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To answer to Xel Chan's question: yes I am going to add some chapters as you can see, perhaps 3 or 4 I don't know exactly how I am going to do this.
I hope I will not make big mistakes of grammar. I am already correcting the first chapter because when I reread it, I saw some mistakes!
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Even my life? I don't think the boss is so cruel...
Yes, and I am right...I can perfectly see her staring at me with some pity in her beautiful eyes. She is also a tad afraid because, I know it and she knows it too, we are going to die. This creature is too strong...and they are losing.
Perfectly...well, this isn't really the right word.
I have lost blood and my sight is a little foggy...weird...
I must not faint...I must keep talking...
We were in the temple and we moved in direction of the old chamber of the Faith...
We hadn't entered the chamber yet that we heard a great noise.
It was...not a fiend but a strange creature... a tall and godly woman covered by ice.
Her hair and her eyes were blue. It emitted a godly and cold aura.
How weird...Bless be this aeon and the cold...I don't feel my wound anymore...Good.
I guess it is the ancient aeon of the temple. In fact, it is certainly the ghost or the memory of the aeon because there are plenty of pyreflies which fly around it. The pyreflies had kept the physical appearance of the aeon. So did the strength...
How weird...Bless be this aeon and the cold...I don't feel my wound anymore.
The creature was incredibly strong and Ormi, the boss and I were quite tired.
Our attacks were useless against the iced shield of the Aeon.
She (can I really say "she"?) was attacking with violent and cold wind which froze our bodies.
Then, it arrived...
The creature was concentrated , preparing a magical attack and , like an idiot, I though I could attack it...I was trying to make my Russian roulette, letting my chest without the protection of my guns or one of my arms while I was looking for some deadly bullet...
The Aeon attacked...
It was a kind of iced sword, pretty well made which was now through my chest.
I had been thrown away by the attack's power and I crushed lamentably on the closest wall.
Then, I felt myself slid slowly on the floor, my back still against the wall, unable to stand up...
Well, that's where I am now...This is about 10 minutes that I am telling my story...I cannot see my blood flow but I guess my wound is pretty serious...
The sword of ice is still in my chest but I can fell it melting...that's why I don't really suffer, because the cold is freezing my body.
The boss and Ormi are still fighting, they didn't make the same mistake...but I guess they are not going to last for long...I can't move...I can't help them...
Shit... (This is probably the first time in the whole year)...I don't have anything in mind which can keep me conscious...
I...I...am fainting...
The Gullwings...First time I am happy to see...them...
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How is this chapter? Review please....
For the sword of ice in Logos' chest, if you don't have any ideas on what it can look like, it is pretty like Edea's attack at the end of the first CD of Final Fantasy 8, when she is throwing some ice at Squall...
Plenty of reviews please!