic, it makes me happy and I'm glad you like it so far. So here are my comments:
candy-mog: I know Riku usually plays the heartthrob so I decided to try it out. And about the plot, well it sorta as that "You-think-I-hate-you-but-I-will-never-tell-you-I-love-you" type of thing in it...well, sorta...anyway, thanks for the review.
trekken46: I'm glad you think it was amazing and I hope this chapter is just the same. Thank you for the review.
Lorok: Um..what can I say? I don't know if it will make it so far that it will be good, but I atleast hope that it makes it somewhere Thanks for your review.
zilly: Here's the next chapter for you to see what happens, enjoy! thanks for the review.
Lvkishugs: Hi Lvkishugs! Well It wasn't meant to be sweet in an 'Aw' way, actually...I don't know what it was meant to be like :P And just as you said, I also hope my fic doesn't turn out bad, we'll just have to see. I'll try to keep up the good work and thanks for the review.
hikari15candals: You really think it's original? Glad you liked it, hope you like this chapter too. Thanks for the review.
Summary: He loved her, but never told. She hates him...or does she? Its up to them, to face themselves and see what happens to these shattered hearts. SK
Shattered hearts :: Chapter Two
She frowned, looking up at the star-filled sky would always make her frown in sadness, no matter how beautiful it was, no matter how much she wanted to smile as she look up at it, she would never be able to knowing it reminded her of him.
One look at him and she would go weak in the knees, but she knew he hated her. Afraid of being rejected, she pretended to hate him also...and like most of the girls who didn't have boyfriends, she 'liked' Riku, but really, it was all just a game to keep her heart from breaking.
She didn't love Riku, it was Sora who her heart had chosen, not the one she had to like. Yet it was too painful for her to tell him, no matter how much she wanted to, no matter how much her heart told her to, she would never do so...
Kairi sat up from her position on her window sill, smoothing out her baby blue pajama's which were a bit too big for her. Throwing herself on her bed she closed her eyes, not wanting to think of anything, just whishing she was able to fall asleep. She lost and opened her eyes, only to have them trail to her computer.
She blinked, and got up moving from her bed to sitting down in her chair. She then realized she left her computer on for a while now and without realizing it, she had e-mail.
There wasn't much, just some junk she didn't care for and one from Selphie with the subject of Are you hiding something from me????.
It read:
Hey Kairi. How's it going? I've been meaning to ask you, since I know you won't tell me yourself: You really don't like Riku do you? You're hiding something...I just wish you would tell me. Is there someone else you like? I've seen the way you look at Sora, is it him? Come on! TELL MEEEEEE!!!!! PLEASE?!?! :(
Kairi smiled, and just when she thought Selphie was being serious for once. It was true, Selphie had no idea Kairi even liked Sora in that way, but she had a right to know....
To: HyPerGIrl13
From: PaopuAngel
Subject: RE: Are you hiding something from me????
Do you really wanna know that badly? Well ok, I'll tell you. I was hiding this from you because I didn't want anyone to know...I don't really like Riku. And yeah, you're right, it is Sora that I like, but don't tell ANYONE!! You got that? :-) You know he hates me, so I just have to hate him too...
She clicked send and just sat there, wondering if it was a good idea to tell Selphie of all people. She was a good friend, but she wasn't exactly good at keeping secrets...
Kairi sat there, wondering when she would get a reply, hoping that Selphie wasn't online, or that would mean annoyance for her.
To her dismay, Selphie's reply came rather quickly. Which meant on thing: She was online. She didn't have to read the e-mail, an instant message followed right after it.
HyPerGiRl13: Kairi! :-) You like Sora? I knew it!
She had no idea what to do, if she didn't reply, that would mean Selphie would do anything to annoy her into answering, knowing she was also online. So she decided to answer...
PaopuAngel: Selphie!!! If you were to actually yell that out, the whole world would hear, keep it quiet! :(
It wasn't exactly a hello in her case, but she didn't care. Selphie was probably too excited about nothing to care anyway.
HyPerGiRl13: Hehe Sorry, sooooo, you think you're ever gonna tell him? Huh? Huh? Are ya?
This was Selphie for you, always so energetic no matter what.
PaopuAngel: Why are you even asking that!? You know I can't, he hates me. That's why I have to pretend to hate him to or just live the rest of my life in misery...Listen, I have to go, see you at school tomorrow.
HyPerGiRl13: Awww :( Well...ok, see then!
PaopuAngel has signed off at 10:37 PM
Getting offline, she sighed, tomorrow Selphie would ask her all these questions that she wouldn't want to answer. And she would see Sora, the one who made her go weak on the inside.
She turned off her computer, and just sat on her chair for a while. Yawning, she got off her chair and jumped on her bed. Grabbing a pillow, she let sleep take her.
"Riku, get it straight, I'm not ever going to tell her what I feel for her, she hates me" Sora and Riku were walking to school, Sora trying to keep his mind off of Kairi, Riku just bringing her up once in a while.
"But what if she doesn't hate you? What if it's all just a faze? You never know, she might just as well like you as much as you do her." he reasoned, his hands in his pockets.
"Weren't you the one that said I should just forget about her and move on?" Sora asked, not really needing an answer. "Riku!" They turned to see a group of horrid fan girls and Riku stopped dead and his tracks.
Luckily there were only about five. Selphie and Kairi, among them. Sora Blushed lightly, to him, she was the most beautiful girl in the world, no one could compare. Her crystal blue eyes slowly moved to him and they stood there in silence, staring at each other, while all the other girls went crazy over Riku.
They glared at each other, both of them putting on there I hate you act, to mask they're feelings.
He broke eye contact with her, "Riku, hurry up and deal with your groupies, I'm going ahead" he said, his tone as angry as he could make it without actually being angry in the first place.
Riku said nothing, trying to avoid the fan girls.
Sora didn't care, all he hoped for right now was that he didn't hurt his own feelings, which he wasn't even sure of.
Kairi hadn't meant to get him so mad, that glare he had given her had surprised her.
Sure he wasn't one to smile at her but still...in fact, know that she thought of it...she had never seen him smile.
His eyes were so cold...yet so sad, It got her wondering. Because as much as she though she knew him, she didn't really know him at all...
And yet, maybe there was something he was hiding, something...that kept him from smiling.
And she wished that one day, if things were ever to change between them, that one day, she would be able to see his smile.
I'm sorry if the chapter was short...I kind of have writers block you could say, and I'm not sure this chapter turned out for the best, but I kinda liked it. Well, I have good news for SoraXKairi supporters...well, at least I hope that it's good news, lol.
I started a SXK website, called "Shattered Hearts" Lol. It's a small shrine to them. Once it's done, I'll post the URL on my profile and in the end of a chapter and I hope you'll come and visit. But for now, I'm still working on it. Well, that was the next chapter, I hope you liked it, please read and review. The next chapter will be up sooner...I hope, till then, Ja Ne!
- Yuzuki
