The Feared One
Hello everyone! Sorry that it took me so long in updating the story. First day of classes just rendered me speechless, or what they call writer's block. Finally it has worn off and my fingers are alive and typing again! Anyway, thanks to all those who reviewed! You just inspire me to write more! Thank you soooo much!!! Please keep on reviewing! This writer readily accepts suggestions, flames and comments! Anywayz! R and R please! (
She was about to reply when the door swung open, revealing the smug form of Enishi; his eyes pinned on her behind the spectacles he wore. His hands brushed through his white disheveled hair, and his lips turned up into a small smirk... from then on, she knew that she hated him... there was something in his stance that prove to be overly annoying...
"I see you're awake" he drawled as he started to walk towards her
"I wouldn't come too close if I were you... my hunger earlier has not yet been satisfied, and even in this normal form it can come to a point that my hold on it would break..." she warned, her eyes which was a mixture of blues and reds narrowed on his neck
"I wouldn't mind at all" he continued to walk forward
Battousai's tolerance for his brother-in-law has come to an end, his mind making up pictures as to how to kill the man. He didn't like the way he walked towards Kaoru, or the look of his eyes. His eyes gleamed death as he finally stepped forward, his amber gaze lock unto his target, as his fingers itched to pull out his blade and slice the bastard in two.
"Stop right there, Enishi, if you don't want to be gutted right here" his voice dripped of blood, and he wanted to draw it right then
"My, my! Protective aren't we? She even isn't yours yet" it was dryly said
He couldn't hold the growl that emanated from his throat. It was true he hasn't taken her, but any bloody fool could see that she already belonged to him.
"Touchy touchy!" Enishi commented, a sadistic smile formed his lips
Kaoru wasn't just going to stand there and fight over her like she was some toy to win in the battle.
"I am not his, nor will I be yours as well... surprised? You forget that royalty have strong mental powers, and mind reading is one of the things I could do... and yours isn't that hard to read" she remarked, it was her turn to smile, it was true the man wasn't that smart nor does he have any strong mental ability...
"Shut up, woman!" Enishi was fuming in embarrassment; no woman has ever humiliated him as much as she had done stating his state of mind...
"How dare you tell me to shut up, mortal!" she began, losing her temper once again
Kenshin had to give it to her she had guts! And that made him want her much more than he did before... he always preferred them feisty and here was the woman who just fitted every single dream detail he had in mind... he had to claim her, and soon!
"It is not about being Mortal, it is in the point that I am right now, superior in strength" it was a bold statement, and a very dumb one
"Stronger?! Are you mocking my skills?" she was seeing red by then, her fangs grew longer, showing through her lips...
"Yes, stronger! You wouldn't be here, captured by the so called man slayer if you weren't so weak"
Her hands were begging for blood, and she was about to give into the urge to kill the man...
Kenshin was watching the spectacle, his amusement growing with his woman's anger... Enishi hasn't has long to live, with the pace he's traveling... by the night is true his blood would have spilt the ground... and sadistically, he would love to see that.
"I may have been defeated, and the reason for that is because an even stronger rival has defeated me... but I hope you have dug your grave... because you will lose"
"Lose? I don't plan to... it might be you who will be begging for your life when I'm through with you"
Those words triggered her rage and it spilt forth, in a blink she was behind him, her arms wrapped around his neck, as a claw sliced a slit on his throat... her tongue lashed out to taste the blood... but one drop of blood had been enough to see a lifetime...
Enishi's life as a boy ran through her... she had seen every detail like she had lived it herself... then, their was Tomoe... she tried to shut out the next memories, but they came, the love of Kenshin through the eyes of the man that hated him... it was intoxicating... and it filled her with the hatred that he had felt...
She pulled away, shaking her head, trying to fight away the images... She let go of him, and slowly walked backwards...
Night had come, and the darkness covered her retreating form...
Kenshin snapped out of his trance, stalking towards Kaoru...
He captured her hands and she looked at him...
"What did you see? What did you feel?" he asked, curious yet afraid of the reply...
She looked at him, her eyes solemn...
"You loved that woman, didn't you? You love her so much, you separated them..."
"I had to... Enishi was beginning to get out of hand, his feelings were too intense for Tomoe to handle... she felt the pain of her brother, so I had to take her" he explained, his face turned down...
"So that was why he hated you so much... you took away the woman he loved most of all..." she then fell, faint in his arms...
What do you think? Tell me! Please! Please! Please!! Sorry for those who love Enishi, I really made him look bad here! Sorry! Please tell me what you think, reviews are most welcome! You know that!
Hello everyone! Sorry that it took me so long in updating the story. First day of classes just rendered me speechless, or what they call writer's block. Finally it has worn off and my fingers are alive and typing again! Anyway, thanks to all those who reviewed! You just inspire me to write more! Thank you soooo much!!! Please keep on reviewing! This writer readily accepts suggestions, flames and comments! Anywayz! R and R please! (
She was about to reply when the door swung open, revealing the smug form of Enishi; his eyes pinned on her behind the spectacles he wore. His hands brushed through his white disheveled hair, and his lips turned up into a small smirk... from then on, she knew that she hated him... there was something in his stance that prove to be overly annoying...
"I see you're awake" he drawled as he started to walk towards her
"I wouldn't come too close if I were you... my hunger earlier has not yet been satisfied, and even in this normal form it can come to a point that my hold on it would break..." she warned, her eyes which was a mixture of blues and reds narrowed on his neck
"I wouldn't mind at all" he continued to walk forward
Battousai's tolerance for his brother-in-law has come to an end, his mind making up pictures as to how to kill the man. He didn't like the way he walked towards Kaoru, or the look of his eyes. His eyes gleamed death as he finally stepped forward, his amber gaze lock unto his target, as his fingers itched to pull out his blade and slice the bastard in two.
"Stop right there, Enishi, if you don't want to be gutted right here" his voice dripped of blood, and he wanted to draw it right then
"My, my! Protective aren't we? She even isn't yours yet" it was dryly said
He couldn't hold the growl that emanated from his throat. It was true he hasn't taken her, but any bloody fool could see that she already belonged to him.
"Touchy touchy!" Enishi commented, a sadistic smile formed his lips
Kaoru wasn't just going to stand there and fight over her like she was some toy to win in the battle.
"I am not his, nor will I be yours as well... surprised? You forget that royalty have strong mental powers, and mind reading is one of the things I could do... and yours isn't that hard to read" she remarked, it was her turn to smile, it was true the man wasn't that smart nor does he have any strong mental ability...
"Shut up, woman!" Enishi was fuming in embarrassment; no woman has ever humiliated him as much as she had done stating his state of mind...
"How dare you tell me to shut up, mortal!" she began, losing her temper once again
Kenshin had to give it to her she had guts! And that made him want her much more than he did before... he always preferred them feisty and here was the woman who just fitted every single dream detail he had in mind... he had to claim her, and soon!
"It is not about being Mortal, it is in the point that I am right now, superior in strength" it was a bold statement, and a very dumb one
"Stronger?! Are you mocking my skills?" she was seeing red by then, her fangs grew longer, showing through her lips...
"Yes, stronger! You wouldn't be here, captured by the so called man slayer if you weren't so weak"
Her hands were begging for blood, and she was about to give into the urge to kill the man...
Kenshin was watching the spectacle, his amusement growing with his woman's anger... Enishi hasn't has long to live, with the pace he's traveling... by the night is true his blood would have spilt the ground... and sadistically, he would love to see that.
"I may have been defeated, and the reason for that is because an even stronger rival has defeated me... but I hope you have dug your grave... because you will lose"
"Lose? I don't plan to... it might be you who will be begging for your life when I'm through with you"
Those words triggered her rage and it spilt forth, in a blink she was behind him, her arms wrapped around his neck, as a claw sliced a slit on his throat... her tongue lashed out to taste the blood... but one drop of blood had been enough to see a lifetime...
Enishi's life as a boy ran through her... she had seen every detail like she had lived it herself... then, their was Tomoe... she tried to shut out the next memories, but they came, the love of Kenshin through the eyes of the man that hated him... it was intoxicating... and it filled her with the hatred that he had felt...
She pulled away, shaking her head, trying to fight away the images... She let go of him, and slowly walked backwards...
Night had come, and the darkness covered her retreating form...
Kenshin snapped out of his trance, stalking towards Kaoru...
He captured her hands and she looked at him...
"What did you see? What did you feel?" he asked, curious yet afraid of the reply...
She looked at him, her eyes solemn...
"You loved that woman, didn't you? You love her so much, you separated them..."
"I had to... Enishi was beginning to get out of hand, his feelings were too intense for Tomoe to handle... she felt the pain of her brother, so I had to take her" he explained, his face turned down...
"So that was why he hated you so much... you took away the woman he loved most of all..." she then fell, faint in his arms...
What do you think? Tell me! Please! Please! Please!! Sorry for those who love Enishi, I really made him look bad here! Sorry! Please tell me what you think, reviews are most welcome! You know that!